A Generation of Fairy

After reading Chapter 7, I just couldn't help but complain. It doesn't matter if the article is noisy. There are few fantasy novels that aren't noisy, but I can't stand the bugs! Has the consciousness of the Qin family monks been destroyed? Can't find a mortal eavesdropping? Don't say you didn't pay attention during the meeting! Even if the elders are not monks and have no spiritual consciousness, they can still be regarded as martial arts masters with profound internal strength in the mortal world. Can't they find an ordinary person? Not to mention the high strength of the special forces, the body of a soul-piercing special forces is not the same as before, and the strength value is hairy! There is another mortal who can actually tie with the third level of Qi Refining. Qin Ge did not enter the Tao through martial arts! And they haven't even entered Taoism yet! Qin Ke'er is not at the first level of Qi refining when he just introduced Qi into his body. Could it be that Qin Ke'er's third level cultivation is not inhaling spiritual energy but 💩? The most unbearable thing, what makes me really unhappy is that her mother has destroyed her spiritual roots! ! ! No matter whether there is a hidden plot or foreshadowing in this paragraph, what her mother said is totally making people curse: "Scumbag! MDZZ!" Even if her mother destroyed the spirit root to protect little Qin Ge, she, a late-stage foundation-building monk who had been in the world of immortality for about a hundred years, thought that a helpless useless mortal in a family of monks would be safer than a genius with ice spirit roots? If you say you hope your daughter will be safe and sound like a mortal, then you should send her to the mortal world and find an honest person to entrust her to! As a result, he left after being destroyed. Xiao Qinge was only 3 or 4 years old at that time, and he actually lived to be 10 years old before dying! If there is any secret behind this girl, it must be to seal or cover up the spiritual roots, but the result is ruined! Destroying a person's path to immortality is like killing his parents! Xiao Qinge is so miserable! All the grudges and grievances are over, I just suffered in vain! This girl is definitely not a kisser! In particular, he even said in a high-sounding way that "he will die in the morning after hearing the Tao". This is simply an insult to the "Tao"! ! ! Let's not talk about the issue of "Tao" or "Tao". In layman's terms, if you don't listen to Tao, can you avoid death? ? Are you saying that a mortal can live longer than a monk? ! ! This girl has such a weird mind! I absolutely don't believe it when you say that I have no grudge against Xiao Qinge! ! !

1. It feels like Zhu Yan is the male protagonist, haha! As for the question of whether there should be a male protagonist, I think there can be a male protagonist. After all, the process of cultivating immortals must have seven emotions and six desires, and the emotional line can be developed. But after all, it is a female protagonist, so it is understandable that the male protagonist has relatively few roles. 2. I just discovered this book today and have read all the chapters that have been updated. I hope the author can continue to update more. Although I feel that the progress of the article is not fast, the description of the content is very clear, and the author has buried several foreshadowings in the front, such as the heroine's blood problem, Tianjimen, the formation that Qin Ge's mother used to keep her alive, the gray things in the sea of consciousness, the continent where Zhu Yan is located, etc. 3. The author's setting of the heroine's Nine Spiritual Roots feels very novel, and the layout is also very large. However, the Nine Spiritual Roots are not easy to write about. The most mentioned one right now is the Golden Spiritual Root, which is also the most useful. The Wood, Fire, and Water Spiritual Roots are also mentioned. The other spiritual roots have not been fully written yet. I look forward to the author's next story. 4. As far as immortality stories are concerned, I have read a lot. In my opinion, except for some classic immortality stories, such as: The Ultimate Female Immortal and The Story of a Female Couple's Cultivation of Immortality, it is hard to find good ones now. 5. As long as the author's future content will not deviate from the main line and can present us with a perfect story, I will definitely follow it! Come on, author!

Personally, I think that novels about cultivating immortals should not have Taoist companions, but they should have emotional scenes. People are not stupid, and they naturally have emotions and desires. It is normal for others to be good, and others will like you if you are good. However, nothing is perfect in the world. To become an immortal, you must slowly correct your own shortcomings and become stronger. As time goes by, how much can you possibly maintain that relationship? Furthermore, how will you survive when the demons come to haunt you? There is a certain reason why Taoists and Buddhists do not get married.

