Holy Ancestor of Kowloon

The results are a bit impressive~ I opened the book in October 2017 and almost never stopped updating it. As a result, I only had 300 collections in August 2018. . .

After reading the first 50 chapters, this book contains topics such as useless material, broken engagement, suppression by elders, expulsion from the family, betrayal of childhood sweethearts, fathers I have never met, all kinds of hatred, and alchemy to show off.

What should I do if I want to steal someone else's treasure but I'm embarrassed? Taunt him and then let him take action first, then kill people and get the treasure. . Both Believing and Standing No book on cultivating immortals can break out of this routine.

Who gives the author the courage to charge for more than thirty chapters?

The structure of the work is very good, but the cultivation system is too personalized, and the innovation must be popular to facilitate reading and communication among readers. The simpler the article, the better. You can work hard to appreciate both the refined and the popular, and never let down your talent.

Well, I don't know if the author can see it. Personally, I feel it's not as good as the book Bahuang God of War. It's even worse. First point, you reincarnate as you reincarnate. There are more than 40 pictures. How many times have you mentioned your previous life? Is it necessary? Isn't it better to die if you are so awesome? That was a shameful past life. Also, since you are reincarnated, don't show your ignorance. Since a person at the pinnacle of the Kowloon Continent doesn't know which lineage his father comes from or his skills, if you don't, it will be contradictory. You have to guess. You don't understand, and you are bragging about your past life. Hey The second point is about merchants, trivial things, and they said more than 50 times. This is so powerful. You are just a mother and a sister. It is not very simple to break away from the business with your own ability. Then, after finding another place, after being admitted to the sect and using resources, you can reach the top step by step. Don't insist on being there. When creating conflicts, you must ridicule the protagonist. This is very funny, you know? The third point is the description of combat and the use of martial arts. Let's use a metaphor. When someone attacks you, you use your sunflower acupuncture hand. Don't you think this is ridiculous? Isn't it more exciting? This only makes me feel that the protagonist is a loser who can only use these dirty tricks. So what if he wins? The fourth point, this is also the biggest poisonous point of the rebirth novel. I have no ability to do anything, but I still look down on you. Even Qianlong Continent looks down on me. If you are so awesome, you are dead. Especially when the engagement is broken, the protagonist can be revealed, really. . . The single female protagonist is indeed a very attractive point, but the plot is so bad that even this is useless. Pity. . . . It's a pity

The new book is released, let me leave a footprint!

Is there any relationship between the Nine Dragon Saint Ancestor and the Nine Dragon Dao Ancestor? I saw these two books in the monthly ticket red envelope at the same time

Regardless of this one, let's look at the ones that have been written before. Good luck with this one too!

There is too much nonsense. One-third of the whole book describes the hearts of people who eat melons. Even the most serious things are just too small to mention. If you are impatient, don't read it.

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This is obviously taking someone else's body and calling it rebirth

Sign in, author, come on, keep it up!

I would like to know how many books the author has written in total?

The single heroine makes me so excited

Hu Ying'er is also a beauty and has a special physique. Why hasn't she been upgraded to the Nine-Level Dragon Sky? ? ? Could it be that this character was directly eaten by the author? ? ?

I haven't read it yet, but I really admire the author. It's going to be a big hit, come on

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

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