Literary Savior

It's not that I'm deliberately criticizing the author. It's just that his writing is so painful that it makes readers feel frustrated and unhappy. For example, it is obvious that the system will come out in the end, but you have to choose the best one before copying, and when you are writing, you also pretend to be rewriting and so on. You make yourself very good and the system is useless, just to highlight how awesome you are? There is no system. Are you awesome? Give it a try? It is a book that relies on the system to cause trouble, but it must be "copied" that makes me miserable. What's even more frightening is that after finishing the novel, you are still dumbfounded, showing that "this novel has been so well received"? Then the most disgusting thing is that it was written into a novel, and dozens of chapters were submitted to various comments, but I just couldn't put it down. What's even more funny in the end is that no matter how much praise it received, the sales volume was never the best, which virtually eliminated the halo of this novel, just to build momentum for the new book and start the matryoshka model. All kinds of disgusting operations, all kinds of water added to water, if you want to be more poisonous, you might as well do it to death.

When I was 19 or 20 years old, I wrote Ghost Blowing the Lamp, Fifteen Years of Wanli, Search for the Gods, In the Name of the People, Farewell My Concubine, Norwegian Wood, The Lord of the Rings, The Da Vinci Code, The Legend of Wukong, Journey to the West, Life of Pi, etc. I also translated it into English myself. I really can't stand it anymore.

Is anyone watching this? There are a lot of mistakes in it, I vomited

The early stage was still very good, but in the middle stage, there were more and more pitfalls. Around Chapter 700, it was obvious that the plot was starting to drag out more and more, and there were suspicions of fraud in many places.

Is this a poster to promote?

The plainness is full of suspense. The author's writing is really good.

The content is a bit too simple, but you can take a look when you are short of books.

I have read a lot of books, and most of them are difficult to give up after reading ten chapters. However, this book is quite to my liking, so I want to say something to the author: Because I just started reading it, I only saw Chapter 47, so I don't know how the rest of the writing is. As far as the chapters I have read so far, the writing style needs to be further improved. It does not mean that the author's writing style is not good, because the real writing style is not good. I have given up on it long ago, but the author is not deep enough in character creation, which always gives me a feeling of exaggeration. This exaggeration makes it easy for people to skip and not read. One disadvantage of this is that it easily gives readers the feeling that the plot suddenly speeds up, and the original rhythm is very fast. If it speeds up again, it will make the reading experience very poor. In addition, regarding the issue of the reasonableness of the plot, as a reasonable person, I feel that although it is somewhat flawed, it is still understandable. After all, it is an online novel, and online articles need to have certain irrationality with reality. However, there is a balance point in the middle, which should not make readers feel too abrupt. This point is difficult to grasp. I hope the author can work hard. Speaking of online articles, I think the author's writing style is already very good in the online literary circle, but I still hope that the author can be more delicate, so that an originally average and high-quality online article can become a top-notch work. In this way, the author's future books can become masterpieces and attract many readers. Having said so much, I actually don't know if what I said is correct or not. It's just a little comment. I hope the author can pay attention to it. Thank you.

Thank you for your hard work. . . . . Finished reading it today. . The rest... Looking forward to updates. 3 Recommendation votes, express your feelings.

The author hits one hole after another without filling them. It's so depressing to watch.

Zhao Gao pointed out that the deer was a horse in the palace. Hu Hai, the second emperor of Qin Dynasty, said: This is a deer! There was a commotion in the hall, some said it was a deer, some said it was a horse. The deer was frightened, got under Zhao Gao's crotch and bit wildly. Zhao Gao fell to the ground with a scream, and the deer escaped. Hu Hai didn't see clearly for a moment and asked Zhang Han loudly: What was in that deer's mouth just now? Zhang Han had a troubled expression on his face: If he were an ordinary person, everyone would know what he was carrying, but the one he was biting was an eunuch. I really don't know what the deer was carrying.

What the hell? Does the exam depend on the system? Still showing off in a high-profile manner? And he pretends to be very low... The protagonist's character is no longer speechless, it's simply disgusting and too cheap. Give up decisively at the beginning

I saw that I was relying on the system to cheat in the exam, so I gave up decisively. There should be a bottom line in everything! I would rather watch a bloody plot where the protagonist fails and rises step by step than cheating and getting something for nothing.

