Fighting Against the Fan in the Distance

First: The opening, plot, and plot arrangements are all good, which shows the writing skills. Second: The arrangement is cool and the anticipation is well arranged. The biggest and most discouraging point of this book is... The author does not divide it into paragraphs! ! ! ! ! You can think about how uncomfortable it is when reading hundreds of words crowded together. Okay, the poison test is over. If you don't believe it, you can click on it and give it a try.

I can accept everything else, and I can tolerate being cold-blooded. After all, they crawled out of corpses during the Warring States Period, but this little medical fairy and Shisui are too deliberate. It feels like Shisui appeared out of nowhere and became good with the little medical fairy out of nowhere. It is really not good to randomly recruit girls and steal people's wives. Then you arrange for the little medical fairy to treat inflammation. It is not intolerable, but you deliberately wrote Shisui out, which is too much. My 7-chan arrangement is not as ruthless as yours.

(Reply to those who keep wondering who is right and who is wrong. Everyone can take a look. Discussions are welcome, but random comments are not welcome) Nalan Yanran was right to break off the engagement, but in the wrong way. If she had broken off the engagement in private, I think Xiao Yan would not have disagreed. After all, they had never met before and had no feelings at all. It was just like a baby kiss. Moreover, Xiao Yan also has someone he likes, Gu Xun'er, beside him. And, the most important thing is that Xiao Yan himself is not a person who climbs the dragon and clings to the phoenix. However, Nalan Yanran did not do this. She went to the Xiao Mansion to break off the engagement in a way that was well known throughout the city. And according to the description in the original book, she used Dou Qi powder as a charity to get Xiao Yan's father to break off the engagement, and invited the seniors in the sect to exert pressure, and she would not allow Xiao Yan's father to refuse at all. This process is equivalent to rubbing the "dignity and face" of "Xiao Yan's father and Xiao Yan" hard on the ground. →_→ So there was a three-year agreement. →_→ Therefore, when Nalan Yanran and the others finally left, Gu Xun'er used strange fire to warn the Yunlan Sect's group. Then again, why did Nalan Yanran choose this kind of **** method to break off the engagement? Of course, it was because of the rumors at that time that Xiao Yan was still a vindictive waste. Everyone in the city knew this. Therefore, the rumors in the city did not think very well of Xiao Yan, and this state lasted for three years. As we all know, if you tell a lie ten thousand times, even the person who is telling the lie will believe it. And Nalan Yanran believed it. He was afraid that Xiao Yan, a "waste", wanted to become a rich man and refuse to break off the engagement. In addition, her grandfather also did not agree to break off the engagement, so Nalan Yanran, who wanted to pursue the freedom of marriage, chose this extreme way to break off the engagement. This method indeed allowed her to successfully break off the engagement, but it also attracted a terrible enemy. So who was at fault in the whole incident? In fact, essentially no one is wrong, but he is too young. So I don't understand the ways of the world, so I believe in rumors, so I am confident that my judgment must be correct. This resulted in a catastrophe. So it makes no sense to simply think about who is at fault. It's like today's news media suddenly published a report. Everyone "sees wind and rain" and has no ability to judge at all. This is not acceptable. In fact, everyone has made mistakes like Nalan Yanran's when they were young, but they did not cause serious consequences and can be corrected slowly. In the later stages of "Dou Po", Nalan Yanran did become mature, but the price paid was too high. So looking at the whole incident, it is actually a tragedy.

Sorry, the Purple Gold Winged Lion King is a female creature. Author, you really know how to write.

Highly toxic. Don't enter, the author doesn't even know how far Xiao Yan has traveled. And I didn't know the plot for a while. I know the plot in a short while, it's so poisonous that it's indescribable

I feel that Doubo's force value is a few heads higher than that of Hokage. It was only when Kai opened that space was distorted. Doubo blocked the space and manipulated space at will. Only then did the Samsara Eye begin to touch the space.

