The Rise of the Human Race

Damn, I've added a book list for you. Please leave me a recommendation. Thank you!

Come over for a walk, cheers for the author~

Hasn't the second book started yet?

I also wrote a time-travel system novel "Unifying the Spring and Autumn Period"

What the hell, it's gone now, it's too wilted and I can't write anymore

I have been reading this book for so long and now I have finished it? What's going on

Well, how should I put it, if it's my first time writing it, it's pretty good. I, who have been watching it for more than ten years and whose appetite is too high, feel that it is not good. The writing style is relatively new and the subject matter should be relatively new. The time-travel description at the beginning is not handled very well. There is no key point and there is no way to grab the reader's interest at once. Although it is not required to be brilliant at the beginning to read historical articles, at least the first few chapters are very important. Everyone is so busy and there are not many readers who are patient. The setting of the emperor system is so-so. I don't see anything special in the first few chapters. I think it is very likely that the setting is not clear enough, and it will be easy to write badly if it is not handled well in the future. In short, practice writing first. If there are not many fans urging you to update, I suggest you take a break first, go back and revise and revise it again, at least until now, you must have some experience. The above is a gift in return for following my book list, come on 🤭