The Adventures of Jackie Chan in Time Travel

Is this a rhythm that needs to be rewritten?

One chapter a day, take your time. 😂

I would like to ask the author how many chapters are updated a day and is it stable?

It's so embarrassing to call the magician. I remember dad and the others all called themselves magicians.

The protagonist Wei Wei is so weak that she has no independent opinion and is actually beaten by a woman. As a member of the ruling class, this is really embarrassing!

Good reviews for Tomb Raider! Long live Laura≧▽≦

😁 I haven't watched it yet, but it looks like it's going to be a big deal.

To be honest, I like the author's content, general outline, and character plots that will appear, but the writing style is a weakness. It feels a bit between a novice and a veteran. Then the protagonist is the biggest failure in my opinion. Although it is not very dull before the plot unfolds, after the plot unfolds, in the ancient tomb Li Ying's plot is very dull and dull. Her IQ is not online at all, and it can be said that it is just too much of the original plot. She has no ideas of her own. In addition, the protagonist S Bai's IQ is not online at all. This is very fatal. Anyway, I quit after seeing this and couldn't stand it.

It's not easy. I finally saw Tomb Raider at the starting point.

Strange, why are so many comments from 2017 and 2018? The chapters of the book I read were updated this year. Did I travel through time? Or did the comment travel through time? Either the chapter has traveled through time, or the book has traveled through time, or it's because I drank. If it doesn't work, I have to get out of the car. It seems that I'm drunk and can't read while driving.

Can writing novels build arm strength? (ง •̀_•́)ง

Hey, hey, your writing is out of tune.

The protagonist is very pale and doesn't have much of a city. It feels like he only cares about eating and not fighting.

If the author is writing for himself, I won't say anything, and I can keep it as a souvenir after I finish writing. I think the author gave up before finishing the book. I also wrote a little before, but gave up and it was still on the computer. There is a saying that there are three golden chapters in online articles. I didn't feel it. It read just so so and I didn't have any desire to read it. I still suggest that the author go back to the factory and rewrite it. The subject matter can be richer, the story should be concise and clear, and more vulgar. At least it will be more popular this way. . Please ignore me~~~~

What about Xiaoyu? Xiaoyu is also an indispensable part of Jackie Chan's Adventures.

I came in after seeing The Adventures of Jackie Chan, and saw that there were only 9 chapters, which was a bit convenient.

Ruin Destroyer as the heroine? So many ruins in The Adventures of Jackie Chan emmmm

Oh my god, this novel actually has a story about the growth of girls, Riley and Maya, in the front. I watched this drama on Douyin, I loved it so much

You did it, author, you took the step to success

Personally, I don't like it. It makes the protagonist so powerful that the Black Hand gang can't do anything to him. It's not exciting at all. It doesn't have the same fun as watching it when I was a kid. Even if I re-watch the original work, it's much more interesting than this.

I also wrote a fanfic of Jackie Chan's Adventures and I would like your advice

So panicked! Where did those comments from 2017 come from, time travel? The books were all published in 2019😰😰😰