Zhen Nanming

When I read the back part, I felt that the writing was very watery, and many of them were written in a running account.

The novels about counterattack and counterattack in the Southern Ming Dynasty are nothing more than the following main lines: national destruction - escape - accession to the throne - taking power - reform - Northern Expedition - self-cultivation - seeking foreign affairs. The first few main lines were okay. The progress of the Northern Expedition was too fast, which made people feel that the Qing army was vulnerable. I think otherwise. At this time, the Qing army still had bargaining chips. At least it could shrink and hit the Ming army hard. In addition, on the occasion of Lu Shen, everyone shaved their hair and prepared to be obedient to the Qing army and the people. When the Ming army brought them back. Every little individual has a complicated mood, a mixture of sorrow and joy, and there are too many things to write about.

Let's put it this way, from the beginning to the end of this book, I couldn't stop at all, wow, wow, wow, kill, kill, kill 👍👍👍

If Zhang Kewang can die in battle, then the Western Army will really become a main force after surrendering to the Ming Dynasty

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No marriage, no indemnity, no land cession, no tribute. The emperor will guard the country, and the king will die in the country. From this passage, we can see that politics in the late Ming Dynasty had lost its elasticity and strategic nature, alas.

I don't know why many people are praising Zheng Chenggong now. He is far worse than Li Dingguo.

It's a pity that a novel with logic and IQ is rare. It's very annoying to see that the top few so-called great writers all write about daily life. I haven't been able to fart for half a year.

There are too many branch lines. The front is fine, but in the middle, there are seven or eight branch lines, and they all have a beginning and no end. 😴😴😴

I felt that the characters in this book were a bit too thin. Good people are good people and upright; bad people are bad people and are heinous. Moreover, the characters are simple-minded, killing the king with a slap on the head, and surrendering with a slap on the thigh. They are so bad that they are natural, and there is no inner conflict at all.

The protagonist of this book can be said to have the least sense of existence, and is completely a one-man show.

This book is relatively brilliant when describing the protagonist Zhu Cixiang and important ministers, but when it comes to writing about minor characters and enemy forces, the level of the book drops significantly, and the language is even procrastinated, making people want to skip it. It is obvious that Zhu Cixiang is quite elegant when writing, but why does he always go down three directions when writing about other people? 😅 Seeing the big from the small is originally a good writing technique, but there is too much ink on the small characters, and the writing is very low, smelly and long. The description of details is really too slow, and a small thing can drag on for several chapters. The beginning is the peak, but the writing becomes worse as it goes on. Before he ascends to the throne, it is fairy grass, and after he ascends the throne, it becomes hay.

The author's historical skills are somewhat interesting. Too many errors and omissions

What kind of great god? What are you afraid of, author? There is no such thing as a great god in the starting point. If it really exists, you are one of them. Those so-called great gods are all zombies. They have great names and cannot read books.

At midnight, Zhu Cilang put down the memorial he had just approved, turned his sore wrist, and couldn't help but feel sad: I finally traveled from my previous life to ancient times and became an emperor. I finally became the protagonist, but in the end, no one named Chen Shuncai had as many scenes. What's this? Could it be that I also became one of those TV dramas in my previous life where I was the leading male lead on the surface, but was actually the second male lead?

I want to talk about this book. I feel that the author is writing here and there, but not the protagonist. The emotional protagonist is a supporting role. They are all about the war in Shandong, the war in Huguang, the war in Sichuan, and the war in Yunnan. I finally finished writing Sichuan and thought it was time to write about the protagonist. Now it seems that I will write about the war in Guangxi again. It is all because of the exhaustion of fighting in various places. Looking at it like this, it feels like good water, good water, good water... All water, parallel imports...

Author, what you are writing now feels like a hammer here and there. The protagonist is almost out of the role, and it feels like there is no main theme. And a little watery

I have already said that the starting point for the protagonist to be the emperor is too high and there is a lot of content that cannot be written. Take a look at the starting point. How many of those who started out as emperors survived? I originally thought that 500,000 would be unsustainable, but I didn't expect you to reach 1 million words, which is amazing 🥱

One thing suddenly occurred to me, Zhu Xi was so pitiful. It was clear that he was an official in other places when the incident of ashes committed by him was recorded in the death certificate. But the daughter-in-law is thousands of miles away from her hometown in Fujian. Even his own son has never seen him a few times. However, a few copies were left behind due to being steamed. The enemy who is not even the unofficial historian writes his story. Even if those people who scold **** are talking about the history of the Song Dynasty compiled by the Mongols, it is only a record. Attack him with this matter, but it is not sure whether it is true or not.

What a surprise. The Northern Expedition was successful and will be over soon!

To be honest, whether it is the late Han Dynasty or the late Tang Dynasty, the country has been in decline and even cannot control many places. The combat power of the Forbidden Army (similar to the Beijing Camp) is still first-class and large in number. However, at the end of the Ming Dynasty, the country was not only able to control the local areas, but also a group of people were unbearable. The speed and outrageousness of the country's demise was beyond that of other dynasties. It was a sudden turn of events.

The writing is quite messy, with a hammer blowing here and there, the perspective changing, and the presence of the pig's feet is too low.

This book is extremely poisonous. You don't need to use your brain to read this book. The protagonist was a history professor before he traveled through time! He doesn't even know if his professor bought it. The protagonist has just become emperor and dares to tax merchants without military power.

I recommend "The Last Emperor of the Ming Dynasty" written by me. If you don't know how to be an eunuch, please give me a free collection and comment! No system, not poisonous! You can read it!

There is no heroine in this book? The protagonist is the emperor? Even if I'm not in a hurry, it's time for the ministers to submit a letter, right?

Li Dingguo and Sun Kewang were both changed by the author to Zhang, which made them look weird.

This is a mindless piece of writing. The author doesn't even know what he's writing about. He takes it for granted.

It's actually over. It seems that I'm lucky and didn't get poisoned by poisonous milk.

Passing by, when will the book be released?

This novel is so well written. I hope the author will work harder. By the way, I would also like to tell all my friends that the bones of the Han Dynasty that traveled through the Ming Dynasty will last forever. Friends can also take a look. The author already has a completed novel of 3 million words. Don't worry.