Chivalrous Nine Heavens

Come on, I want to be an old fan 😄

Nong Nong's martial arts style. This is high-quality writing. But why is it written so slowly?

An author with profound knowledge and experience. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it, please update more.

Collected, martial arts writing is very difficult, create well, stick to it, and live up to your original intention of creation, come on~ The trumpet has voted for it

I exist in your wonderful world, in your pits, and in your updates~ Update, update, beat the gongs and drums for updates!

Seven words floated across the sky, update update update quickly. I want to pick a flower and give it to you~

The cool moonlight makes me miss you like a river, turning into renewal to protect me. Look at this renewal, it is long and numerous. Like this pole, it's long and wide.

It's written very seriously, but the fighting plot is still lacking.

Catch an author who secretly updates. Everyone, come and watch him. If you don't update next time, I will roast and eat this lazy author~🤭

How about changing your profile? 😰

The content is well written, but the main background line is not very clear. The author, please give it a try

Non-professionals wrote it based on their feelings, for reference only: there is no storyline, I always feel that if you meet a villain and have a few rough conversations, then they start fighting, and the length of the battle between the two is too long. The details are not well described. Do you need to add some exterior scenes, psychological descriptions, etc.? Otherwise, it always feels like a running account when reading. There is also the fact that the protagonist has great martial arts skills, but his personality is not highlighted and he has too few inner thoughts. Whether he is a pretentious and venomous person or an upright and majestic person is too unreliable. In addition, I especially want to give the male protagonist a male protagonist who is full of evil spirits, has a poisonous tongue and plays tricks, and is at the level of a magician. The male supporting role is responsible for causing trouble, fighting cocks and walking dogs. The male protagonist is responsible for handling the incident, pampering and stroking the dog's head. As for the heroine, cough cough cough. Or should I add some dialogue? Interactive? Come on, the action descriptions are really great!

If you want a more rigorous and objective evaluation, you can go to the "New Book Investment Group" and leave a message in the circle to ask for professional evaluation. This way you can identify your own shortcomings and advantages. I highly recommend it. I still want to say that many great gods have countless unknown vests on their way to becoming gods. Those books that confer gods are all produced by the vest shop. So for the first book, you need to calm down and don't give up!

Damn, I still feel that I don't want to interfere with your writing pace. I just want to take a look and ultimately follow your ideas. Just a small suggestion, should you adjust the chapters? Just leave one or two iconic ones to kill the villains in the front, highlight the character and psychological thoughts of the male protagonist, etc. Adjust other villains to be encountered later. I felt that it was too long-winded at the beginning, and even skipping it would not have any impact on the plot (maybe I was too inexperienced and didn't see the intention. Maybe it was a foreshadowing, and I was too nervous to pay attention). When I went to the city and met people, it became lively and exciting. If you come here to read online articles, if the first one or two chapters do not catch your attention, you will most likely not read the essence of the rest.

Oh my God! He was actually named! I want to pass out with happiness, my heart is spinning in circles~~~Don't think that this can stop the update (picking up the small whip ruthlessly) Hahaha. I still hope you don't want to be a eunuch. It will become more and more exciting in the future. I like it so much. You don't want us to live or die after performing the little theater in your own mind! After all, I have worked so hard to code nearly 100,000 words, and it makes me heartbroken just thinking about it! If you want to continue writing novels in the future, it is best to finish one first, so that you can experience the shortcomings and sadness during the period, and of course continue to carry forward the advantages. Only in this way can we lay the foundation for more exciting novels in the future. That's what I think, but it's not necessarily right. (Crying like a storm)