Time and Space Divine Jade

After all, the Zhuxian Sword Formation is not the Zhuxian Formation. Even though the names of the four swords are the same, the names of the formations are one word different, but the power is completely different. Is the Four Immortal Swords of the Primordial Tongtian Cult Leader the Immortal Killing Formation? Isn't it the Zhuxian Sword Formation?

I think realistically it would be better for you to write some. Maybe the book I mentioned is useless, but you can try the next one. Reality, don't be so crooked and weird, just be ordinary. Even if there is, it is best to use a routine that is similar to the second dimension and is relatively low-level martial arts but not martial arts. I know you can just say that he traveled once to a parallel city and got an artifact that can travel through the heavens. Of course, even if you travel through this place, don't go too far beyond your imagination. Then when the cue ball is stronger, come back and show off. Install a big one all at once. But don't talk about teaching modern people how to practice. These are the most poisonous and discouraging. The plot doesn't require too much, just a dozen chapters is enough. And don't dig too big a hole in reality. Anyone who is a bookworm will basically be bored. Without reviving spiritual energy, of course it is best to only travel two or three times and be basically invincible in reality.

Why do we always accept the protagonist as our apprentice?,,,,

🤓 The author has a good attitude, and I will definitely support it.

Shengmubiao, naive, low IQ, stupid, lustful, unable to walk when seeing a woman, nosy,

Brother... The real world routine is too old... In addition, returning to reality to weaken it is more poisonous... 🤫 You know, there can't be so many **** in the world to slap you in the face...

The protagonist will not return to the main world? ? ? Aren't you tired from traveling non-stop? The protagonist is not tired, but the reader is tired. . A diplomat who can travel through time. . The writing is good. At the end of each world, there will be a dozen or twenty chapters about the experience, life, and happenings in the main world. The time travel is non-stop. Reading time travel is really tiring. .

The protagonist's character is too diaosi, indecisive, womanly, nosy, shengmubiao, extremely childish,

I have read that this book does not have a female protagonist. It mainly tells the story of the protagonist having sex with the protagonist from another dimension.

The writing is very messy and I can't understand it anyway. Just write a little here and a little there. Already abandoned the book

I lost interest after seeing the Zhetian Juan. If you dared to send Ye Fan away, why didn't you get slapped to death by a ruthless person?

It's so damn vicious. The No. 1 Player in the world robbed him of the opportunity to succeed. If you continue to pass on his 15 years of skill, the total would be 43 years. Then why are you robbing others of their opportunity? Be a ** and a memorial arch.

Can we stop pretending to be a slap in the face when it comes to real life? . . It's the same routine every time, I'm tired of it, it's better to be normal.

What do you say about this book? If you recruit a villain as a disciple, more people will probably read it, but there is no point in accepting a protagonist first.

It looks great, but I want to ask, where is the heroine? I didn't see Medusa's name later on, I think the protagonist had long forgotten it.

This kind of shuttle novel that started with martial arts and climbed up step by step is no longer fresh, unless the writing is super good, so just go to sleep

😅How did the number one in the world get in touch with the gold system? It's so easy for you to be beaten to death...

Those few chapters before it was released poisoned me.

Demon World Dragon Ball Demon Sword Chess of Life and Death

There is a book that is similar to this one. It has already written about the magic mobile phone. However, that book has a bit of a wrong outlook on murder and robbery, so I might as well give it up.

There is an elixir of immortality in mythology, but Mingyue has never seen it during the Qin Dynasty!

The writing style is a problem, the plot description is blunt, and the direction of the plot is obvious at a glance. I don't add any personal information, just put your own ideas in it.

In fact, you can write a movie version of Tianlongbabu, which seems to have teleportation and so on.

Author, as long as you update well and don't be too watery or too frivolous, I will still subscribe. Come on!

The book is good, support the author, follow your own path and let others say it

I support you, pay attention to the balance between work and rest, don't work too hard

Magic phone, magic phone, magic phone

Please, the author, please don't write "Grandmaster" or "How many years of internal energy" when writing. I can't even remember how many years of internal energy. Either always use 1️ flow, top, peerless, master, great master, golden elixir. . . This makes it easier to remember. .