Time Passes By

Blessings and support🙏

It reads like a physical book, and the story is told eloquently. I want to calm down and read it slowly, but I always feel that the plot of the story is very jumpy, and the transition from one story to the next is not good. For example, after the protagonist became the deputy squad leader, he wrote that the factory encountered inventory and Xia Mingli and others were delaying payment. Before he finished talking about how Director Zhao or the factory district solved the problem, he wrote that the protagonist changed workshops and so on.

Deepest blessings🙏