Iron Fist Maker

To be honest, this one is pretty good. Here's a suggestion: if you're writing about martial arts, don't write about the power of blood or anything like that.

From being jerky at the beginning, to now I feel that the plot development is a bit easy. Brother, I have made rapid progress~ The most difficult part is to connect the emotional drama with the plot, so as to portray different characters, add contradictions, and attract people's appetite. I'm optimistic about you.

Happy New Year, new year, new atmosphere, let's burst out with great power

Hahaha, Happy New Year, man~ I've been working overtime lately😭 and I haven't had a chance to play anymore.

Why is there something missing in this chapter? It's not enjoyable to read.

It's almost New Year's Eve. Happy New Year, I wonder if Tekken is single?

The plot is becoming more and more readable ~ Come on, Happy New Year! !

At first glance, he looks like the maker of iron rats.

I've been busy taking exams and haven't read a book for a long time.

Brother, come on, the plot I have recently written is compact and very immersive. To answer the name of the algorithm you mentioned, I think you can look at some traditional myths and stories to find inspiration, such as the Book of Mountains and Seas. I think it will be helpful~ Also, the background of the plot can be enlarged, such as around ruins and exercises. Finally, I am not sure about the tone of the article. The scenes of other supporting characters need to be considered to highlight the characteristics of each person, which makes the reading very realistic~ That's all I can think of, and finally come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I'm optimistic about you