You Are the Future That I Cannot Reach

Thanks to everyone who has been here, and even more grateful to the friends who have collected, rewarded, commented, and recommended, letting me know that this road is not so lonely.

Are there any friends who keep reading? Can you raise your hand so I can see it?

Which character do you all like? Let me know in the refill or message!

Come on, persistence is victory!

I personally have no interest in the theme of youth campus... And I haven't read many such novels, so I apologize for any mistakes I make. The writing is very fluent, but the characterization is insufficient, especially when you introduce several characters in the first chapter. These characters have their own connections with each other, but the characterization of each one is insufficient, so they are all thin. I won't say much about the plot, because... I seem to have guessed that Lu Ran may also like the heroine... Let me give you some specific opinions: In the rooftop scene at the beginning, you can describe the appearance and clothing of the characters more, and choose the characteristics that can impress people. After all, you directly introduce the conflict between three people at the beginning. If the reader cannot quickly distinguish these three characters, it will feel a little unclear. So expand the scene on the rooftop, add more details and characteristics of the characters, and create more inner conflicts, but without revealing the cause of the conflict. In this case, the suspense will be better.

Um. . . What you saw in the creation, come and take a look