Some people say that Nalan Yanran is very arrogant. May I ask where she is arrogant? She is related to the word "Ao", does she deserve to be called "Ao"? Your Chinese was taught by your physical education teacher, right? Are you reading the Garbage Fighting Comics? Have you really read the Dou Po novel seriously? This disgusting Nalan scumbag keeps saying that she went to the Xiao family to break off the engagement because she didn't want to marry someone she didn't know. May I ask why you didn't break off the engagement when Xiao Yan was still a genius? (Don't tell me she didn't know about the engagement), seeing that Xiao Yan was a loser now, she came here to use Yunlan Sect's reputation to force Xiao Yan's father to break off the engagement? Isn't this snobbery of women? If Nalan scumbag really wanted her future life, she couldn't go to the Xiao family secretly to break off the engagement. What's the point of forcing Xiao Yan and his father to break off the engagement in front of the Xiao family? Xiao Yan's father is considered an elder after all. How disgusting is it to slap someone in the face and then say that he is right. She constantly talks in front of Xiao Yan about how big the gap is between herself and Xiao Yan, saying that it is impossible for the two of them to be together, making Xiao Yan seem to be very curious about her. Isn't this super narcissistic? The most disgusting thing is what she said after being defeated by Xiao Yan: "I have never regretted going to the Xiao family to break off the engagement, even if it happens again, can you stop being so narcissistic?" ? ? Did Xiao Yan say from beginning to end that you were wrong to break off the engagement? Did he say that he wanted to marry you? Is it interesting to be so narcissistic? After being defeated, she still failed to fulfill her original promise to "be a slave and a maid after the defeat." How could someone call her "arrogant" for such a dishonest person? Would a proud person not keep the promise he made? Stop laughing so hard. I don't want to keep my promise and involve the Yunlan Sect's reputation. If Xiao Yan hadn't saved her, she would have committed suicide due to the humiliation. I really feel disgusted by such a "arrogant" person. The most disgusting thing was that Xiao Yan had already said at that time that Nalan's scumbag had nothing to do with him or the Xiao family, but he didn't expect that this scumbag was still so narcissistic. The third time Xiao Yan went to the Yunlan Sect was to avenge the Xiao family's almost annihilation and the revenge for being hunted down that year. When the Yunlan Sect was about to be destroyed, you Nalan scumbag said that everything was caused by her breaking off the engagement back then, and you wanted Xiao Yan to settle the accounts with you. Who are you? The second and third time Xiao Yan went to the Yunlan Sect had nothing to do with you? Can you stop being so narcissistic all the time? You always tie up Xiao Yan and say that you don't regret breaking off the engagement back then, but then you forcefully attribute Xiao Yan's current behavior to yourself, and say it's all your fault that you went to the Xiao family to break off the engagement. Didn't you Nalan scumbag say that you never regret it?

The Reincarnation of the Dead is a resurrection technique that summons the soul of the deceased and places it in a created body. In Dou Qi Continent, those strong people all have souls that have been cultivated, and their souls will be scattered when they die. Can they really be summoned? I doubt it...

Why do I feel like the more I write about it, the less I can read it...

Ahem→_→Mr. Author, I don't know if you have watched Dou Po, and you Hokage must not have finished it. The beginning of the first chapter made me want to laugh. Madara's Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan comes from his younger brother Uchiha Izuna, and it was Madara himself who agreed to join the Senju Alliance. It was Hashirama who reached out to Madara. Madara wanted to move but Izuna was not allowed to do so. The love of the Uchiha clan is deeper than anyone else. The reason why Izuna did not agree to an alliance with the Senju was because of the feud between the two clans. I don't know how many clan members died. Izuna could not let go of the hatred.

After reading the prologue, it really ruined Madara in my mind. Was the main character killed because of Mangekyo? I really can't stand the idea of ​​the protagonist. If Madara kills him (although I don't think Madara would kill his relatives without any communication), it must be because the protagonist is secretly hooking up with his mortal enemy, and there is no other reason. And since the protagonist is as talented as Madara and Izuna, why can't he defeat the Senju together with the two brothers? Just for the sake of plot, you shake hands with someone who has a grudge against killing your brother? Then he watched Izuna die, Madara was betrayed, and the Uchiha clan perished many years later? How could the Uchiha clan be sorry for him! Finally, let me say one more thing, the protagonist is really disgusting!

The feeling of the novel is a bit like the RPG defense map in Warcraft. In it, before each boss comes, players must first brush to be more powerful than the boss, and then defeat the boss. What they strive for is speed. .

Witnessed another book of eunuchs.

I didn't see ** in the profile. Is there no group?

