Quickly Travel Through the Journey of Fulfilling Your Wishes in Life

I didn't like it, so I gave up after reading the third story. On the one hand, the pace was too fast, and I couldn't feel the beginning and end of each story. There were almost no details and no sense of substitution. Some plot turning points were particularly abrupt without foreshadowing, such as the identity of the prince of the wolf boy in the second story. On the other hand, the heroine's character was not established at the beginning. Perhaps in order to shorten the length, the heroine's actions are extremely simple and goal-oriented. It gives me the feeling that she is doing whatever it takes to fulfill the original owner's wish without any bottom line, without her own value judgment As far as my reading experience is concerned, a short story should have at least about ten chapters, including the original story that is detailed and logically self-consistent, the protagonist's brief comments on the original owner, the protagonist's efforts to hide his identity, and other The butterfly effect of others on the protagonist's changes, the protagonist's emotions and responses during the struggle, at least a small climax, a reasonable ending that is different from the original story This article: The original story is a few words, and the story is bloody, the second story is about a father who insists on letting his daughter be ruined, the third story is about loving him to death but still insists on wondering why you don't love me, and the fourth story at the beginning of the story is about staying away from the poor boy without any reason or consequences. Such strong emotions may exist in reality, but the story in a few words obviously does not provide enough support for it, making it exaggerated In the eyes of the female protagonist, the original protagonist is right. For example, in the third story, the heroine pretends to be Bai Lianhua and wants to be with Mr. Su; to be honest, isn't it right for a man with a fiancée to ignore other women? I don't think he has ever failed the original owner in any way; the male protagonist has never accepted the original owner from the beginning to the end, and the original owner insists on giving, and afterwards he is still unwilling to accept why you don't love me; the female protagonist, as a bystander, still feels that the original owner is right. . . In fact, the heroine is quite self-righteous. The original owner was just unwilling to give in. How could he still fall in love after being rejected for so long? However, the heroine directly got together with the hero! It turned out that the main reason was that he would probably scold the female lead for doing these things. The original owner is surrounded by fools, and it is completely impossible to see the change of protagonist and the heroine's behavior of feeling good about herself even though her personality has changed drastically. . . The heroine takes advantage of everyone. At least I can't find any details to prove that the heroine has any real feelings. There is no climax, and the whole process is straightforward. . . In other words, it's not that there is no climax, but that the pace is too fast, and the whole process is climax-like. . . . Maybe it will improve in the later period, but I have no interest in continuing reading The author is probably a student, probably not yet in college. The exaggerated emotions that are taken for granted, the lack of experience and the need to pretend to be adults, so that it is full of loopholes; the writing style generally has to write short stories, and the result is incomprehensible. Of course, if adults who enter society still write like this, it can only be said that they are not suitable for this line of work. . . Sincerely, if you lack experience and have limited writing skills, a longer story will be more palatable than a short story. At least you can explain what you are thinking slowly and clearly. The hidden logic may be long-winded, but at least it will not be confusing Best wishes!

It's so fucking disgusting. Why do you want the heroine to come? Continue to feel nauseous and frustrated? Convinced. Abandon the article.

I admit that I don't have enough patience... I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 5... Although I am not obsessive-compulsive, the writing style of this book is so poor that I have no energy to study the plot, whether it is the characterization of the characters (the prince's transformation is too fast and inexplicable. Anyway, I can't understand a person who doesn't care about another person and love each other at all one second, and suddenly has a crush on someone else the next second... It feels so confusing), or the description of the plot (nothing at all) There are foreshadowings, no ups and downs), or some common sense things (such as visitation rights and custody rights are not clear), there are also various typos (I can actually tolerate this), various misspellings, misuse of words (I really can't tolerate this, the more I read, the more confusing it becomes)... It feels like I am writing randomly, mainly because the author has written more than one book, but it is written like this... Maybe the plot behind it is exciting, but I really can't stand it 😥

Let's clear things up for everyone: don't marry your ex-husband, this chapter. I have recently become obsessed with the plot of beating my wife for a while, chasing my wife so you don't even think about it, and Lei Wu Nao reunites with her. And this chapter of the book is even more shocking than the reunion, and it is directly poisonous. To summarize the key points: 1. The scumbag, Big Pig Hoof, was reborn. Because he was wronged by another woman in his previous life, he remembered the kindness of the original owner. After his rebirth, he asked his father to marry the [original owner] to him. (It's not too shocking. Many heroine novels are written like this, but the one who regrets it is the heroine, but with the subsequent plot, it is very poisonous.) 2. The original owner, as Party A, paid a price for the heroine to complete the task of not marrying her ex-husband. At this time, the author wrote a very poisonous plot. That is, the heroine did not follow the rules due to external reasons, married the reborn big pig's trotters, had children, and enjoyed the care of the original owner from the big pig's trotters. (I don't know why the heroine is so shameless, even if she refuses to do what she asked for after paying the price, she still sleeps with her husband, enjoys the repentance of the scumbag after he has suffered all his life, and has the shamelessness to forgive the scumbag in his identity without permission??? So the original owner has suffered all the sins, and has to pay the price, and send the man to invite the heroine to enjoy it???) 🙂 Author, what do you think? Do you still want to live a better life? ? It feels like the original owner would be so angry that he would be driven out of his wits if he knew about it.

