Online Games: Heaven, Earth, and World

I think the writing is better than mine, it's amazing

Also, the cheat appeared in Chapter 5, right? Automatically learn skills. It's too late, we have to move to the first chapter. It can be designed like this The protagonist is a ragged blacksmith, and then rushes towards the monster group with resentment While charging, he scolds the company for having cerebral palsy Then passers-by want to pull him into a team, the protagonist ignores him, and the two quarrel Then the first chapter is stuck at the most intense point of the two people's quarrel The next chapter uses a cheat to slap him in the face. How to easily abuse monsters, how to shock passers-by, and then explain why the protagonist is so strong. Then it breaks out of context when the protagonist discovers the mini-boss It doesn't even need three chapters, two chapters can clearly describe the highlights of this book The next chapter is the third chapter, which is to kill the mini-boss and get the best equipment. Break out of the context and focus on where the equipment is good Then cut back to reality... Supplementary settings I am a swordsman, very talented Forced to be a blacksmith Still very strong Okay, that's about it, although it is very troublesome to modify But even if it is not for signing a contract, just for more people to see it. Do we have to adapt to the next era? That's pretty much it I'm done

I was very touched when I saw the reward from my good brother. Regarding the issue of signing. I still have some experience. I have a website with 10,000 words and a website with 20,000 words. I just looked at it casually last time, now let's talk about it seriously. First of all, the lost leaf style is not very popular now. Of course, if the style is not popular, the content will not affect it. So what needs to be adjusted is the style. The title of the book should first be simple and straightforward, preferably to replace the role of the introduction. Let me give you an example "A blacksmith who doesn't want to be a savior is not a good swordsman" Have you summarized your introduction The introduction is to strengthen this concept. For example I, a blacksmith, like to practice swordsmanship, and accidentally saved the world Then the beginning directly cuts to the perspective of the protagonist The protagonist explains why he became a blacksmith.

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Change the name of your book to "This Lifestyle Player Wants to Go Jungle" Revise the introduction, Cut directly to the perspective of the protagonist at the beginning Double the probability of signing a contract