Mission: Impossible: the Rise of the Storm

The author Da Da's novels are very good. As the saying goes, details determine success or failure. From the author Da Da's revision of this book, we can know that his attitude is very serious. I believe this book will be popular, especially a good work comes from readers' continuous criticism and encouragement. I admire

I really like this novel, so I would like to make some suggestions. I feel that there is too much foreshadowing, which makes the article feel a bit lengthy, so it cannot attract people's attention at once, so I hope it will be greatly improved.

Your support, guidance, and criticism are the motivation for every writer to continue writing, because a sense of existence is the purpose of every writer writing novels.

Today, I continued to follow my usual practice and prepared to revise my article. After confirming that it was correct, I updated it. However, I saw a comment that surprised me. Xiaobaiwen in Xiaobaiwen. What exactly is Xiaobaiwen? Regarding this, I checked the relevant information, so I will express some of my own opinions on whether the current article I am hungry for is Xiaobaiwen. First of all, the popular meaning of Xiaobaiwen is that the plot is simple, the plot is extremely routine, and it lacks ideological quality. The second meaning is that the writing style is not enough and the level is not up to standard. Some excessive explanations and words are completely unnecessary, but as a novice, I think everyone should be able to understand it. So, whether my article is a novice novel or not, I will only say two things about this: First, the protagonist of my article is not invincible, nor is he anything powerful. He has been fooled and failed, but in the final outcome I will let him win, or turn around, and break through difficulties. Personally, I think there is a big difference between whether he is in line with the current novice novels. Secondly, I know my writing style well, so I attach great importance to every book friend's comments, criticisms, or encouragements. If the second situation does occur, I hope everyone will forgive me and I will modify it. The third point is about the logic of the novel. I just want to ask the friend who made the comment. You only read one article and said that my article is illogical, and then it is a white article within a white article. I would like to ask, is there a relationship between a novel with no logic and a small white article? Fourth, speak with facts and pay attention to evidence. I will put my novel there. If you think it is not good or there is really no logic, you can point out and paste it. I will accept them one by one and revise them all. Thank you everyone. Let me explain again that my novel is based on events throughout the text, which means that you have to read only one picture and then find the logic of this chapter. Maybe my level is not up to your requirements, but I accept your opinion. But as far as Xiaobaiwen is concerned, after just reading one page, one will judge the Xiaobaiwen within Xiaobaiwen and question my article. I will ignore the boring comments from such people. Unless you point it out from the article, please do not post comments based on Xiaobaiwen or Xiaobaiwen within Xiaobaiwen in the future. This is a suggestion to book friends who have published the above article. Thank you for visiting again.

I know that this is my first time writing a novel. You can support me and give me the motivation to continue writing every day. Thank you all again. I hope that, as always, it will come like a spring breeze overnight and thousands of votes will be cast. Haha, thank you all. 🙏🤝🙂✊✊

Just a little personal opinion, I hope you can support me more

The plot of the novel is becoming more and more interesting and beyond expectations. I really like it. Come on.

Support, come on ✊

The turning point is too fast. It's not rigorous at all. It doesn't require you to be lurking, but the turning point of the plot is too blunt.

Return visit of Bald Qiang in The Reincarnation of Bears, has been collected

Yesterday, I came to the fan area and suddenly saw a great god. He cast 8 recommendation votes, which was the largest number of votes I got at once. I was so excited that I wanted to visit immediately, but because I was typing words, I delayed, and later I forgot about this kind-hearted great god. 🤝🙏🙂🤝

What's going on with the Desert Eagle in Chapter 7?

Mobile phones appear in Chapter 2? Which era is this?

Since we are in Shanghai, I think we can add some storylines from the TV series Sparrow and Rouge.

As for information, I think nine truths and one falsehood are the best.