Prehistoric Zichen Road

The first few tens of thousands words of a new book are very important. How many readers a book has will depend on how many readers the first few thousand words can attract. (Unless you are a great god with a halo,) Don't be too complicated, don't have too many details, don't let the supporting characters steal too much drama in the golden period. You must consider the protagonist's sense of substitution, attract people, and make people sink in. Let's not talk anymore. As a long-time bookworm, my advice is not to comment if you don't like it.

The peach blossom eyes were already poisonous when they appeared, and now the consciousness of Ziwei star appears, haha, is he a disguised grandfather?

Keep them on the shelves first and then kill them. I hope this book won't be a eunuch. Make a good outline, especially the character of the protagonist. If you have a good outline, if the writing is not bad, it will not go anywhere even if it collapses. After reading your previous book and these few pictures, I feel that your character development is very lacking. The protagonist is incompletely portrayed, and the supporting characters can be said to be frequent passers-by. In particular: the character of the protagonist, as well as character traits, concepts of life, outlook on life, world view, hobbies, background, what he is good at, and the crisis and goal process, and what needs to be shaped. He is a vivid and three-dimensional character, and cannot be just a name, and cannot be written casually. In your storyline, make the characters vivid and three-dimensional and make people remember them, even if they are supporting characters.

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What's the point of wanting to see two girlfriends again?

The author's explanation for fighting for a seat in Zixiao Palace is worse than not explaining it. Shameless is shameless. The two Westerners grabbed the seat because of their ability. The seat may be destined to them. They used bandits to take Kunpeng's seat. No matter how many reasons there are, if you do it, you will do it, and explaining it will only make people sick. Just like the ancient foreigners who robbed the Han people, no matter how many reasons they had, they were indeed robbers. The prehistoric era is cruel, but why don't other powerful people do that? Why can Hongyun give up his seat to others? He doesn't know which seat is good? He knew that Hongyun could be called stupid, but he was the real kind person. The two people in the West are like robbers and liars, robbing others and becoming big winners in the end. But no matter what, shamelessness is shamelessness. The author's explanation is simply disgusting.

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The first part of the introduction attracted me, but the next few sentences changed my mind. I felt something, but this book is indeed worth reading.

There is a Zichen Road in Zhengzhou...

This chapter is well written, concise and concise yet full of surprises🤭🤭🤭

What I want to ask is, since he is the master of Ziweixing, why does he still have the consciousness of Ziweixing?

Awesome, your sister should be the one born from a star, but what are your settings? Killing a sister is the way to prove it, and the emperor star should be a man. Besides, you are the star master and you should be the consciousness of the planet. Why is there another little loli? If she is a star consciousness, you will not be a star master.

In this way, when I ask for leave, I am almost like a eunuch, and when I ask for leave, I am asking for it. .

The character of the protagonist is really bad. The dragon clan has no ill intentions at all. He gets angry when he is invited to visit, and even crushes the soldiers to death with coercion.