This book is actually free, which is unusual

Feel. . The people in Doupo are not very smart.

The author's book has been scrapped. Please read the author's other Dou Po fan book, which is similar to this one and has been completed. He has written the follow-up content of this book.

I wanted to write a cool and cool style, but I also wanted to write an anime fan style, but because of my poor writing style, it ended up being different 🤫

I just laughed at a lot of people who said that Naruto and Dou Po are incomparable. The characters in Naruto are original and reasonable, and they are not like random characters in ordinary novels. After all, people draw one picture a week, and Dou Po cannot compare to them in terms of thought, concentration or design. And I don't know why the author hates Nalan Yanran so much. Nalan Yanran's performance is all portrayed by Tudou. What he does is wrong with Tudou and is just to set off Xiao Yan. As far as breaking off the engagement is concerned, Nalan Yanran should break off the engagement to respect her strength or pursue freedom. As for the method, a wise man must make mistakes after careful consideration, and Nalan Yanran had been practicing since she was a child, and she didn't know what her mental conditions would be like. Speaking of which, a bunch of gangsters are about to talk again, another one who protects Nalan Yanran without any brains? Sorry, it was wrong to say that strength is the most important thing in the world of Dou Po. Now it is common sense to break off the engagement. Originally, this matter was not well portrayed by Tudou, but it is said that it is a matter of fact. In order to gain a sense of existence, it still exposes IQ.

Qilin is a heaven-level fighting skill? If you think about the principle of Kirin, you will know that at most it is a low-level local level. Chidori is just an electric ball. Kirin is just an electric ball plus the electricity of the weather. How powerful is the electricity of the weather? Douzongs in Dou Po can use space power. People in this world can destroy the world by practicing fighting qi. The power of nature is much weaker than that except for strange fire. It seems that the electricity of the weather is huge, but it has quantity but not quality. Have you ever seen any powerful fighting skills that use natural force? As for the electric ball, it's even more rubbish. The Three Thousand Thunderbolt not only strengthens the legs, but also has a complicated fighting spirit running circuit, which is difficult to master. The Chidori is just an electric ball condensed by changes in chakra attributes. There are probably many such skills in the Fenglei Pavilion, so the Kirin is at most a low-level local level. I'm afraid it doesn't even have an earth level. The author just knows how to write nonsense.

"The time traveler who changed Dou Po" is good

By exaggerating Naruto's power system, the Douwang is actually equivalent to a Jonin. Coupled with the advantage of being able to fly, the Douwang is completely victorious. It is almost impossible to reach the Shadow level to the Sixth Path level by practicing. It depends on blood. Without blood inheritance, it would be a miracle to reach the Super Shadow level.

Shennong's younger brother 10086 died in battle Brother, don't go...

Chakra originates from the combination of physical energy and body energy. Shadow clones can bring experience and absorb the power of nature; fighting energy originates from external spiritual energy and can strengthen the body and spirit. The shadow clone absorbs spiritual energy and enhances fighting spirit; while fighting spirit strengthens the physical spirit and enhances chakra. The inside and outside complement each other, and the combination of the two is like an exponential explosion. In this way, the protagonist is a bit weak. Just imagine, the infinite growth of chakra, supplemented by tens of thousands of shadow clones, and the speed of fighting qi training ten thousand times, no matter how useless you are, how terrifying your fighting qi cultivation is

When I saw going to Utan City, I didn't want to see it anymore.

I feel like I do everything on tiptoe and worry about this and that all day long. I don't look like the protagonist.

This Shisui is highly poisonous

There are many problems with this book, but the biggest one is that the descriptions and personalities of some characters are completely different. Others, whether it is Zhang Li or original characters, may not be too big of a problem. However, the problem of character is huge. I can only say that this novel is very poor. There is no good point in any part, such as the opening chapter, Ban, Yun Lan, etc., Which is what I want to say the most.

Are there any good Douluo or Dou Po fanfics? Goldfinger is exempt.

Don't say anything about fighting and defeating the Hokage, okay? It's annoying to watch. Didn't you see that the author detailed the level of Naruto? There are so many extra levels just to match the level of Doupo! Also, haven't you seen the author classify Emperor Tuoshe and the Immortal of Six Paths as being on the same level? Can't you understand that the author has strengthened the Naruto system?