Deceiving the World and Stealing the Country

For official articles, the author should be very experienced and his writing style is good, but the story is a bit flat and has no ups and downs. Many plots that should be more exciting always feel like they have ended hastily. Only for free chapters.

To put it simply, the chapter names are introductions and the finishing touch. It is natural for the author to use Qilu as the chapter title, but this is a test of his writing skills and Chinese studies skills. There are some good ones, such as Jin Yong's "Heaven Slaying the Dragon", but most of them don't have the talent to do it, so they just draw tigers instead of dogs. When they are really powerless, they can only add 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 to the title, which makes people feel embarrassed. When encountering someone who likes to pretend, they basically give up the book if they don't last long.

There really aren't many books about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period. If you write them well, they will definitely be popular! As a result, in order to show his uniqueness, the author changed the background of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. There was no sense of immersion and the readers didn't know what to read. It's a pity!

Let me put it this way, traveling to ancient times without inheriting any memory is a fool's errand. At least you have to inherit his way of speaking. Ancient Chinese and Mandarin are completely different. Are you going to be mute?

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the writing is good, but unfortunately I can't get to the point. What is the protagonist's goal? I saw the title was about being an emperor with all the power, and I was attracted by this. What next? In the following chapters, the idea of ​​rebelling and becoming an emperor was first given up, and then he began to "implement benevolent government" and "love the country and the people." Please! These are implemented in every novel, and readers must have had their thoughts on them, but the more important thing is to create a power, or a kingdom! What's the use of writing down the things you take for granted in detail? Or do you feel inferior to others, working for others and giving away your wages? I'm tired from work, but why do I still work for someone after work to read a novel? It would be quite interesting if you collude with party members, work honestly and feel compassion for others from time to time. Readers don't have so much patience to read these tasteless articles!

The author's writing style is good, but the author has no ambition to write, which has turned off a large number of readers. The author may still feel aggrieved, but there are also many netizens who are not striving for hegemony. Why has the author persuaded so many people to quit? The key is to make it up. If it is the Tang Zong and Han ancestors in real history, even the Song ancestors, their images have been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. It is understandable for readers to feel dissatisfied even if they see the protagonists succumbing to inferiors. After all, these people's ancestors are outstanding people! But the author's imaginary emperors, no matter how brilliantly the author writes about them and how majestic and powerful they are, can only be seen as passers-by and virtual characters to readers. It's strange that readers who see the protagonist succumbing to inferiority and who are depressed in reality feel a sense of empathy. Can readers not feel bored? Didn't you see, Xin Mi next door has already reached the position of Yihuo? Zhao Ziyue's writing style is one of the best on the Internet. Are people still complaining about it? Isn't it just empty talk?

The Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms is already a niche. Secondly, it is not a real history. Furthermore, the protagonist is not the master of one force. It is such a niche historical novel that it cannot become popular! ! ! In fact, the author's writing style is acceptable, but the selection of materials is terrible.

Just like the title, I didn't expect that Qidian would not make a cover if there was a cover before signing the contract. I was ridiculed for this kitten cover, so I decided to change it to a simple one, hoping it would catch everyone's attention. Finally, it is customary to ask for votes. Please use your votes to hit me as much as you want! Hahahahaha!

I only admired the novel Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. After reading it for four or five years, I still remember the main characters, the sworn brothers Yang Biao and Luo Mengzi, the female characters Fu Jinzhan, Fu Ermei, Li Niangzi, Zhou Xian, Hua Rui, etc. , The senior officials included Wang Pu, the privy envoy, Wei Renpu, the deputy privy envoy, generals Luo Yanhuan, Li Chuyun, and many eunuchs, Cao Tai. There was also an official system. The capital of the Great Zhou Dynasty was located in the place of the Four Wars. Why was the imperial army so strong that it was only seen in history?

After reading more than 80 chapters, the protagonist is neither good at writing nor martial arts, and his resourcefulness is not as good as that of the ancients. He is completely a supporting character and a passerby.

Why do these authors always like to mix systems? The manpower is almost enough to rebel. In addition to various struggles for power, the system also has various constraints. To be honest, a mixed system is really not a good choice, especially during the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period. It takes too long to isolate a power. You can become a general with strong troops, threaten the court to provide food and fodder, and plunder everywhere.

This book is very good, I can only say that it is too popular for primary school students. They say the protagonist is bureaucratic. But not at all bureaucratic. The same is true for you in the company. When you really step into the society, you will find that if you don't learn how the protagonist does things, you may never get ahead. It is impossible for a simpleton to get along well. And as for the seller seeking glory, this is a trivial matter. Let's not mention that the protagonist is a time traveler. In that chaotic era, there were many such things. Please read more history books. If you don't read history books, do you read Nima's historical novels? Might as well read Xiaobaiwen.

