
Knight Administrator
侠客管理员
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.4M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The main character's IQ is worrisome and it makes me feel embarrassed.
It's a mess, with no main line, and everything comes out one by one.
The protagonist is too ugly and wretched, and has no sense of empathy.
The character design of martial arts is okay, but the character design of the protagonist and the plot are a mess, and I can't stand it. There are too many poisonous points, and it's normal for me to get angry.
It's a very good book, but the author, don't you think the tigress you wrote is disgusting? I don't know if other people find it funny, but it gives me the impression that this person is mentally ill! If someone really did this to me in real life, I would immediately turn against him.
This novel is extremely toxic. The protagonist is mentally retarded. Goodbye.
I don't know why I feel like I can't stand it anymore and I don't feel any better.
I just want to ask the protagonist if he is doing this to the country and doesn't care? Can it be logical? Orjustdon't write about social issues
When I first read it, I personally felt that it might be better if the beginning was slightly modified, after all, the protagonist was described at the beginning. . Not to the liking of many current readers.
Oh, it turns out the protagonist is a fat pig
Put the protagonist in a house and collect it?
I want to ask when the protagonist ate the heroine
What does this book say? The protagonist is a eunuch, and it took more than 400 chapters to kiss her on the face, but not even on the lips. Then the protagonist is a fool, sometimes he is smart, and sometimes he is a fool who forces the plot forward. Then the protagonist was too frustrated and was criticized at every turn. Being looked down upon by others. Like a doormat.
You can basically read this book with free coins. To be honest, it would be much better if the author cut off three-quarters of the dialogue and replaced it with narrative and description.
The update is so slow, it took me several days to read a single page. Could it be that the author wanted to write now? I hope the pace of writing in the early stages won't be too slow and the span in the later stages won't be too big. If I keep the same pace as now, I probably won't be able to finish a few thousand chapters. Come on, work hard, Mr.
I have some personal opinions and I hope the author can adopt them.
First, there are not enough martial arts characters. So far, there are only seven, (taking Zhang Xiaohua's First Chaos as a reference), which is slightly less. Second, all the people who come to Fatty's house are positive characters. I personally hope that there will be some evil ones, such as Huang Yaoshi, Wanwan, the darkened version of Zhou Zhiruo... This will be more interesting. Well, that's it for now. I hope the author can refer to it.
Finally rescued A'Zhu, the cattle and sheep beyond the Great Wall finally kept their promise, and sent two recommendations
Mudd, from the beginning to Chapter 25, I didn't feel any fun at all. Did the author just write what he wanted to write, completely ignoring the readers' reading experience? It makes me feel angry
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Happy New Year and all the best!
Why haven't you signed the contract yet?
It's the New Year these days, and I can't find my 40-meter knife, otherwise I would have sprayed it long ago.
To be honest, this book is pretty good, I'll wait until I get fatter before killing it.
The author, I read your book, and I feel that there are similarities in your recent chapters, from the time you found Xiao Feng, to the sermons you gave on the road. To sum up, don't let them act casually, have a direction, solve the household registration problem first, and then do other things. Talk about things well, and they can be solved in a few sentences, but it feels like too much nonsense to me.
This book is good, but I only have one major issue and two minor issues right now.
The author himself doesn't think that these ancient heroes have adapted to modern life too quickly... Remember, even if Xiao Feng and Xiao Longnu were the earliest ones to travel through time, it only took two months for them to arrive, right? 😅I really don't believe that these ancient people could adapt to modern life in such a short time. Besides, it's okay to save someone with a name. Why would those cannon fodders from the Tiandihui who don't even have names save him? Is it because the protagonist's house is not crowded enough? 🤫 There are so many heroes living in the family, but the protagonist is not actively learning martial arts. I think this is really inconsistent with normal people's psychology - the protagonist is still a fat man now, right? From the perspective of body shape, I think the most suitable thing for the protagonist to learn is actually Toad Kung Fu 🤭