The Killer Is in the Wilderness

Can the author give you some advice? Hurry up and change the title of your book. Your title is too confusing, and it will easily make people abandon the book. Really, I was looking for a book just now, and I skipped it after reading your title. In the end, there was really nothing to read, so I came back to read it. The result was not bad!

This book tells the story of a killer. The background is the ancient times. How does the ancient times become important? Anyway, I'm looking at a killer. After watching The Killer in the Prehistoric Age, I can no longer stand other prehistoric novels.

In Chapter 5, Emperor Jiang said to the protagonist: Young people must be patient. At this point I want to ask the author, has the human race been born? Not yet, but why do you say young people? This poisonous point makes people speechless.

Most of the prehistoric genres are the same, like the eight-legged essay picking up scholars, they don't dare to jump out, and the writings don't contain the truth. This article is thoughtful and thoughtful, and its words have weight and substance, unlike other people's footcloths.

I have read more than ten chapters, but I don't know what the author is writing about? I can't understand it. I've read more than ten chapters and I still can't understand it. Who do you think will continue to read it? Author?

Retreat? Can the killer have that cow in the sea of ​​blood?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, there is no difference as expected. At least the writing is clear. Why are there so many people complaining about it? Let me summarize: First of all, it is the word count problem. The author has too few words in each chapter. I suggest that it would be better to combine two chapters into one. Then there is the writing style. I can't say it is bad, at least it is better than when I first wrote it. At present, it seems too white, and one The general prehistoric novels are incomparable, and then there is the problem of titles. It seems that titles are also a big drawback from more than ten chapters. This point is not big or small. Next is the most important point. The first book for a newcomer is to write about the city or the entrance. The author chose the wrong subject. It is not a big problem. It is normal for the first time to write an article. Finally, I wish the author a success!

It was okay at the beginning, but things got worse after killing the female snail. I didn't know what I was doing all day long. It seemed that I had nothing to do with the protagonist. The killer, brother, is interesting only when he does things. I couldn't understand the rest of it.

After reading the introduction, I quickly read the comments. I didn't dare to read the book, so I ran away.

This is a gesture that challenges the reader's IQ. I read "Parable" for a long time, and I knew the words. But I don't know what it means when combined? Is there any expert translator who can translate it...

What kind of broken book is this? It's like a conversation between the author and the protagonist. What the author introduced should be explained. Why was it written? Find a radio station and read it.

Why are there only 400,000 words in more than 300 chapters?

We just simply want to read prehistoric novels. I don't mean that the content is exactly the same as before. As long as the characters and background are.

Damn, it's been over 30 chapters and the plot hasn't even started yet. The protagonist is still a mortal.

What the hell, it seems that I finally summed it up in one word after a long time, so dizzy...

Not everyone may like a book. Everyone. He has different preferences. You can't satisfy everyone. Come on, author.

Killer,. In the wild! Boss, what do you think?

Update quickly, it's the only book you can read from Qidian.

After reading about 20 chapters, the plot was too long and I couldn't find the main plot at all.

I've read more than ten chapters and I can't understand it. I have no idea what the author wants to write.

What the hell, it's a mess

It's highly poisonous... Ah... Poof... The critic vomited blood and died.

Read three chapters! I want to know what the hell is written about!

I think there are only two best-looking prehistoric novels in my mind. One is The Founder of the Mountain, Buddha is the Tao, and the other is The Demon King Defies the Heaven. This is not a book recommendation, but I want the author to take a good look at it. I am not saying that a cool novel is very good. Well, learn from it. This book still has a lot of room for development.