Ocean Monk

This is the most considerate of my family and comrades-in-arms cultivation novel I have ever read. Overall, if you can accept this, it is a good urban fairy fantasy 🤭 In the end, I will not continue writing anywhere. In fact, I can just live my whole life in the Chaos Pearl.

When it comes to ocean writing, write more about ocean things, and too little about anything else.

It's directed at the ocean. Do I have a misunderstanding about the title? It's all about things on the shore, selling fish for a few chapters, picking up my sister, visiting the West Lake, comrades in arms, and holy monks. It's one of the things I want to see in the ocean. The more I watched, the less patient I became and ran away.

The plot progresses too slowly, and it feels like the article is not on point. Ocean Monk became an island developer. Maybe the author said this is just a prerequisite, but it really doesn't hit the mark.

The dead mosquito opened another book without notifying him😡😡😡

A monthly pass is given to you, come on!

Author, you are so fast, you can still double-play? ! ! !

If you don't dive with a bead, and you know martial arts but don't practice, then change your title to "Country Story 99"!

Poison test: I would like to ask if the male protagonist will have a harem in the end? Abandon the harem

Alas, half of them are dialogues. It's really annoying. Don't you know how to write plots?

The best way to improve is to practice using words and forming sentences. After reading more than a dozen chapters, the plot advancement and turning points felt really awkward due to improper wording. Some words and phrases were used with inappropriate prefaces and even misused words. For example, the word "after all" is an adverb that strengthens the transitional tone. If it is used frequently, it will take over the role.

Although it is not very poisonous, it is too watery. Why did you choose this name? Damn it, it is dozens of chapters and there is no progress at all. It is just daily water. I can't stand it anymore. It's so boring.

It's not very well written, and I personally don't think it looks good.

I came in to read it just because of the cover.

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It all looks like an urban romance novel. What was repaired?

Author, if the protagonist is so capable, shouldn't he stay away from the shore? This way he can hide himself better and gain more.

As the saying goes, if someone is given a great responsibility from heaven, he will definitely be divided among the public. Eat its SHI, break its bones, and eat its flesh. Anyone who achieves all three will be regarded as a king. To be a king, add a little more to the big one. The beauty of Wang Meat is comparable to that of Ma Hu. Stew in one pot and sing fragrant meat poems. Do you know your luck tonight, my friend? It becomes an elegant rhyme with nine sausages. New book recommended by newcomers: legends about investigators Urban exploration is not bloody, and there are all kinds of strange things in it.

Why are your parents suddenly so enthusiastic?

The last few chapters of the author are too begging for a certain department, which cannot reflect the main body of the novel, and are too weak. It is recommended to change the style and write a different treasure hunting in the ocean.

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There are so many typos that I can't stand it, and the preachy character of the protagonist is off-putting!

I ran out of books to read, so I searched for this one, and after reading it I found that it was something I had discarded before. First there was a villa, then tens of millions and billions, all kinds of rich people kneeling down and licking the protagonist... Have you been drinking? The world is yours?

Good subject matter, but the writing style is a bit long-winded, and the pretentiousness is also written as if it is heartless.

Overall, this book is a good book. The author may farm first and then help with cultivation, which is good. If there are too many cultivation battles, it will become a cultivation novel. I personally prefer farming slightly less than fighting.

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What I hate most is that the book is finished after writing the plot of the earth. It's a bad ending, it's a bad ending, it's a bad ending... In fact, I think you can continue to write millions of words about the world of cultivation and the world of immortality 😆😆😆

Why is your Unparalleled General of the War of Resistance gone?

When you saw the old man's fries in Chapter 29, shouldn't they be from KFC? Why McDonald's?