Perfect Mythical World

At the beginning, the protagonist goes hunting in the mountains with a 1.7-Meter iron gun? ? ? Are you an elf? Are the trees giving way to you? Be careful!

When I open the anti-theft subscription chapter again, the subscription keeps dropping. At least my patience is reaching its limit.

What's going on? I subscribed to the anti-theft chapter but I still can't watch it. Are you trying to make money 😭

When I see Linley, I think of the dragon!

What a disgusting setting. The village chief of the village where he grew up is taken as a servant by the protagonist. The key is that he can give the secret book to the protagonist. Inherited the Tianshi Mansion and accepted the White Rabbit Demon he knew as a disciple? I started calling myself my teacher when I was a teenager. It's so poisonous.

This book is too poisonous. The plot is disgusting. The plot is the same old cliché. The whole village is tricked to death. The origins of the parents are mysterious. The protagonist has basically zero IQ. He is self-righteous. He accepts disciples and Taoist companions even if he has no cultivation. The old village chief who has helped him for more than ten years is taken as a servant. It is a complete plot of Long Aotian. The advantage is that the writing is somewhat immersive. The plot haha.

I completely collapsed after writing it, especially after the heroine appeared. Oh my god, she is stupid, stupid, timid, doesn't know anything, and is still a troublemaker.

After other people traveled through time, they all ruled the world and were free. That was because they had a golden finger, but you didn't, and you didn't know what to do.

To be honest, the author's books are very suitable to my taste, and they are indeed quite good. But every time the author wants to make some so-called revolution and lick it to the death, it is meaningless. You are writing about ancient times, but it suddenly became modern. You must write the immortal hero as a materialist. Then buy a fairy, the protagonist Why should you make decisions for other people? In fact, many people will envy that kind of world where you can become stronger. It is better than the end of the Dharma era. The protagonist is creating this. How can everyone be equal? What about animals? Monsters have longer lives than humans. Why don't you let people become immortals?

I said before that I am weak and cannot hold a 30-pound iron gun, but later I can dig several big holes in a short while.

The only advantage is that the writing is good and has a sense of immersion. I advise the author to rewrite those fairy tale novels with poor writing but excellent plots. Alas, nowadays novels with good plots and poor writing are even more irritating with good plots.

That's a bit bullshit. Once you get the technique and practice it once, you will be able to swallow any ghost. Even a hundred-year-old ghost can't hold on for a moment. Then there is the natural savior. I'll leave you all the good stuff. Hehe

I hate traveling through the rebirth system the most.

Lin Lei, you no longer want to be the god of your universe. Have you become an immortal instead?

I can't understand why there is such a shortage of women. What's the use besides holding back resources and holding back resources? You also have to waste energy on the so-called heroine.

A not-so-good novel. It's very good to read without thinking about it. Reading it with thinking about it can ruin your outlook.

If you want to open another anti-theft chapter, I will cancel it. I just opened three chapters in a row, and they all have no text. It's a scam!

Brother. I think the reason for your poor grades is number one. The writing is too old-fashioned, and it seems a bit pretentious. The second words brought a flow of energy. These two points were relatively popular in the 10s.

What is the setting of this book? After reading the first few dozen chapters, I feel that the protagonist is Yuan Wai Li! I can't stand it anymore...

This book is too confusing! Chapter 1 Even if you don't eat rabbits, why would you give a rabbit a name and advertise it? Your writing is so bad that you still advertise it, will anyone read it?

The beginning is pretty good, keep reading

To be honest, I read part of it. The part about the monster monkey at the beginning was quite touching. In the end, the person reincarnated by the female monkey actually became the main character and the Taoist couple. I went there. It instantly poisoned me and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Would you like to practice your writing? It's so uncomfortable to read half-written words.

When I see Linley, I think of Panlong. . .

Over-description, too many words in useless places

The ghostly mist rose and instantly enveloped the entire small village. A man in a black robe and a dove face raised the child with one hand and raised the other hand. His palm turned into bone claws like dead wood and dug into the child's heart. At this moment, a sudden change occurred! A ray of white light turned into a lightsaber and slashed towards the bone hand. There were waves of fluctuations in the space wherever he passed, and cracks in the space appeared, only to close again in an instant. The bone hand drew back, narrowly dodging the lightsaber, but the corner of his eye still touched the back of his hand. A burning smell mixed with a hissing sound came from the dove-faced man's mouth. All this seems like a long time, but it actually lasts only a breath of time. The dove-faced man looked into the void and saw a two-foot-tall young man in a green robe looking towards him. The man in green robe is none other than Lin Lei. (1)

I always feel that gods such as mountain gods who rely on faith to make a living are too ****, and I hate watching this type of thing the most.

The writing by the boss is good, but the writing style is not as good as it is, but... Keep up with the times, it feels a bit old-fashioned.

But I'm still your fan!

Lei? The master of Hongmeng space also traveled through time?