The Great Road of Creation

As title. We are reading stories, not asking you to popularize science about various realms over and over again. There are a lot of verbose and running accounts. In addition, author, have you ever considered not using profits to test people's hearts? The primitive world is the naked law of the jungle. If you show off a spiritual treasure everywhere, you are looking for death, okay? If you know you need to cultivate yourself and don't rush to find something to practice it, you will end up wandering around. Do you want to say that you are awesome? I think you are an idiot

It's been updated. I've saved several hundred points and it's enough.

Well, I just think so! The human race is the protagonist. What kind of beasts and demons are you writing about now? Readers will not feel immersed in it when reading it. Even if people read books at a glance, you will feel a little bit involved.

I don't understand how the author wrote it. I thought the first volume was pretty good at the beginning, but after the second volume, the pattern dropped straight away. It didn't give me any points in terms of magnanimity, and it just fell straight down. First of all, the pattern gave me the feeling that it was too small, and the prehistoric era was infinite. This can be expressed in not just a few years, but decades, hundreds, and thousands of years. The evolution of species is too short, at least it takes millions or quadrillions of years. Also, the cultivation level is really too low. If I were to transform into a new form, I would at least have a Golden Immortal or a Da Luo. After all, I have such a high foundation. Also, the number of ethnic groups is really too small. Of course, there are still some things that haven't been added, but that's probably what it means

The sea, you have so much water, because you have so much water, you become the sea, this is the sea, because there is so much water, so the author, you really have so much water 😎😎😎😎

The author still has some ideas. But there are many problems with expression, such as leapfrogging, which is too poisonous. For example, he comes from a good family, but his cultivation level is so low, and he still wanders around and is poisonous. For example, the expression is a bit like reading martial arts novels 😵

At the beginning, the prehistoric prince was not very impressive.

It feels like the protagonist is like a landlord with a hand of two kings, four 2s, four aces, and 4 kings. The opponent is one of the two farmers, one of whom is the protagonist's teammate, and then loses.

Your content is very nutritious, but your resume is too simple. You are the first living being in the world and the mentor of the leaders of the three tribes. Your resume is your face. If you don't have a grand temperament or a lazy and awesome temperament, others will not want to read it when they see it.

It was okay in the early stages, but it became more and more verbose and unreadable in the later stages. I skipped through the later stages, and there was nothing interesting at all. Also, the plot developed too slowly. If it could return to the level of the early stages, this book would still be very good.

Too complicated, too laborious. Angry

What kind of rubbish is this? If you know you can't innovate, don't create it. It's a mess that's neither good nor good. It's tiring to read.

When I saw the introduction, I really wanted to say something. I might as well write the protagonist as a Daoist, so that I can reach the full level directly, and I can finish it in one chapter.

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This book is a bit of a pity. I don't have the patience to read it. The author should make it simpler. It makes people look so complicated and uncomfortable to read. The content seems too different from the introduction.

Introduction is a big problem, do fellow Taoists have any suggestions?

Do you have any opinions? Do you think there is any pitfalls? The author is in urgent need of opinions! !

The author's description of the protagonist is a bit sparse, which makes people think that the protagonist did nothing and only let his subordinates fight. I still have some questions. 1. Can the main character return to level 24? 2. Can the Pangu tribe come back? 3. How does the environment of the northern and southern continents compare with the damaged western continent? 4. Will the remaining northern and southern continents raise the world level to another level from the original? 5. Does Hongjun still need to be together? 6. What are the postures of the creatures in the northern and southern continents? 7. Can the protagonist still master the Chaos Clock? 8. Should the protagonist create his own training system? Hongjun founded the Immortal Way, and the protagonist cannot be worse than him. 9. There are three realms of heaven, earth and man. The heavenly realm has been born. Does the protagonist want to promote the evolution speed of the earthly realm and the human realm? 10. Judging from the disappearance of the North and South Continents and the disappearance of the Taoist Taoist in the original work, is the Heavenly Dao the Hunyuan Realm? Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year, and that after it is put on the shelves, it will surpass the prehistoric times of the same period. 😃

As an old bookworm, I didn't understand

In the early stage of your writing, you said that you were suppressed and were not allowed to surpass the Taiyi Golden Immortal. However, later on, the Demon God of Destruction appeared and came directly to the Hunyuan realm. The reason you wrote was simply untenable for people to read. Also, in the early stage, you were suppressed in the Taiyi Golden Immortal realm and could only fight with your body. Taiyi Golden Immortal is Taiyi Golden Immortal. The body must be of higher quality than your Celestial Immortal and Golden Immortal. During the fight, we still don't know who will die and who will live. There is also this aura of destruction, which is absorbed and cultivated by monks. It is equivalent to spiritual energy. How can it be possible to destroy the world at any time just by relying on the aura of destruction? It is not that exaggerated to control the mana cultivated in the body in any realm or using formations or other means. Otherwise, those chaos demons The descendants of God have done anything. The world has just opened the Chaos Qi. People everywhere in the world say that the Chaos Qi is more harmful than your Destruction Qi. That day and the earth have been destroyed long ago. To be honest, it is like the dragon and phoenix catastrophe. The Lich catastrophe is a racial catastrophe and has not risen to the catastrophe of world annihilation. They are all limited to the realm of Taiyi Golden Immortal. I haven't seen such a catastrophe that destroyed the world. I feel like you are getting more and more boring after writing the first catastrophe. It is purely for people to read the chapters before it is released on the water, but it is not good to wait until you can read it and put it on the shelves. It is better to start writing directly from the catastrophe of the ferocious beast. The realm that has not been improved and cannot be cultivated in the dozens of early chapters is really boring to read in this first catastrophe.

It's been a while since I've watched Honghuangliu, and I felt refreshed when I read it again. The writing has a good rhythm and is readable🌹🌹