King of the Pool

I finally have someone who writes about swimming. Please write well and I hope it will be as popular as the King of the Bay Area.

So I still don't plan to give up 😁

The first one? ? ? Well, I have reservations

I remember there was a book on diving. It was well written and the author could learn from it.

() It's rare to find a book about swimming, but could it be less embarrassing and slap in the face? . . Even if there is, can you not write it in such an embarrassing way?

I read three new books in a row, two football novels and this one. At the beginning, they all wrote about how much of a bastard I am and what my parents did to me because of how miserable they were. They were as miserable as I could write. Did they all come from the same training class?

I was really looking forward to this book at first, but I was a little disappointed after reading the beginning. I feel that the author's writing is a bit awkward and he writes a lot about life. Full of the smell of dog blood. The actual competition part is still well written. But. Can you focus a little more? 🙂🙂🙂 Generally speaking, I hope the author can write better and better.

If you don't train well, why are you so worried and resentful?

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I think this is also an encouragement to the author.