The Invincible Heroic Lord of Light

I haven't read it yet. I can't stand it after only about ten chapters. Imagine a Western fantasy novel. The first impression that comes to people is of European and American faces. Then imagine a group of European and American young heroes and so on. They are neither Chinese nor American. It's eye-catching. There is a big difference between European and American grammar and Chinese grammar. The two grammars are mixed together and it is very dramatic...

It's uncomfortable to write a Western fantasy with a bunch of Chinese names. Also, the author may be a time traveler who traveled from around 2005 to 2018. Can the Long Ao Tianqiao section not be so many? I'd like to give it to a bird's egg or something like that. I really hope the author will read European and American magic novels, TV series and movies, or good Western fantasy novels written by Qidian. You have a lot of poisonous points here.

Seeing Chapter 42, I can't stand it anymore. Come on, brothers, I will withdraw first.

This protagonist is really a simple farmer! When a stranger asked to take his sister away, he agreed without even asking.

Can't stand it. . . . If you speak in an ancient style and then in a modern style, you must be crazy. . . . .

I heard that the protagonist's IQ is on the same level as the author's. I'm going to see if the writing is good.

The pig's trotters at the beginning of each chapter give people the feeling that there are delicacies in front of them, but there is a fly on them. So disgusting. None of the popular books are written in this way.

Reading your comments, I don't even want to read the first chapter.

The people who want to persuade people to quit have tried their poison and brought a lot of Chinese names in the Western world.

Boss, can I make a request? Is it okay to stop being a hero or a strong man? It feels like a drama. Maybe you think this is a joke, but in the eyes of readers, it may be a poisonous point. You are not writing a martial arts novel.

When writing about an invincible hero, you must be no longer a child. Why is the character of the protagonist so "water chicken"? Annoying personality.

I haven't read it yet, so I came here because of the title of Invincible Heroes. Although I have played this game series before, I still think the third one is the most classic. The top unit in the subsequent series is an angel, but in the sixth part, the orcs actually have Cyclops to support the scene. . .

Obviously he has traveled through time and become another person, why not change it to that name? Ronis and Li Muyang are so tired of going back and forth.

The number of words in Panda Water is so impressive.

At the beginning of each chapter, Li Muyang said, is it embarrassing?

After playing some games, I came up with the idea to write a book. Poisoning people will not pay for their lives. I was poisoned to death in the first three chapters.

I feel like the author should write martial arts novels. I feel like you can't handle Western fantasy.

Clothed in the skin of an invincible hero, the book is all based on the routines of online game books from many years ago. If it had been written 15 years ago, it would have been a good book.

This book could have been used as a fast-food article ten years ago, but now it is a little outdated, so beginners may be able to read it. Well

Author: Have you graduated from primary school? Lots of typos.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head is in name only, Western skin and Chinese heart, a hodgepodge of all four things.

Li Muyang looked strange. If you have traveled through time, just call him Luo or whatever.

This chapter has good water. What the hell are these desert fragments?

I habitually open the directory, Chapter 6, Tier 4 Arms emmmmm Next

Marilyn Monroe, Michael Jordan, they all have names like that, it's so embarrassing to watch

Is there a bug in Cao Cao? Send one and get two

There are countless exclamation points in every paragraph, as if no matter what you do, you are yelling out. Are you Roaring Dierkan? I can't stand these ubiquitous exclamation marks

FL has a very good book about Invincible Heroes, Yashan Dragon God.

Are you serious about this cover? You're overthinking it🐴

Western Fantasy, a bunch of Chinese names, words and deeds in the style of the Three Kingdoms, what is going on?