Little Mr. Tang

I came across this novel by chance. It cannot be said to be a wonderful novel, but it is also a good book that makes people forget the time while reading it, and sometimes makes them laugh unconsciously. The author's previous introduction is much better than the introductions of many popular novels. This is how I clicked in. I also just clicked in and found that your writing is interesting and interesting. It is interesting, but it is somewhat childish and feels like an idol drama. Some descriptions and scenes are omitted. For example, the end of Chapter 150 is very abrupt: a smoke bomb, and Ouyang Le takes the opportunity to escape. 😠Do you think you are playing a word game? 😫 Oh my god, you can't change it: he threw a smoke bomb and took the opportunity to escape, or Ouyang Le threw a smoke bomb and took the opportunity to escape. Isn't that okay? If you write it like that, it will make you feel uncomfortable when reading it. Personal opinion: 1. Please read it through after writing a chapter to see if there are any typos, whether the article flows smoothly, and some scenes should be fuller. Don't write too briefly. The reader's imagination is not big enough to fill your simple scenes. 2 Please don't divide a chapter into several chapters. Even if you don't have time, don't always write 1,000 words a day. Even the KKK is better than you 😫 3. When the characters appear, please explain their names carefully. Don't suddenly appear a person and suddenly speak something. When I read Chapter 7, I thought the dumplings spoke. There are many character names in the following chapters that appear at inappropriate times. I don't know whether the author did it on purpose or it's just the style of writing, but it's quite entertaining to watch. The author's writing is sometimes very fascinating and sometimes very childish. I hope the author will change. Although there are many problems but not many poisonous points, and there are many routines but very innovative, this book is still worth reading. But no matter how good the book is, it's still in vain if not many people read it. There are not many posts in the discussion area, which is too light 😅. You can also use a small account to increase your popularity, advertise with others, and get some recommendation votes to improve your ranking. It's possible that the author doesn't care about not being in VIP, but if not many people see it, won't you lose enthusiasm? I think the author's writing style is not bad. If he writes a few more books, another high-quality author may appear. I hope the author can work hard to improve himself. I hope to read more interesting novels. In one sentence--please recommend yourself! ! !

Come and visit the rich man. Can't get it

It's pretty good, but no one is watching it

It's really pretty, that's right... There are really a lot of typos. There's nothing wrong in the front, but there's a bit too many in the back.

This book is really good and worth reading.

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