A Wisp of Divine Consciousness That Can Quickly Travel Through

To be honest, some of the stories are really exciting, and I enjoyed reading them. But the sudden ending and running to the next world is very painful. Wouldn't it be nice to write each story longer? The early stage is so well written, but the middle and later stages are too fragmented. I really can't stand it until the end. It's too fragmented and too messy.

I'm really speechless. The heroine has so much spending power, but she doesn't know that she needs to buy a protective magic weapon! He was easily overcome by resentment and didn't even take revenge. Hehe.

This article is really arbitrary. Every story in the end is only half. If you can't finish writing, just change the channel. Just change the channel frequently. The heroine's character changed several times in a short period of time. In the end, it was inexplicable. It was really 6

This article is so well written, haha, so good that I can't even read it. These three views are simply unacceptable. In order to create a good image for the heroine, he writes others so viciously and highlights the good qualities of the heroine. This is probably not a mental illness.

After reading this book, I'm afraid I won't want to touch novels again in the near future 😭😭😭I'm afraid I'll be confused if I see this kind of tailless article again

Abandoned, not to mention the writing logic or anything else, every story is the same as the big one, only half of it. Maybe I don't have enough experience, and I really can't adapt to this kind of fast-traveling story that has one story and one pitfall, but it's not filled in yet.

The heroine is too much of a virgin!

The beginning is good, but people who read it are choked from the middle to the end. The whole story is half, inexplicably time-traveled, the protagonist's soul is injured inexplicably, and inexplicably runs away again. The domineering in the early stage, the powerlessness in the later, and the final ending is so sloppy, especially the last few stories are topsy-turvy, always half-written, and filled with all kinds of powerlessness of the protagonist. In the end, the golden finger is gone and he is still controlled. It's so uncomfortable.

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to abandon it. Every subsequent story is abandoned only at the beginning, which is a waste of emotions and money.

The missing chapter is inexplicable. After reading the pirated version of the supplement, I found that there are no missing chapters or missing chapters at the end, which is almost the same, with all kinds of anticlimactic ends. One plot is not explained clearly before going to the next story... So regardless of whether there are missing chapters or not, it is actually a beginning but no end.

Wow, big update! I hope you have it in stock. Am I too greedy?

The first part is still very exciting, but what the heck appears at the back, the writing is like a running account, there is no main line, thinking about it as it comes out, people who read it will be drowsy and still don't know what it means. It's a pity, this article

I feel like the heroine is a little weird. Is it my imagination? 🤫

What does it mean to finish the whole book😰😭

The missing chapter is serious. I can't stand it anymore. I need to retreat in time.

I feel that the heroine's outlook on life is a bit skewed, and she harmed many innocent people during the mission, such as Xu Ting's fiancé.

Wenwen is fine, but why are there always missing chapters?

I found that there is an advantage to frequent time-travel errors like this, that is, I can force the next world after writing half the story. But it feels much better than a real trap. The protagonist's experience of different forms of time travel makes people feel very fresh. This pot of messy stew is very satisfying.

After reading the first story, I always felt that those women were not human beings, but a group of pets whose only skill was to invite pets.

Good guy, I was about to add the book to my bookshelf, only to realize that it had been collecting dust on my bookshelf for a long time. The bookshelf category said: There are still few chapters 😂

The content of this book is so exciting, why has no one read it? Why? What's the reason? ? ? I can't figure it out. I can't figure it out.

Are there chapters missing from each volume? Can't watch anymore

I don't know if the pirated version is missing chapters.

I like such a bad heroine, never a virgin heroine

It was super uncomfortable╯╰. When I was reading it, I realized that there were serious missing chapters. I thought Desert Rose was very beautiful, but suddenly there were missing chapters at the end. Alas:-(

Dear author, have you not saved the manuscript?😭

No update for two days😭

There are too many missing, many things cannot be connected.

Starting from the third volume, there is no ending. What are you reading?

After seeing the comments, I felt sorry for the author and went to a male channel to write.