Extreme Murder

When I was in the third year of junior high school, the first book I came across was "The Black Law" by Brother Jiu. Later, Sin Eye, Forensic Medicine, White List, etc. Also followed along. Calculating the time, it must have been about six years. The reason why I chose to take the police academy exam later on, hehe, actually had some influence on this aspect. I hope Brother Jiu can go further and further in pursuing his dream of writing a book, and at the same time take good care of his body and stay safe and healthy. Come on Brother Jiu! ——A book lover who is not good at expressing😠

I couldn't stand it after reading 13% of the book... The suspense designed by the author is actually quite good, but as far as novels are concerned, it is necessary to start and break flat. You can't blindly set up suspense, just like a soprano singing higher and higher, flying to the sky and unable to come down. Of course, the reader will be breathless. What is the most important thing about writing a novel? Rhythm! Set up some suspense, resolve some suspense, and leave some suspense, so that readers will read with interest. What is the result of the author writing this? The protagonist's image is pale, and both cases are over. Apart from the word "yuppie", the impression left on me is that he is still in a fog. I can't see clearly, and I can't sketch his image in my mind. It will definitely be difficult to watch such a story. . . This is just for reference. The author's writing style is pretty good. I definitely couldn't write it. . . .

The character of Liu Qingqing is suitable for the rear, or not suitable for carrying undercover, infiltration and other operations. Although she is smart, her weaknesses are too obvious. She is easy to be impulsive due to justice and kindness. If someone does not take her with her, the start will be in vain.         ……n，？ Even if it is deleted directly and not used, it is better than using it like this. Fortunately, there are less of them later.                                                                                                                                                    I forgot which chapter, "Xu Zheng has been watching Fang Qi silently, especially fleetingly, with a trace of sadness on his face." This expression... Is the cloud of sadness Fang Qi's or Xu Zheng's? What is fleeting? This sentence can't be seen, and the expression is really weak, "Xu Zheng has been watching Fang Qi silently, and saw a flash of worry on his face." Fleeting is wrong to express facial expressions, and the structure of the whole sentence is messed up. After fleeting, it is directly messed up. "Xu Zheng has been watching Fang Qi silently, especially the fleeting flash of worry on his face." This expression is better than the original sentence. I'm not talking about nitpicking or anything like that. Sometimes a good book may be ruined in this way. The language may not be so refined or beautiful, but mistakes must be avoided.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing a dozen or so pictures, forcing a female college student who is a forensic scientist to go to the scene to arrest criminals in a criminal case. Is there something wrong with my mind? As a police officer, with such a highly intelligent leader, it would be ** to allow criminals to bury a large nest at the scene! It's obviously a crime novel, but it's written too loosely.

The poison caused death. This was too poisonous. Xu Zheng only needed help. Liu Qingqing was useful, but why did he have to take Liu Qingqing with him to catch the prisoner? I'm really confused about the character of the Crime Unit.

I feel like I've paid IQ tax and this membership card is useless 🙂🙂

I have finished reading it all at this moment. It took about a week. This book tells several stories, and the plots are quite tortuous. I can't just use the word "well written" to dismiss this book. I think it is as good as the complete works of Sherlock Holmes that I have read online (I read this book when I was a freshman), and now I read the comment area again, and some people said that the Ten Deadly Sins are more beautiful, eh , I am just expressing my personal opinion. When I was a freshman in high school, I borrowed one of the books from my classmates to read one of the Ten Deadly Sins. Although the plot is still online, some of the plots are too disgusting (it really made me feel a little disgusting). Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Please don't troll. Finally, I want to say that I read this book using the privilege of choosing one of the four best-selling works. Although I also voted for several recommendations during this period, I still feel a little sorry for this work. Therefore, I invest 500 points (I am still a college student with limited funds) and thank the author for bringing me this work. Thank you author!

The only one for members is suspense. It's so worthless. This damn piece of shit.

Some of them are incomprehensible and seem to be illogical.

The only suspense novel I have seen that requires a membership card to be free. I wonder if there are any others before?

The writing of this book is good, but the heroine really makes me unable to stand it. Even if you directly say that she is a doctor who was recruited at odd hours, I will believe it. As a forensic scientist who is a top student in the police academy, I can only say that the education in the police academy is an absolute failure. Not to mention all kinds of pretentious princess diseases, she also keeps making all kinds of stupid mistakes. Just like the silly and sweet heroines in the current anti-war dramas, the meaning of existence is to trick teammates and make a simple thing infinitely more difficult. I really can't stand it anymore.

Although I am somewhat interested in the plot, I really can't stand Liu Qingqing's character. . .

When Lao Wang left the city, he told his wife that the men in the village were quite bad and to ignore them while he was away. Lao Wang came back from the city today, and his wife told him that the men in the village are actually quite nice...

It stopped after reading two chapters, and it was still as crappy as before. I admire such an author who has made no progress at all after writing for n years.

I really can't like the heroine...

😏 I won the ball, come here to support Lao Jiu... Take good care of your body.

This book always seems to be missing a chapter, sometimes a few pictures, what's the matter? Are you copying from others and copying less?

Laojiu's book fans are all mature and cold-blooded, and most of them read books silently 😁 If you have any ideas, let's discuss them in the chapters... Get excited

? ? ? Have you finished writing the book? I have been so busy these past few months that I have no time to read it. When I started reading it, I realized that it was already finished...

4 Likes and favorites! Come on, author, write the next one! 4 Likes and favorites! Come on, author, write the next one! 4 Likes and favorites! Come on, author, write the next one! 4 Likes and favorites! Come on, author, write the next one!

The police don't feel good, they don't feel like police, they feel like detectives.

Can Brother Jiu record an audio version of your book?

I think Seven Deadly Sins is still good-looking?

Aha, why are there no books left?

What the hell, all kinds of illogicality, such a police officer would have been fired after being complained!

Eh eh eh? ? ? Yanbei Laojiu? ? ? Is this true? ? ?