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This book is written by children for children! I bet this kid is no older than 18! The logical thinking of what you write cannot resonate with adults! Eunuchs are a must!

The reputation was full of embarrassment, and a strong air of pretense came over my face, hey...

There is a strong feeling of seeing Zhao Ritian and Ye Liangchen. Whatever happens to me, Ye Liangchen, I, Zhao Ritian, am convinced. . Very embarrassing.

The protagonist's IQ is not even online, let alone the supporting characters and passers-by. . . Very poisonous

After walking through Qiyu and becoming stronger, why don't you do this? Is the main character poor? Is the protagonist suffering from a terminal illness? None, why are you so anxious to improve your strength? Isn't it good to be upright? Don't say anything about the Holy Mother or being pretentious. For example, learn some wood magic and medical skills to save people, or learn the Yin and Yang Bagua to tell fortunes. Once you get to the first level, you will be invulnerable and have the power of a thousand gold! Is it necessary to be in such a hurry? ? ? ? ?

It's so toxic that I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters.

It's so addictive that I can't stop watching it. It's just like a stage play, with exaggerated and imbecile supporting characters, and all kinds of magical logic forced into the plot.

Would I say that I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction? In an urban novel, the protagonist cultivates immortality. What the protagonist can do is to pretend to be a slap in the face, or forcefully raise the upper limit of the earth, or write about the forces of the universe, but few authors have this kind of writing style.

Why do I always feel like I'm trying to show off when I read these chapters? I, Chen Bailu, feel very embarrassed. Your pretending to be awesome is too stiff...

I hope there won't be any bloody plot

In the first chapter, the protagonist exchanges the longevity golden lock his mother made for him for gold finger currency. The author's description is: Three taels of gold, worth nearly 50,000 yuan, may be a huge amount of wealth for ordinary people, but for Chen Bailu (the protagonist), he can't afford this small amount of money. ? ? ? Did you just give the forum something that was specially made for you when you were a child? Is this how the value of this golden lock is measured? It's not that the author didn't write well, but I was very surprised when I saw this. Maybe you want to write a protagonist with the same values ​​as the previous Colonel Chu? If that's the case, that's fine, but don't end up seeing a woman who can't run away anymore. This is inconsistent with the image created by the author. I will send the blade 🙂

First of all, the gambling scene where you win millions at once is not something a wise man would do, it would be too conspicuous! If you take your time for an hour, no one will notice. Secondly, Song San took advantage of him and got a little benefit but prevented his disaster. You accepted this hatred but took advantage of Song San. Why bother? Just to show off?

The poison recedes. . Read Chapter 45,. . . Goldfinger is not very creative, but I can watch it. Damn, all kinds of classmates and teachers want to slap the face of the plot. I really can't get rid of the goosebumps.

With a little bit of ability, the first thing you do is to find an excuse to confront the country to show your ability? Cultivation of immortals can obviously improve one's own strength calmly and easily. There is obviously no excuse to do it. You have to forcefully find some excuses and find ways to cause conflicts and national confrontation. Only then can you show your ability? There are so many novels with so many plots in Qidian. Which one doesn't try its best to avoid this kind of minefield, and doesn't others also write successfully? Why do you insist on seeking death to show that you are different when you are here? It's very interesting? If you don't write this plot, there will be nothing to write about, right?

I, Shennong, have tasted this herb and confirmed that it is a poisonous weed.

So talented! The powerful magical power of the Bull Demon is a cultivation method! The word "Niu" is just a word.

I drank this cup of poison😭 By the way, gold can be exchanged for forum points. It's okay if you buy less. If you buy 100 kilograms of gold, someone will definitely check it. Also, your ghost can move things through walls. Isn't it okay to find some foreign gold shops and banks and rob two handfuls? If I had a forum, I would definitely do this. Also, every time I exchange it, it reminds me that gold is five elements gold. Is it only gold that can be exchanged? Can't find other exchanges? Also, the forum is full of other people selling things and knowledge, but you can't sell it? The earth is so big, there must be something that can be sold. For example, grenades, white phosphorus grenades, drugs, or something more evil, customized special ghosts. People who die on a cloudy year and a cloudy day can definitely go to places like Japan, Vietnam, the United States, and Russia, or sell special steel. Maybe you say that cultivators have good steel, but do they have the capacity to produce it? Don't think that the surveillance camera can't capture you. Don't think that the police are just fools.

I was so excited about the last video of Yang Yongsheng. It turned out that I was not the only one who thought this way. I had this idea in my mind. All the people who were re-educated in the treatment room No. 13 Drove into the yamen in a tanker truck, drove into the hospital, lit it, and captured all the relatives of the nine Yang Yongsheng clans. They were first treated by Professor Yang, and then put in a secret room to see who could survive to the end. I don't know if I'm a bad person, but when I saw that news, the malice in my heart kept coming. The world is filthy again...

I wonder if the author will appear other cultivators in the city for the sake of water word count?

It's better to change the name of Sanjiang Bang to Eunuch Bang.

The efficiency of using black money to steal money can directly sneak into the treasury and suck up all the gold. Thousands of tons of gold can be sucked in, making him invincible.

Shennong has tasted the fairy grass! Fellow Taoists, come and watch!

He is not good at reading, he has no distinction between right and wrong, and he is arrogant. The teacher is afraid that he will go astray, so he tries to persuade him with good words. He is still pretending to be a b, and he says something coldly, completely indifferent to right from wrong. I have just started cultivating, and I don't even pay attention to the underworld. Where did the confidence come from? Currently, I am a disaster that can be knocked down with one shot. I am still pretending to be a b. In the future, if I am successful in cultivation, it will not be a day and night. This protagonist is like one of those villains in apocalyptic novels. Once he has some strength, he will dominate and will be eliminated sooner or later 😤

I blame the readers for being blocked because I committed suicide...

Suddenly I discovered that this book has been spoiled by me again. There are trolls everywhere. Why is no one deleting book reviews or banning them now? It took me more than a year to raise my level 19 account. I was banned from the entire network just because I made a few complaints. How come there are so many trolls now and no one cares about them? Do you dislike the author? I didn't curse anyone, I didn't criticize the author, and I didn't criticize Qidian. I just complained a few words about Jin Yong's lawsuit against Jiangnan. It's been more than a year and now I can only post book reviews through a small account. I really want to say mmp to Dian Niang. I did the same thing. When I clicked on the app store, I gave Dian Niang a one-star rating. When I clicked on it, I got a bad review. Although it's useless.

Haha, I started looking a little good. I see there are too few chapters. The author's last book after me was a eunuch again. Fortunately I didn't watch it

The writing is very good. I hope to return. I have been resting for a month, so let's read it! Come on

Haha, some people who only watch pirated copies are not qualified to say whether it is poisonous or not. If you don't watch it, I'm sorry if someone does.

I was speechless about this novel. When the teacher saw a box given to him by the Black Society members, he said it was a firearm and wanted to forcefully open it to see if there was such a person. His thinking was so fast. What did he mean by writing this paragraph? Is he digging a hole or filling a hole? I was completely confused.

Isn't it about the end of Dharma? I feel like there are a lot of wild golden elixirs and Yuanying.