The author's writing skills are good and his research on historical facts is very thorough, but I always feel that the protagonist is relatively mediocre. He has neither the talent and strategy of a hero nor the wisdom of a capable minister. Perhaps this is the reason why the book is lukewarm! It is recommended that the author make efforts in this regard

I haven't watched it in two years. Have you stolen the country?

When asked about the price of food, people bowed and bowed. The protagonist's first reaction was to quickly stop them. These are troubled times! What is others' first reaction when they see it? It's definitely not that your protagonist is approachable, but that the protagonist is often oppressed by others and habitually can't stand other people's courtesy. He just lacks inner confidence. If he doesn't have enough confidence, who around him can support you, a poor guy? No one supports you and you still cheat the world and steal the country?

The author's writing style is good, but I really feel that the book is becoming more and more boring. The Kanke style is not suitable for describing the historical protagonist. After reading a hundred chapters, I feel that the protagonist is still messing around. There is no distinct sense of historical figures, let alone the burning feeling of popular novels. I don't like brainless and cool writing, but I think this novel seems to have brains but no heart.

I heard from the comments that the protagonist wants to be Sima Yi, but he has no military power? Are you just trying to make a fool of yourself in the court? ? Look at Sima Yi, Zhu Di, and Yuan Shikai, they all basically know how to lead troops.

I saw Chapter 89, what the hell, author, you are not in line with the purpose of the readers. We want to see you create a powerful empire. When you become emperor, it will be interesting to improve people's livelihood, expand your territory, or continue to cause chaos. But first you have to be in power. Otherwise, why not work for the leader during the day and read the novel where the protagonist works for the leader at night?

Real comments, the early stage is really good and very realistic. The protagonist travels through the past and does not inherit any memory of the original owner. At this time, the protagonist shows his calmness and atmosphere, and he understands the current situation bit by bit. The writing is also very good. The beginning is really good. It is a bit forced later. The protagonist has no loyalty and directly betrays the country for glory, the kind that kidnaps the leader of the country. Although the protagonist does not have much sense of immersion in the past, if you want to get ahead in the feudal era, this will be a lifelong stain that cannot be washed away. Moreover, after the surrender, it was not a story about fighting for hegemony. It was all about being a dog to Zhao Da, and there was a sense of trembling. Personally, I didn't feel that it showed the style of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms in which the strong man was king. What is shown is a thoroughly Machiavellian officialdom. Seeing that the two dragons were hesitant to take over the throne, I didn't have that strong desire to continue watching, but I did at the beginning.

The author has integrity when writing about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Writing fiction, isn't that a low-level cool writing routine? The combination of these two is really strange, and may not please either side.

The author is really streaking. He has written more than 500 chapters and has not received any recommendation from an editor.

Is the protagonist now considered the future imperial master? In this way, no matter how it develops in the future, it will be impossible to steal the country. The author wants the protagonist to be a loyal minister and enter the Confucian Temple after his death.

What's so interesting about reading books that are all about fighting for hegemony? If you want to read about fighting for hegemony, there are a lot of interesting articles waiting for you. There is no need to criticize this book.

The writing is good, and the situation at the beginning is also interesting to watch. Just when I thought that the protagonist was going to turn the tide and help the building to collapse, the protagonist surrendered to the enemy... He was still a leader... This... It's quite speechless. The protagonist's status in the country is not only lower than one person, but higher than ten thousand people, but at least he is a general with real power who stamps his feet and lands with heads! If we go one step further and take the position of Da Sima instead, he will be in charge of all the soldiers available in the country. If the young emperor ascends the throne, his foundation is unstable, and he is not allowed to take whatever he wants. He is called Da Sima, but he is actually the regent! Isn't it much better than being a traitorous general seeking glory?

A new account for the author of The Warring States Period?

Why do I feel like there are a few things here and there? Are they deleted?

In the era when the military was in power, were there any imperial censors or officials? What is written about the customs of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms is completely different and makes no sense.

No news yet about the author's new book?

I recommend Aztec's Immortal, which is well written.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that the author's writing is actually very good and detailed, but if it is too detailed, it feels like the word count is too low. Since I have to steal the country for dozens of chapters, and I have no military power or connections after surrendering, it is better to stick to guerrillas and slowly develop to be interesting. The author's pace seems too tiring.