Beast Husband in the World of Beasts Is Cute

It's too wordy, the descriptions are monotonous, and it feels too boring to read.

It's very good-looking. I hope it can be done faster. Please get a recommendation ticket and come on.

How verbose! I'm about to collapse! 😭

This chapter is so long-winded! How come the heroine has so many tricks, but her actual power in the book is so small? Tens of thousands of years of life have been stolen from their original bodies, and countless orcs across the continent have also had 99% of their lifespan stolen silently. The heroine herself is clearly capable of killing those culprits. Although it is a little troublesome to find those people, she can still find them. What kind of people are waiting for them to act? Why has there been no movement since then? Have you forgotten to write it?

The background and story structure of the novel are not bad, but the character creation is a failure. I saw more than 100 chapters, and I was fighting mutant beasts in some forest. I had just sealed three mutant beasts, and they were not dead yet (each mutant beast was at a higher level than the orcs present, so they couldn't defeat the mutant beasts). There were about 20 more mutant beasts that surrounded me, and I actually still had time to chat. The heroine is very powerful, but she can't take action. She is so speechless and can only say hehehe. The female protagonist also feels like a plug-in for the male protagonist, or it can be said to be a humanoid NPC exclusive to the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists are very poor. This can only be a short article to kill time. At the beginning of the article, the heroine complained about White Lotus. I just want to say that the heroine is almost the same

Very similar to the framework of Reborn Soul Scent Master