It's very interesting, short and concise, not bad, thank you to the author.

Highly recommend this book. Hahaha, very interesting. There are countless typos, countless grammatical errors and words that do not convey the meaning. After reading five chapters, my stomach hurt from laughing. It's like watching a primary school student scribbling. I really admire the author for having the guts to put this kind of book out and sell it for money.

As other friends have commented, this novel is extremely poisonous. You should be loyal to others when you are entrusted by others, but this heroine makes people speechless. This is a novel that is even free on weekends and cannot be read. It is too poisonous.

Such a heroine is so mean. Why does the original heroine just want to live a good life and find a man for herself? Can't she live without a man? The more the heroine has lived for hundreds of years, the less capable she becomes.

1 Anticlimactic 2 Enjoying life for others 3 The original owner's requirements are also very strange 4 Frustrated 5 Relying on society to let others receive retribution (retribution is the life of ordinary people in society, busy eating and earning money every day) 6 Always missing men 7 Only verbal ridicule for scumbags, and then it's gone! ╮(╯-╰")╭ 8 Hundreds of years have passed, and the heroine has not made any progress at all. Suddenly there is space in the middle, and there is suddenly no description.

After watching it for so long, I really want to complain. The heroine has done tasks a hundred times, and she is still so weak. I am really drunk. Other people's fast-traveling heroines do not say that they have various skills and can make waves.

After reading more than 20 chapters, the writing is not good and the storyline is not attractive. I don't like this kind of quick travel story.

Is it okay for the author to take a snack every time he finishes writing? Check it out, there are so many typos. There are more than two million words, and they are basically all typos.

This quick wear is short, and the follow-up is weak. There are many typos. Every story ends in an anticlimax. Could the ending be written better? I haven't finished writing any of them, so I opened my eyes on the bed next to the next story. And how the heroine's ability is sometimes strong and sometimes weak. There is only one story about the Marquis Mansion that is very detailed and exciting. It ended suddenly, with no follow-up written. It feels like the tone is neither up nor down.

There are so many typos, does the author never catch them? These are all finished articles, and there are still so many typos...

What is this section about? The heroine has experienced so many worlds, why does she still feel so stupid?

This author always likes to end the plot midway, leaving it neither up nor down, which is very frustrating. The bad guy fails once and then disappears. He doesn't get retribution and doesn't repent. This is not a cool article, just clearing mines for everyone.

It feels like the heroine hasn't grown up at all. She's still the same novice from the first to the end. It's time for so many idiots in the world to grow some brains.

Why does the heroine keep getting stupider and stupider? There are a few stories that are okay at the beginning, but become more and more stupid later on. The vicious educated youth part: A group of educated youths married a young girl to the stupid son of a brigade leader for the quota of workers, peasants, and soldiers. (Quotations for workers, peasants, and soldiers were very rare at that time. There were two quotas in one village, so forget it if it was untrue.) The heroine came over and told them that the college entrance examination was about to take place, and the original owner had no grudge against you. Let you repay evil with kindness.

It's so rough that I can't even read it anymore.

Many of the heroine's tasks are to find a good man, and finally give birth to a son for this good man (occasionally a daughter as a gift), and help the man become successful. Although the man is pursued by crazy bees and butterflies after he succeeds, in the end the man still loves her. My impression after reading it is that it's great to be a man 🙂 ps, the original owner's mission to find another man will fail, and men will be reborn, chasing his wife in the crematorium (because the man is powerful, so the woman is abused in the crematorium) 🙂 Also, the heroine is often described as having bruises all over her body after doing it. I don't know, I thought the heroine was beaten. (Yes, the man feels refreshed after do, while the heroine is covered in bruises) The heroine is so pitiful 🙂

There are too many typos. I only read four chapters and found at least a dozen typos.

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There are so many typos, so many are exaggerated

The protagonist is too weak! He was also kidnapped. Oh my god, isn't this kind of fast-traveling story about going from weak to strong? Why is it so weak? What does this mean? See her being kidnapped and beaten?

It doesn't look good. I hope you won't write articles about men who wear clothes.

Alas, I quit. After reading the comments, I couldn't accept it. It's okay to have a fixed male protagonist. If there is no fixed male protagonist, it's better to have no CP at all. It's best to get married and have children in every world. It's such a scumbag. It's better not to bring memories. If you really can't accept it with memories, I didn't read it. I just read the comments. I don't know if it's to complete the task or to get married and have children. Alas, I really can't accept it, so I quit.

I can't stand it anymore 🙂🙂🙂

Just keep it for the finale...