I just saw the main character being the top student in high school and giving a speech at his return to school. To be honest, I saw that the main character's family is half a scholarly family. I think the author put a lot of thought into writing the setting and tried to make the protagonist pretend to be sexy in a reasonable way. The poisonous chicken soup in the subsequent interviews was nothing. Generally speaking, it was not a poison until the return to school speech. It was a very good plot, but the content of the return to school speech was... It's a bit unpleasant. The protagonist once again stood on the podium and uttered poisonous chicken soup. I know what you said is right. I don't deny that this is reality after all. Fighting for relationships, drinking capacity, emotional intelligence, and opportunities. Your grades as a student may be just a piece of waste paper, but if you yell in front of that group of young people, I think it is selfish pretense. They are still in middle school, and you have to shout for them to leave school. What do you ask them to do when they say that Xi is useless? Give up their studies and don't care about their grades at all and go out to practice drinking. Whether studying is useless is another question. After all, many things are silent and difficult to calculate. Success is also elusive. We are all just the majority of people. I don't recommend that people who write books so straightforwardly express their outlook on life in the form of poisonous chicken soup, because everyone who reads your book has a brain. , Have your own opinions, and what you take out may not be recognized, just like me now. A friend in the book review section said it very pertinently. Both poisonous chicken soup and chicken soup are very one-sided. When you are going well, you must recognize the reality. When you are at the bottom of despair, you have to leave yourself a way to survive. And there is a saying that I will not exclude myself. If everyone is not practicing enough personally, don't be a preacher. In general, this novel is well written. Although the early reputation gained is a bit too superficial and vague, I can see that the author is still very attentive to the details of the background of the protagonist. From what I have read, it is not poisonous. It is suitable for entrance to pass the time. I don't know why I am posting. Maybe I want to deceive likes and comments, or I want to gain experience. I have two recommendation votes. I hope you don't dislike it (sincerely)

I can't understand it, I really can't understand it. The protagonist obtained the top prize through plagiarism. Why does he speak so wildly and ridicule those who study seriously? With his initial mahjong skills? Or is it because of his ignorance that he has spent more than thirty years in vain without knowing anything? I didn't see the protagonist's self-growth at all after getting the system. I only saw the shameless face of a villain who goes wild when he succeeds.

All the recommended votes are given to you, come on＾0＾~

Life is not easy anymore. When we read time travel novels, we just want to have some fun. What does the author mean? No pretense, no slap in the face, no excitement, the entire article is just about calculating economic accounts! The plot is extremely delayed! Let's be honest: You, the author, are writing a stupid story! Stop lying to readers!

It's poisoned to death. Goodbye. I'm sorry that I really can't watch it anymore.

It's not fair to copy a good article. You have to pretend that you wrote it yourself. It's really hard for the protagonist to hold back thousands of words a day. I don't know why you chose this kind of subject, are you feeling uncomfortable?

The protagonist is too weak, he looks so useless, and the manager of the agency under him is trying to trick the protagonist.

This is my first time writing a book review, and I really want to know the mentality and outlook of the author who wrote this book. The students who complained about the college entrance examination casually at first tolerated it. By the time I got to the poisonous chicken soup in Chapter 26, I couldn't stand it anymore. The negative energy throughout the chapter was all poison. Author, are you despising our efforts to make progress? Ordinary, ordinary people? What are you showing? What are you kidding about? Even if it is a novel, we should respect the students who study hard just to change the future! ? Articles can speak to people's hearts. If the editor allows books with negative energy and incorrect views to be read by the general readership, is it considered the same thing? Or do you think so too?

To complain, I feel like the protagonist is seeking death. This is such a low way to attract attention! Also, the things are copied and not your own, which is boring. Look at the black technology of the top students. What they give you is heuristic. You just stuff it in directly or copy it. Also, you don't know what the system gives you. Do you focus on something (literature)? What kind of Tai Chi does the branch do? I haven't seen it in the back. I don't know what the pattern is like. People write mathematics, but you can write literature. If you follow the academic style, you can become popular casually. In the later stage, you will write songs (see Lin Xi writing songs at the Chinese University of Hong Kong) and write novels (fixed routine). Win the Nobel Prize for Literature. Is that OK?

The Baogeng update is really good. I clicked it after looking at the small icon of the Baobao update. When I looked at the catalog, I saw that after entering September, there are basically one or two updates a day, and only three updates in two days. Is this also called a Baobao update? Is it insulting?

I definitely recommend this book! After reading more than 300 chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! So bland! ! ! Too watery! ! ! Are you looking at pictures from time-travel novels? He's not high-ranking, he's not pretending to be a slap in the face, but he's still looking like a fool!

I really can't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

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Is there a female protagonist? If there is, then withdraw. Don't tell me that the heroine is well written or something like that. I don't want to watch emotional dramas

Isn't it just a recommendation vote? Take my four recommendation votes and go away. More

Why are you so bored when writing about the entertainment industry? After all, he is a best-selling author! Do you need to see the faces of a group of actors? Selling the copyright for Ghost Blowing Lantern is stinky and lengthy. The main character is so ink-stained that you sold it to the United States. Are you worried that no one will buy your copyright? I was also excited when I was talking to Yida. Wasn't it quite cool at the beginning? Why did he become a different person later?

Oh, boring. He only knows how to wind up and copy books without thinking, and he doesn't even look for women. This kind of rebirth is really boring, like a cold machine.