End of the World Spiritual War

The first book I read by the author is Mengmengxian Travels. Although there are others, I don't really like it. This one feels that the author's level has dropped. There are many typos and the names are too random. The foreshadowing of the plot feels too forced 😅😅😅 I would like to support you along the way. It should be used as compensation for watching the D version when I was a poor student.

After reading Chapter 31, the original setting was good, but it turned out that the heroine did not blame her for being killed in her previous life. She kept saying that she was not the Holy Mother, but she was always in the Holy Mother. As a person who was killed, she would not take revenge on those who cheated her now (stepsisters and the like) after being reborn. She also inexplicably invited some unknown people to take refuge in her home. All kinds of information was leaked every minute, telling everyone clearly that I have a problem, come and arrest me. Stealing military supplies is also speechless. MD's excuse is also perfect. It feels like setting up a memorial arch after doing that. The golden finger was initially said to be a lock of longevity, but in the end it turned into a bracelet and then a ring💍. The heroine's name was often spelled incorrectly, which was probably wrong. Then the naming has to be abolished to such an extent that all kinds of celebrity names come in, including Liu Qingyun, Zhang Zhen... Tested for poison, discarded

After viewing 10 pictures, the heroine is indeed her father's daughter! There is nothing wrong with Mingzhe protecting himself, but he knew what kind of disaster this was, and actually stole supplies from the National Armed Police Force. He said that a big disaster was coming, and the central government would quickly make up for it. There was no time to deal with the people who were guarding the accident, and the Armed Police Force would not be affected! You also know that when a disaster strikes, every resource in the country is very precious! You actually stole the entire warehouse before the disaster in order to build your own base! Haha, the heroine is still a police officer! ! ! Is this going to brainwash yourself? ? To the soul beast that had accompanied him for two lifetimes, he called him a beast! The heroine's father and heroine's sister have moral problems, but the heroine not only does sneaky things, but also tells herself that it doesn't matter, it won't affect others, and the country will make up for it. There is no bottom line at all! ! ! With one bloodline and one virtue, no wonder he said he would not take revenge. He thought he was the Holy Mother. It turned out that he saw himself. How could he take revenge on himself? !

The setting of the fighting spirit is very novel. Generally, apocalyptic novels are based on the superpower system.

What the hell are you writing? The logic is confusing and full of errors. Changing space device. King of other words. Farewell.

The heroine... I think she's a little bit weird about how she treats her pet companions. Are you looking down on her? Every time, words like livestock or flat-haired *** are used, which seems very frustrating. Moreover, after the golden finger appears, the space left by my mother is sometimes a longevity lock, sometimes an emerald bracelet, and sometimes a ring. May I ask if you can have some snacks? ? Just think of it as a bracelet, leave a mark on the palm, and then say it appears on the chest, how can this shit still run? Secondly, the names of many people in the article feel like they are always changing, and there are a lot of typos. It is very uncomfortable to read, and the logic in the article is also very poor. Anyway, when I read Chapter 68 and saw the heroine saying that Azi has flat hair, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was too poisonous and he died in battle.

I beg the heroine not to be a holy mother, I beg the heroine not to be a drag on the family, I beg the heroine to be more ruthless and decisive, fortunately there is space, otherwise it will be even more unbearable 😭

Not very well written. So it didn't look like it. The heroine is very holy to strangers, but very cold-blooded and selfish to her acquaintances

Character names are often wrong; the plot often jumps around inexplicably. Often, before the previous event is finished, it suddenly jumps to the next event. The heroine and her team members went to do one thing separately. Before the explanation of this matter was completed, it suddenly jumped to the heroine and her team members doing another thing.

The heroine was betrayed in her previous life. In this life, she talks harmoniously to her family, saying that as long as they don't cause trouble, she won't retaliate. Forget it, they are still close relatives after all. I'm thinking that you were betrayed in your last life, and then you vowed never to be a lone ranger in this life? ? Is the author's logic dead?              ，，10，，， Not wanting to be kidnapped by morality, he insisted on wearing a police uniform, and then said that he had sworn to protect the safety and happiness of the people no matter what. Every time she was questioned, scolded and tied up, the heroine calmly reasoned with her, and then walked out in a long paragraph. She must have reasoned about ten times in 10 days. Aren't you annoyed? ?              ，，，， Want to be dissected so badly? ? Then come on

This is a holy book that purports to save the world. For example, if others arrest your relatives and you for experiments, you won't kill people because you are afraid of killing them. You are very open-minded, but you are not strong, but you are two levels higher than others. You can't fight hard enough. If you are not sure, your gold finger will be blind. He is not ruthless when he should be ruthless.

It's all a mess of typos. Can you correct it before posting?

The heroine's character is unlikable, too blunt! ! ! I am not gregarious, maybe because of my average writing skills. I hope to greatly improve my writing skills, and the more I write, the better! ! !

I don't like this kind of heroine who fails in both business and intelligence.

After seeing more than 300 chapters, the author may be too busy. Often in the same chapter, the protagonist Zhang Jiayue is renamed Murong Xianxian, and then Zhang Jiayue. Come on, come on

But there are no chapters two or three!

Too many typos??????

I want to know if this female supporting character's name is serious. 😥😥 Isn't this the name of a star? It's too dramatic.

The story is quite attractive, but there are too many typos, the names are always changing, and all kinds of random things are included. I am really tired of reading it. Can you sort it out before posting it? The story is not very coherent. I have to guess the content when reading a novel.

It's been 4 years. What happened to the author? Did you leave at that time? Or was there some accident and I accidentally wrote it down?