I feel that if you have a Taoist companion to cultivate immortality, your skills will be broken and you will never ascend.

I just saw the door panel in Chapter 36, saying that the protagonist stood in a military posture without asking or being cared about, and then stood until he fell while walking. Is he a fool? How could the author's thinking be so stupid?

It's just nine spirit roots. Let's see how many attributes the top female fairy has at the end.

It's okay to plagiarize various novels, but after plagiarizing, they contradict each other. When you start to practice, slow down because people around you are not that fast, but you can find the reason for this, she is just messing around. As a modern soul who has gone through compulsory education, can you learn well and deliberately fail to learn well? And she shouldn't be a special soldier, most of them are ordinary soldiers. And go practice military boxing... The special forces would probably choose Sanda. Her mother gave her a box that could only be opened with spiritual power. No one from a cultivator family who coveted her skills thought about opening it? Is it easier to grab a box from a three-year-old child, or is it easier to wait for her foundation-building mother to come back and ask for the technique? As for the explanation for sealing the spiritual roots, her mother gave her completely contradictory explanations. It can be said that today's children's animations are much more logical than what the author wrote.

The story is blunt, the reasons are strong, and the geniuses in it are all mentally retarded! ! ! ! I have no desire to read any more! ! ! Low IQ, can't afford to get hurt! ! ! !

Come on, author💪 Come on, keep updating

😂God damn special forces. I haven't watched this kind of meme for many years because I'm so scared of it. I have only read this book for a while. Although I am afraid that it is too poisonous, after all, the performance of the heroine... Well, it is barely satisfactory. Let's take a look first. If I keep inserting things from the past life and the heroine's performance cannot keep up with the identity setting, I will give up.

Seeing the interaction with Zhu Yan in Yaoyuan, I was a little speechless. The male protagonist can have it. When he meets a special man like this, he seems to change his personality. For a novel about cultivating immortals, it can happen in minutes.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Has it become a trap?

The writing style is not that interesting... Sigh, I can no longer stand such a straightforward narrative...

After reading three chapters, I couldn't stand it at all. Three immortal cultivating disciples met a mortal little girl on the road and took her back to the sect without knowing her origin. This was too ambitious. There are also various logics that are inconsistent with ordinary people's understanding, so you can only abandon the book decisively!

It's very embarrassing to watch😰

The heroine's acting style, facial expressions and psychological changes are inconsistent with the setting. The special forces soldiers with many years of experience will not be stale, and her expression management is not good. She gets angry when watching the drama.

A small suggestion to the author. You don't need to write in detail about things that are not related to the main plot. You only need to give a general outline. Also, you don't need to repeat a conjecture so many times about the heroine's psychological activities. It is really verbose (for example, in the chapters about changing fate against the will of heaven, the heroine repeatedly thought to herself that impermanence stabbed herself. To remind herself, the author can read this paragraph. I counted how many times it appeared, at least 7 times)

How should I put it? The author's writing style is not very good, but it is useful enough. The words are relatively smooth and can explain things clearly. The shortcoming is that there are too many routines, and it is a combination of bad things. The only bright spot so far is the heroine's Nine Spiritual Roots. For most old bookworms, too many routines are the biggest poisonous point. Then there is the logic. We should try to avoid flaws like logic, otherwise it will look too unfavorable. The last question about character design is that in the world of cultivation, strength is respected, and the heroine is a mere mortal. Where does she have the courage to speak in a cold tone like the pride of heaven? Based on the background of the author's article and the heroine's situation, the heroine is more suitable for a character that is round on the outside and square on the inside. When her strength is low, she should be more diplomatic and put herself down. This is what normal people do. Even pretending to be a white lotus flower, pretending to be weak and helpless is more comfortable than the heroine, who is a mortal but has the aura of a king. She has no strength and pretends to be aloof, which is really unpleasant.