The High God Is Hard to Win

This article is not about cultivating immortality, but about marriage! There's nothing to tease you about, nothing to quarrel with, nothing to fight against! It's okay to solve the case! There is also a sadistic plot! Please bring your wooden stools and watch the show with Yi'er! More collections, more support! Let's talk about the plot and hurry up! 😃😃No need to rush, they are updated every day!

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Book Review 1 I have read articles that made me sad when I first saw them, and of course I also read articles that warmed my heart when I first saw them, but I didn't commemorate them. Let's start here. The opening chapter is good, and I was surprised. The psychological description of the characters is vivid and lovely, the picture is very strong, and the sense of substitution is also good, which shows that the author has a profound writing skills. From the cute little fox and the fairy king! Let's call it that for now! From the first meeting, a sweet heart secretly promised, and then everything started... The most profound memory, which can't be dissipated for a long time, is that he smiled at her three times, and her heart fell in love at first sight, not to mention that he was a handsome young man. Somewhat sad. In life, what I am afraid of is that you will be born before I am born, and I will be old before you are born. I am even more afraid that my heart will turn towards the moon and the moon will fall into the ditch... But I think that the truly right one will always have to cross mountains, rivers and seas, and pass through the cold and sad hearts before he can come to you, and then join hands for the rest of our lives and never let go. So I wait, I wait for the beginning of their story...

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Speaking of the author, is this a male or female novel? Why would I, a big boy, read it with gusto 😂, it doesn't mean anything, it's just that when I vote for recommendations, it says "girls vote", which is a bit convenient 😂

Book Review 4 When the author changes the perspective, it is a little unclear, and the pronouns used are also a bit unclear, which makes people look very... Suggestion, When the perspective changes, be sure to write the protagonist's name and don't replace it with pronouns frequently. It is also found that the author will omit it during the perspective change process. The pronouns and author's name may be used by the author to make reading less cumbersome, but this will easily cause readers to have to spend their brains to think about whose psychology this sentence is... Also, for new supporting characters, it is best to give a brief introduction and then go directly to the topic, otherwise there will be questions about who this person is and what he is doing. It can be seen that the author wants to write very concisely, but if it is too concise, it will lack a large network of connections, and there will be an illusion that the links are not connected. In addition, the dialogue should highlight the environment and character of the character at that time, and should not be abrupt and abrupt...

Comment 3 I don't know if it's my own illusion or something else. The author's description of the scene is somewhat outline. I can feel the scene the author wants to describe, but it looks very blurry and I can't imagine what the scene looks like at all. If the scene description is clear and three-dimensional, the characters in it will be more vivid, clear and smooth. The author can add to this. The second is the psychological description part, which is a bit out of the ordinary. In fact, the author could add some description in the dialogue and psychological aspects, and the effect would be better. The little fox met the male protagonist on the lake. Why is his memory blurred when he went to Yuhuai Mountain to see him again? I recognized it before, but now I can't recognize it? They had only met for a few days...

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This article is not about cultivating immortality, but about marriage! 😃🙏

Wen Qing is like this, simple and elegant, the green moon is hazy; when asking about love, how much sadness and snow are in the face. The author's writing style is not grand, but elegant. The clouds move and the wind blows, but it can touch the heartstrings! Not bad, not bad