There Is Indeed Something Wrong with My Trip to Konoha

The shortcomings of this book are that Naru Hina is forced to be demolished, causing many Naruto readers to run away at once. Also, Naruto is not funny enough, and only the two pillars are destroyed. It is difficult for Naruto and Sasuke to resonate with each other. The reason why Naruto and Sasuke know each other is because they have almost the same tragic childhood. Also, the Sharingan eye has a huge flaw. The author should not forcefully give the protagonist this golden finger. It can be easily explained by using a Zanpakutō or a Devil Fruit. How do you complete this book with the Sharingan eye? At best, this is an Uchiha orphan. Next, he is preparing to face the covetousness of the Pot King, Konoha, and even Uncle Snake from other villages. At worst, this is called robbing blood successors. Your eyes have been re-installed, and the consequences will be endless. The golden finger of the Sharingan is not a blood inheritance that can be exchanged for points easily. The author should consider the political consequences of this.

Where did Orochimaru go? Lost contact? ? ? ? ?

. . . It looks a little awkward for no reason 1. The protagonist shouts every day not to change the plot, brother, your time travel has led to four generations of people being alive, and you can still forcefully develop the same plot. 2. There was no chakra at the beginning, but later there were four generations of fathers who were at odds with him! ! ! When learning Ninjutsu, I relied too much on the system, and after working on it for a long time, I achieved nothing. In addition, he said that Namikaze was his wife's wife, and he could not learn the sealing technique since he was not his biological child. But a Hokage went into law and raised a child without being taught anything. 3. Seeing Naruto going out to study with him, my heart grew so big that I actually wanted to go out to practice alone, yes, alone~! ! It means that they are completely inferior to two movie-level characters. 4. I met two teasers when I went out. . . He is actually from Akatsuki, what next? ? ? Went together and then joined Akatsuki? ? ? Or the main force? ? ? With Zetsu? ? ? People even know when Naruto was born. You don't treat Black and White Zetsu as human beings when you go out so arrogantly, even though they are not human beings.

In the second chapter, onlookers began to appear who were mindlessly mocking the protagonist. From the visual inspection, they came from the waste studio next door, and the performance was just a formality. At the same time, in conjunction with the title of the Happy Flow light novel, the secret recipe was awkward and slipped away.

After reading three chapters, I decided that the levels are too complicated.

There is something wrong with the setting of this book. The system relies on his energy to activate. Where does the energy come from? How about erasing him?

What can be born with Sharingan and Hinata?

When will the update be added? The author is great.

This upgrade is so slow, I can only vote 1 now.

Dufa, please fellow Taoists, give me some paper money today next year.

I gave up the book after seeing the first system task. There is nothing wrong with the book, but I personally don't like the routine.

Why hasn't Orochimaru come out yet? Is he really cold?

So the Uchiha are still extinct?

Not recommended, I didn't feel anything at all after watching it!

Yes, it's well written. It would be better if the supporting characters could be described more vividly.

I don't understand, if Minato is still here, the Uchiha will exterminate the clan.

I just read the first chapter... Why did the protagonist know that he was Naruto's brother from the beginning? What if it's my younger brother?

So little, I'll look at it after fattening up, cough cough

I don't have much to say, just one word - like! Great work, looking forward to updates.

It can be pretty funny, though. There's something wrong with the author's name.

It's really boring, I don't really like it, and I have no idea what the main character's skills are.

Come on, author👍👍

Dear author, when will the update be added?

Well done. The plot of this book is exciting and the story is unique. I love reading it. It's really not satisfying. The author will work hard to update it.

Hayato hayato naruto naruto instead of naliduo There are more of them. Of course this is a small problem, but it's best to change it. Come on, author.

I'm going to read a few chapters and add it to my bookshelf if I don't mind. I'll give you the recommendation vote first, the data is so miserable

I don't think a 10 cm long knife can be called a Swiss Army Knife other than a fruit knife.

I want to know why Orochimaru is 404? No reason? 😅😅😅Why? The book is pretty good, right? !

I don't understand why some people always talk about breaking up Hinata. Sakura, whom Naruto liked at the beginning of Naruto, gave most of the page to describe Naruto's perseverance towards Sakura. But later on, Hinata became too popular, so she just made it a beautiful rescue hero and forcibly paired with Naruto. As long as the emotional description is reasonable, who can't be paired with her? Why do we have to worry about whether Hinata is worthy of Naruto?

The author should either say it in advance when changing the settings, or not write about abilities that he is not familiar with. God's half-swastika is as sharp as fire. Mmp, it's all about the ability of Qi Jie, it's so embarrassing to watch, I might as well not write it.