Ice Melts into the Sky

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The protagonist is an idiot with low self-esteem, does stupid things, and is a bad person. Please forgive me if the content is offensive.

The writing is good, but the plot is not very clear yet, but the part about taking the exam with Li Yan at the beginning could use more writing to express the conflicts and thoughts between the protagonist and Li Yan. For example, the relationship with Li Yan was good at the beginning, but later Li Yan was very ashamed of the bribery, etc.

The writing is good, and the story about the junior sister is OK. The pace is too slow, and it should be centered around the emotional line or the blood feud. Throughout the story, the pace is relatively slow, and there should be big goals and the like. Like wandering aimlessly.

If there is any area in this book that needs improvement, I hope readers who have read it will leave comments and point it out for me, thank you!