Star Swordsman

The book is finished, congratulations, what's next? New book?

It feels pretty good, I'll keep it for now

How miserable. Come see you from Jia Nan.

It's getting more and more fascinating! Subscription support

The work is quite good, keep up the good work! Looking forward to your updates! Support it. 👍

The plot is cleverly conceived and the writing is gorgeous! Come on

Why does such a beautiful book only have two stars? My heart is broken

I gave you a small reward and subscribed. Come on, the ratings are too few 🤭

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I saw that you gave me a reward, so I naturally wanted to repay you a little, and I have turned on automatic subscription 😁

I have actually been reading books for a long time. I first read San Shao's books, then I read Potato, and now I read all kinds of books. Now I am writing a book, and I feel deeply. This book is not perfect after reading it, but it is flesh and blood, and the characters are relatively fleshed out. , The characters in the book are all relatively successful, but the plot should be more up and down. The most important thing in a novel is the plot. I hope the author will work hard to write down the words and not delay the book with irrelevant things such as ratings. Gold will shine. Finally, I hope the author can add some refinement to it, hehe.

I just finished my subscription and looked at the honors. It obviously comes with a monthly pass. What about the honors I promised 😰

There is a serious bug in the first chapter. I mentioned earlier that the school I attended is the best school in Snowflake City and the third-ranked school in the Southwest League. After turning two pages, it is said that the Snowflake City where the protagonist is located is one of the five technology cities in the Northwest League!

It's too late! It's too late! All booked! 🤭

Poison or not, it's just a drama. I don't want to watch it after watching it.

All booked! Come on, take care of your body, let's continue!

Updates have resumed! Hold on

Finished? Looking forward to the new work, come on!

Why not call it swordsman? Jianhao is the name of Little Japan and they practice swordsmanship with swords.

Give me some support, let's get going, it's very well written.

Let's vote for such a good book. It's so good, but it's just too good to be true.

I saw it in the book review section of the Tao Te Ching and came to take a look.

Wild... Qidian hasn't given a cover yet 😰

... It's really miserable. My comment is still the first one

The combination of technology and martial arts is really not easy to write. If you don't do it well, it will feel nondescript. A very important point is that this world needs to explain a complete world view, the world's military, government, people's thoughts, social development direction, etc. If you can't feel these, just forcefully bringing martial arts into the technological era, it will feel very blunt. After all, traditional martial arts has history as a reference, and now cities have everything around them. For reference, readers will naturally accept this setting. However, in this old and ancient era, it is difficult for people to imagine everything about it, and there is a lack of sense of substitution. It is recommended that the author writes at a slower pace earlier. You can refer to settings like Harry Potter or King spare his life. Enter slowly and gently to give readers some time to relax. Otherwise, it will be like taking a big bite of dry meat. No matter how delicious it is, it still cannot be swallowed.

That little carrot Fang Haizhou runs so fast that we can't even catch him.

I didn't expect to finish this book so soon. I thought it would only take a few days. Forgive me for the late blessing!

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It's non-toxic and can be used in traps. I'm ordering more now! Come on