Brilliant Clothes Against the Ming Dynasty

The writing is very good, but there is a problem in Chapter 16. You can write that saving Han Siye is a systematic task, but you can't write that the protagonist agrees to save her father when Han Xiyue cries. Why, just because she is good-looking? He's almost dead, but he's still trying to pick up girls, and his words don't match his words. I said before that the protagonist is very sane, very smart, etc., But he is almost dead, and he still makes random promises. If he rescues Huang Taiji's princess and asks to save her father, do you want to save her? If you save her, Huang Taiji will definitely kill the protagonist in order to cover up that he was captured. Tens of thousands of people will surround him and beat him. You are not writing a fairy tale or fantasy, okay? If you don't save him, you won't be able to complete the mission, and you will die anyway. This is simply the biggest drawback and poisoning point.

Author, if you write like this, you are deceiving the readers. You can write a report to Lu Wenzhao, threaten the protagonist to rescue Hu Qingqing, and give a certain reward. You cannot write that as soon as Hu Qingqing is captured, you will issue a mission asking the protagonist to rescue him. You have written that the protagonist will revolt in the later stage, so the same situation happens when you encounter other female characters. The robbers are several top masters in the world, and they are not like family disciples, such as Buddhism. At this time, the robbers ask the protagonist to rescue them alone. Do you want to go? If you go to rescue him, you will probably be beaten to death, because you wrote that after the uprising, everyone in the world knew that the protagonist could summon "ghost soldiers", so there would definitely be precautions. If you don't save it, the mission will fail. In the later stage, if the mission fails, more than one general will probably be taken back, so you might as well write a fanfic. If you encounter the same situation later and the protagonist doesn't save it, it will be disgusting. The author's writing is still very good, but I hope that after the author has finished writing, he will check it, change places and think about it before posting. When writing, he should write from the perspective of God, and when checking, he should look at it from the worst reader's mind. As long as you are not a prisoner, you have a high chance of becoming a god. Come on!

Chang'an sent troops to win a hundred battles, but how could he be as ambitious as the King of Hanzhong? The hearts of the seven armies are all fierce, and they will soar with wings in the tiger's pocket. The Jingyi can sweep across the sky, and Baidi City is as high as a wall. The fodder and horses are ready for war, and the sound of thunder is rising in the sun of the Yin Mountains. It has been dark and rainy for more than ten days, and the Han River has overflowed into the sky. Canghuang had no time to keep pace with the troops, climbing and trampling, half dead and wounded. Don't you want to run away if you are poor? Looking around is as vast as the sea. The turtles sing and the fish leap in fear. Who dares to fight if the enemy comes? Invited to see the large ship carrying flags and drums, I heard that it was Guan Yunchang. Meng Chong goes straight around Chang Ti, and his powerful crossbow and powerful bow are invincible. Although there is an iron cavalry, what can be done? Clearing the waves is like a galloping horse. The general surrendered his hands and was bound, his speech was speechless and his face was dark. Jieshu arrived at Jincheng one day and headed west without turning back. The general has betrayed his friends in the past, but if this is prosperous, he can still survive. Although the cycle of revenge is provided by God, the only thing a strong man cherishes is fame. Cao Man had known each other for thirty years, but Pang Mingxian was unable to catch up with him in times of crisis. When he came back, his head was white and haggard, and his head was full of tears, which was particularly pitiful. Why is Gao Ling's portrait so strange? It makes people feel ashamed and painful. The master of Feishui is the most brave in the world, and the success or failure of heroes is accidental. A poem titled "General Yu" by Kong Pingzhong of the Northern Song Dynasty

Come on, write it well, and don't be sloppy. It's a good story that depends on how you write it.

The Qi family sword is quite handsome, the Yanling sword is also good, and the double sword is also good.

This book is okay. It's quite interesting to read. I'm looking forward to the plot later. I hope the author can add more chapters every day. I can't get enough of it.

Elite soldiers, does it mean elite soldiers in your book? If so, then I doubt if the White Lotus sect is worthy of this term? For example, during the Three Kingdoms period, the trapped camp, Euphorbia Death Soldiers, Tiger and Leopard Cavalry, Liangzhou Iron Cavalry, and Bingzhou Wolf Cavalry were all elite divisions, and they were all killed on the battlefield.

General flag? Reminds me of "Xiu Chun Knife" again