A Mistaken Flirtation with My Husband

Coming from a column, I would like to share my thoughts after reading thirty-six chapters of this novel: The writing style is witty and humorous, which is my favorite type. It can be seen that the author writes more casually, writing wherever he thinks, which is quite enjoyable to read. Especially the part where she sewed the banknotes into her belly pocket and then squatted down to take them out in full view of the public. The male protagonist was so disgusted when he saw the fat bumps all over her body that it made me laugh out loud. Novels are meant for relaxation, and reading them without thinking is a good idea. Just like after watching some depressive anime, I like to find some harem comedy to relax. However, this method has a shortcoming: the main line is unclear, and there are too many funny daily routines that affect the speed of the plot. In the first few dozen chapters, it is best to have a main line that is somewhat attractive on the surface, and then dig a few more attractive pits. After reading twenty or thirty chapters and there is still no small climax and interesting pitfalls, it will make people feel that it is not exciting! The author may be more suitable to write complaints about light novels in SF! After all, light novels are about humorous daily life, so there should be no starting point for being so miserable! (It's a bit heartbreaking, don't hit me) There is also the setting that the protagonist is a fat woman, which is quite funny from a man's perspective. But if you are a girl, you might prefer an ordinary heroine with a bit of cuteness and a virgin heart? Or is it the setting of an idiot girl who is confused and often makes mistakes and is asked to clean up the mess? And then he was attracted by a domineering CEO, a cold prince, a powerful emperor, the Lord of the Three Realms, the Master of the Immortal Family, etc.? Then betray the world for her or something. After all, this may provide a more immersive experience and allow oneself to be involved. You must know that many female channels are full of unintelligent young people! She only stayed at the level of appreciation that Prince Charming came to pick her up when she was in junior high school. Otherwise, a woman is an animal that does not grow up. So your eye-catching and obscene fat lady setting may have affected many girls' sense of belonging! It doesn't feel very flattering, although I find it quite funny. Or maybe it's because there's a lack of routines like showing off and slapping someone in the face! After all, this is what readers like. There are just a few bad and vulgar tricks used by male channels to show off and get slapped in the face. I don't know about female channels, but I guess they set up a few little bitches to compete for favor. At first, they torture the female protagonist twice, and then they are slapped hard in the face by the female protagonist. Also, although the author used the heroine's mouth to complain at the beginning about how he was not treated as Mary Sue as other heroines in time travel novels, in fact, he still could not break through the limitations of Mary Sue novels.

The writing is joyful and the language is humorous. It is a good book. Kudos to the author!!

Happy Laba Festival! Huahua, in a beautiful mood!

The story is very exciting and the plot has interesting twists and turns. I wish you a great success in your new book!

Huahua's column is good, and the book is also beautiful! Wait for the update! 🌹🌹🌹

Thank you, Sister Hua, for finishing the book!

Sister Huahua, do you plan to end it?

Very nice. 🙂

Sister Huahua is full of passion and vitality for life every day, a role model to learn from!

Thank you for your support🙏