Traveling Through the Great Conferred God

What are you writing about? Write a paragraph here and a paragraph there. What about the plot about the parents we talked about before? Why is there a magic plane again? After reading it for a long time, I don't understand what you want to write.

Not written by one person

What I wrote before is really OK. But what I wrote later has no sense of substitution at all. I hope the author can improve it. The ones that focus on war scenes will probably be better. Add another task. From time to time, he will travel through time to upgrade the protagonist. Purely personal opinion. I hope the author can see it

It was okay at first, but it is getting more and more poisonous. There are some words and things that I will not talk about. You, the author, should have some bad ideas in your heart. Welcome to the next Shennong. I have become poisonous 😓💀

This book is garbage. This is my most vicious comment. All. The writing is not good enough to support the plot. Not enough effort, can't stand thinking. The character design is like feeding you ten pounds of Xiangxiang, and then forcing it on you if you don't want to eat it. Write a mentally retarded supporting character and force him to be called a hero. If he is a hero, the human race will perish countless times. . If you like this book, you are welcome to come. I'd rather be scolded. I would also like to say that this book is garbage. No reply or refutation. Welcome to delete posts. I hope the author's next book will have full characters and high IQ. The plot is reasonable. The era of Dou Po style popularity has passed. A book without brains or features cannot sustain a novel. It ended with the retreat of Beirong. It's poisonous and I can't bear it. I feel like I'm being fed.

It's not a navy novel, it can only be said to be a rubbish novel.

Travel through time to become a god and call yourself the emperor? What's the difference between you and Ji Fa? A good man must be an emperor if he doesn't want to be a king.

When I saw Chapter 48, what kind of bullshit was written? During the Three Kingdoms period, they were decisive in their killings. In this world, they are impotent. Apart from anything else, Li Bao made it clear in front of so many people that he wanted to kill the protagonist. Why don't we kill him directly at this time? The military law is here. If the city is broken, everyone will die together. What are you afraid of? Are you still afraid that they will just open the city gate and surrender? Isn't your Euphorbia your trump card? If you don't show your domineering spirit at this time, when will you show it? In the army, the most despised person is the protagonist. He is indecisive, thinking too much without planning, and has a lot of mental activities, but it is of no use. He does not analyze the pros and cons of killing, and he thinks like a fool, I don't know how you wrote more than 800 chapters?

I really can't stand it. The main world is so poorly written, and the author actually thinks it's just a water problem?! The supporting characters' IQs are too low, the protagonist is too useless, and the plot is too frustrating! I can't stand it, as if it was written by two people!

The plot after the first return was disgusting. What a bloody plot! The more I watch, the angrier I get, but scolding him once can't relieve my hatred. My eyes!

This book is very poisonous and cannot be read. Throw it away.

After reading it again, I finally understand why I abandoned the book before. It was because the pig's feet written in it were disgusting~~

I'm trying to show off. I really don't need to read this book. I feel uncomfortable reading it. The author is totally disgusting.

Anyone who can read this book is Shennong, immune to all poisons! ! !

I haven't read the book yet, but I saw the introduction and wanted to make a comment. As far as the story of Fengshen and the Three Kingdoms is concerned, Fuxi, the emperor of the world, plays the innate gossip, and Jichang, the king of Wen, plays the acquired gossip. Who can compare with Fuxi? Compare with Zhuge Liang's Eight Formations? ? ? ?

After reading five chapters, I dismissed nonsense and had no idea what it was about.

Everything else is tolerable, except for the protagonist's IQ. The character IQ of a book's protagonist is one of the biggest highlights, but author, what kind of protagonist are you writing about? Pig? He's like a fool. Besides being reckless, he is also a time traveler. He must have run away from kindergarten!

It's no fun if it goes up to 49. They are going to kill you for still pretending to be a holy mother and returning to your tribe. No one treats you as a human being or a member of your tribe. Su Daji came and broke out again, but he still couldn't embarrass China in the first battle. Typical bisexual young man

I can't code 50,000 words day and night. . Um, here comes someone and scolds me a few words to make me give up the idea of ​​coding! !

Can Zhuge Liang's Bagua array compare with King Wen's acquired Bagua array? Rubbish article, Lu Buneng can compete with Erlang Shen, the power of their blood is sky-high, rubbish article,

What kind of stuff are these? It makes me want to vomit.

After reading three chapters, I didn't feel like I was immersed in it! Don't want to fall into the trap, have no desire to fall into the trap

Is Erwuzi Lu Bu awesome? Fight against Yang Jian? Xiang Yu is pretty much the same, Guo Jia fights against the Grand Duke? I really think highly of Guo Jia, Zhang Liang and Zhuge Liang are pretty much the same

Tsk tsk, the apotheosis of gods hasn't even begun yet, and you, the emperor of tomorrow, still have the nerve to make such a fuss! Just say a word to someone when you see him! It seems like your father Haotian treats you well! ! I trained you well!

Waiting for updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

What's that? Diao Chan's idiom seems to be "Shen Yu Luo Yan"

Tell the subordinates to divide the realm. Looking very confused

I just read two chapters and felt something was wrong. When I came to the comment section, I found out that it was indeed [Laotan Pickled Cabbage], out of sight but out of mind.

To write about the eldest son of the four great princes, Xibohou, in such a bad way is like rubbish. Your protagonist is the only one who is awesome, and everyone else is just like trash.

When will the new book be available? Or is it that the author has changed his vest? Does anyone know?