There Is a God Inside Me

The author's description is very cumbersome. I feel a little tired and don't want to read it. The content is quite good. In many cases, the content at the end of the previous chapter and the beginning of the next chapter is repeated between the two chapters. A part of the topic is wasted before the theme is changed. Occasionally, Nangong Yu's ** topics are highlighted to highlight her characteristics. It is the same every time. This is a bit annoying, and it takes a long time to get to the topic. I suggest that the author reorganizes and streamlines the content after each chapter to make it easier to read. The lack of immersion is a flaw. Sometimes when reading novels, some plots require tears. It is easier for readers to remember this novel if they are excited, and it will not become a fast food.

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No, I feel like the protagonist has a very problematic personality. He has no temper at all when being forced by the women around him to wear women's clothes and cook at home. Sometimes he goes too far and doesn't get angry. When he feels like people don't respect him outside, he immediately gets upset and feels that he is being looked down upon. No, brother, everyone has a job, so they can't all come here just to see you, right? It feels like the protagonist is like a child sometimes, and is also very cheap. He just believes what others say. When a villain tells the protagonist to go with him and lets the people he cares about go, the protagonist still believes it? It's so poisonous. It's enough to not get angry even if you are bullied by women every day. This is not machismo. It's just that you are talking about how great you are while being questioned by a group of male classmates at school. You also said before that how awesome you are, but it will change as soon as the "plot needs". And the women's response is too obvious. The author should have known after watching God Killer that the protagonist there does not have the benefits of being bullied by women every day. You are a group of ancestors! It's so poisonous. The subject matter is obviously good, but it's a pity.

The author's creativity is very good, but the text is not delicate enough, and some places in the early stage are a bit stiff to read, and there are also some lexicon and grammatical errors.

Can you change it a bit? The character design and the God-Slayer look too familiar.

Once upon a time, there was a man named Ichigo. One day, he was pinned against a wall by a beautiful black-haired girl with a black knife. Later, he became the God of Death.

I have read dozens of chapters so far, what can I say? This is completely a Japanese comic plot. This kind of plot is not suitable for this kind of writing of thousands of words in one chapter, which can easily lead to contrived effects (for example, in the chapter where the male protagonist gains power, he makes a similar self-sacrifice act before the character of the protagonist is shaped and his growth is not described. It will really make you instantly disgusted. After all, the protagonist is a student, or are the ideological consciousness of modern students really that high? This can be called a slight poison.) Or the plot is a simple passionate harem, but at the same time, the writing style is also very important. Japanese comic-style articles are more suitable for short and concise ones. The more description there is, the more likely it is that there will be loopholes. To put it bluntly, I actually have a big problem with the description of the male protagonist. I feel like it just copied the template of a Japanese comic protagonist.

The author's writing is very good. It would be better if the writing style is more delicate.

Emmmm, guys, can you say that this book is cool? Ha ha ha ha!

I think as a multiple composite godhead of night and death, justice and war, wisdom and reason, the earliest Greek mythology used the matriarchal god as the origin and source of everything. Athena should have multiple powers. For example, summoning the goddesses of vengeance is nonsense. It can be changed to the revenge domain of the three goddesses of vengeance. Within a certain range, all the damage suffered by itself can be dealt with by the other party (to the gods or the gods who are equal to the gods). For mortals, it completely rebounds all attacks and is not affected by any form of damage. Another power, as the incarnation of snakes, Athena can summon plural forms of serpents as servants of gods to attack. At the same time, as a combination of gods and monsters, she can use Medusa's ability to petrify the evil eye. As the power of night and death, it represents the underworld. When she uses this power, the breath she exhales is filled with the breath of darkness, the "breath of death". At the same time, she can summon the army of the dead, communicate with the underworld, etc. Finally, as one of the twelve main gods of Olympus, don't you think Athena should be very powerful? In addition, since you have become a being equal to a god and have the power of a god in your body, you will naturally be protected by this power. Mortal attacks can basically be ignored. Why do you still worry about being injured by mortal weapons in this book? I don't understand this setting at all!

It's not easy to write a book nowadays, let alone the second dimension, so come on!

Books that are popular nowadays all have one characteristic, that is, even if they are spoofs, the logic must be clear, at least so that readers can agree with it. And the author of your book says that she has battles in her daily life. Speaking of fighting, this fight is neither fish nor fowl. The logic is a bit confusing. I'm in the first ten chapters, and I even saw a math error - seven Winged Gods instead of six. Overall, the writing is okay, but I really disagree with the storyline.

Meow Meow Meow is the heroine setting plus the God Killer

To be honest, I think the scene where the Western European knights go to the protagonist's bed and are "judged" is very tmzz. The male protagonist obviously didn't do anything, but they still behave like that →_→ But... As a novel, if it is more realistic, it will lose.

Alas, the author's book has the same results as Time Travelers' Retreat. Writing so much It's great that the author can keep going, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The more I look at him, the more he looks like the God Killer. .

The more I look at it, the more it looks like the God Killer. Isn't the author just copying it?

The world view is generally that of God Killer, and the protagonist feels like Shirou Emiya?

The prototype of this book should be the God Killer, right? ! Because the setting is quite similar, but this book also has its own characteristics and is quite interesting. Come on, don't be a eunuch!

This is two million words long. Is the protagonist still a virgin? Are you still a single guy without a meal ticket?

Come on, wait for the author to come back

I feel so confused and confused, and I can't understand anything written.

I will set up a monument next and test the poison here at 14:23 on October 4th.

Come on, author, think slowly and don't be anxious 🙂

It has a sense of déjà vu from the hot-blooded anime of the 1980s.

Well, after reading the introduction and the first few chapters, I thought Mu Qingxue was the heroine. It turns out not to be the case.

The names of these characters are so awkward

How should I put it (~_~;) He was directly persuaded to quit in women's clothing. As a king, no one cares about his image? Mu Qingxue won't care if he can represent the country and still mess around like this. The knight can be seen as impulsive in front of him, and his childhood sweetheart won't think too much, but doesn't the aunt have no brains? Moreover, I just experienced something related to the king's majesty, and a lot of people were paying attention, but he immediately threw away the majesty?

Why doesn't the author update? Is there something wrong?

Author, why don't you update it?