Infinite System Apocalypse

I skipped through a few of them. The writing is good, but it feels a bit messy. As soon as Alcatraz opens, the protagonist says something before the lady speaks. I don't know. It feels like you just want to rationalize the protagonist's abnormal abilities in the game. The method is a bit stiff. The previous two stories belong to the category of niche readers. Of course, it may be that I am ignorant. Most of the stories are routines, and the protagonist is unclear. I suggest the author stop typing for a while, read one of your own novels, and then think about what kind of novel you want to write. Is it scary to be confused? What is scary is chaos. Someone left a message on my book list asking me to take a look. If you think my message is useless or offensive, please inform me and I will delete the message or you can do it yourself.

Rubbish, the overall IQ is not online,,.

Oh my, my, your, your, can you not write it in such a pretentious way? Do you want the characters to look more serious, or are you just pretending to be pretentious?

The same chapter names are the most annoying, let's go

The genre of the book does not match the character of the protagonist. It would be much better if the protagonist could kill more decisively.

For a children's book, the parenting experience is very good, but it is a pity that it does not have pinyin, which would be even more perfect.

Why does Zhang Fan's character seem to have changed?

The writing is okay, but there are a lot of typos!

It's good for a newcomer to write this book, but the routine seems a bit awkward.

After reading the first 45 chapters... I really can't stand it anymore...

IQ is in arrears………………

Bosses are welcome to read. Welcome everyone to comment. 🌹 I hope it won't last ten thousand years alone...

After reading this I felt like I was frightened