Total Conquest

Author, you only played a few games and then started writing novels, right? The emperor's full name is Karl Franz, Elector of Reikland, Emperor of the Human Empire, the protagonist and the Roald family. As a second setting, it is a bit eye-catching, and in the end, Sigma used Karl's body to fight Archaon. The Knights of the Sun appear in Chapter 10 or Chapter 9 of your novel, the original setting It is a religious knighthood belonging to the Goddess of War, and you will directly pledge allegiance to the emperor. The whole novel is extremely riveting. Of course, most of the novels are similar to your writing style. I just simply hope that you respect the original work. I don't beg you to buy the military book and read it. Just watch the 20-minute introduction video.

One of the major features of Warhammer is that the background story is too detailed, and the ancient battles are not clear. 40K is as detailed as why meteorites are not used instead of the Extinction Order, and the armor of the Defense Force can be broken with one poke.

There is a background introduction to China in Warhammer. It is called Cathay. The prototype is taken from the Han Dynasty. The Great Wall to defend against chaos is 100 meters high. The emperor is called the Dragon Emperor and the prototype is Qin Shihuang.

It is said that the final battle of Warhammer was when undead, vampires, humans, elves, and dwarves jointly attacked the Gate of Chaos. The King of Chaos sacrificed himself to prepare a seal. As a result, a bastard appeared among the vampires and stabbed the King of Chaos. Without the King of Chaos, there was no way to seal it, and everyone was killed.

By the way, I am a new author and I really don't buy reviews 😰

The author probably played a few games before writing a novel. Could you please first understand the casualty rate in the cold weapon era before writing? Can you believe that less than half of the troops were killed or injured in a few minutes? In the era of cold weapons, more than a dozen people were killed in one day? Those who do not collapse even if casualties exceed 30% are elites.

It's extremely poisonous. After reading a few chapters, I thought it was just that the male protagonist had no dignity, not even the emperor, and he spent a year as emperor for nothing. Even the lord Ye Shacoin actually made deals with vampires, and vampires were able to sneak in and serve as managers. The neighboring country Ye Shacoin actually sent envoys to the hostile forces to help him, and then the group was wiped out without even knowing it. Damn, I have a headache looking at it

It's a mess, it doesn't make sense.

The Cult of Sigmar Empire has always existed, and this is where the difference with Batoria lies. They believe in fairies. I remember that humans have 5 or 6 official churches. However, except for the Cult of Sigmar, other gods can be said to have no regard for humans. It is even said that they are positive priests of the evil god, such as Slaanesh. It is said that the positive side is love, and the positive side of Nurgle is life. The ancient warhammer is not very clear, but the evil god of 40k reflects the United States. For example, Khorne reflects the brutal culture of the United States during the Vietnam War. Nurgle is the hedonism exported by the United States. Needless to say, Slaanesh, the conspiracy and knowledge of Annihilation are completely suitable for the United States.

Warhammer and Halo are too niche in China. I want to find system documentation for these two games, and it's hard to find good-looking ones. Do you have any recommendations?

Why was the final outcome so difficult to give birth to?

Come on, author ~ Come on, author ~ Come on, author ~ Come on, author ~

After reading a few chapters, did the protagonist work for Carl? Or did he become independent later?

This is a story about the protagonist conquering the world for others

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What a great subject! The author thinks that the protagonist's etiquette needs some training! There is actually something wrong in it. Damn it, it's so embarrassing to read, old man!

Gu Zhan doesn't know that in Warhammer 40k, there are Jianqi who dare not invest in technology. As long as it is a knowledge-based Jianqi, they can see it. Also, your innovation may be a flash of inspiration or a whisper from the evil god.

90 Arrows killed 45 slaves on the opposite side, and a wave of arrows killed less than half of the 120-man team. . . Crossbows are not guided, and don't think of the regular army as a peasant army without armor. Even leather armor can make you unable to shoot through it. Do you think the iron armor is made of paper?

For the emperor, for the empire, kill the false emperor, all the imperial troops charge, kill all the chaos

The writing is so messy and I was so confused about the subject matter. I really like it, but I really can't understand it when I'm in my thirties.

The vampire was indeed a pig teammate, and he was killed in a wave of counterattacks.

There are also military personnel in the sewers, uh... At least they belong to the army. Black-clad plumbers, orphans adopted by the empire, are responsible for cleaning the sewers, because there are sometimes enemies such as ratmen in the sewers, and they are also within the cleaning range. They can be said to be unsung heroes.

The author's emotional description is a bit poisonous. I suggest you replace love with longing, which will be better.

. . . It's not like a novel, it's amazing.

Blind Jiba writes, if you don't want to write well, don't borrow the influence of Warhammer, okay?

Come on, author, at least connect the ending. For example, if Sigma suddenly appears, saying that this is just a derivation test server, and then restarting the open ending, it is also possible.

It's uncomfortable to watch, maybe it's not suitable for me! !

Bombarding the Magic Academy is really looking for death... It's bad luck that the wind of magic is too strong. The metal mage directly teaches life... By the way, although the chief mage of the empire is legendary in the game, he is one of the eight strongest mages in existence (not counting Slann) (although he is the strongest among these eight). Poor...), His family history is the starting point of the novel of the loser flow. He reversed the attributes of the previous archmage (the previous one was a fire type, he was a metal type), and was finally selected as the controller of the metal wind, and then was stabbed in the back (God t·m golden man also eats backstabbing), leading to the destruction of the old world

This is the first time I read a Warhammer Total War novel. The author must not be a eunuch! ! !

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