Wilderness Live

I'm speechless. How can a man become so feminine after traveling through time and becoming a woman? Has your behavior changed so suddenly? It's too fake. The performance in the hunter exam is really indescribable, it just feels unreal and I don't understand what kind of character I want to create. He often depicts panting and being cute, is he trying to create a contrast between cuteness and cuteness? Isn't it boring to write about overturning all the time? He is sweating profusely at every turn. Do you want to make people think that the protagonist is strong? But the description is so entertaining. It felt normal before, but when it came to the hunter exam, it really felt like a different person. The description of the characters is really awkward, like a robot with a personality program added. It completely follows the author's mood. One moment he will be cute, another moment he will be masculine. He can change his personality whenever he wants. Moreover, it was written about survival in the wilderness. I didn't feel the cruelty of the wilderness, but I saw the protagonist, with the blessing of the system, acting cute all the way to get through the game. Also, the author always describes the protagonist as weak, weak and physically weak, so why not add more? I just know that it's so tiring to keep writing about the protagonist. A person who has a lot of wilderness knowledge, has successfully survived and killed wild animals with his own hands, will have a more or less calm and cold temperament. I originally thought I would see a Laura, but in the end, the protagonist came across as someone who was flipping over, acting cute, flirting in the live broadcast room, and then being teased. Can such a person really survive in the wilderness? And this is an upgraded version of the wilderness, so the author can only make her stronger suddenly and suddenly. It feels far different from Chen Xubi. He is about surviving in the wilderness, but you are just acting cute in the wilderness. Can you be more real? ! ! It's poisonous, so I gave up the book.

I don't understand why there are so many descriptions of mental activities. What do you want to explain? Always a one-man show? ? ? The hunter exam is really vicious. You can fight clouded leopards in front of you, but you are confused after killing a deer during the exam? You have to ask yourself? Isn't the purpose of wilderness survival live broadcasts to demonstrate human survival skills and willpower in the face of extreme environments? Why does it have to be related to protecting animals? What you want to show isn't how humans survive under the rules of the wilderness where the jungle prevails? It was okay to kill snakes and crabs before, but suddenly what is the operation of the Holy Mother? ? ? The phrase "kill for what" really shocked me. Isn't it just to fill the stomach? Isn't it just to survive? Is it interesting to talk about such lofty things as seeing the wilderness and protecting animals? I really can't stand the operation of forcibly raising one's intelligence one moment and forcibly lowering one's intelligence the next.

I don't know what the author is thinking, but he keeps describing big breasts, emphasizing sweet voices, and coy behavior, which is quite disgusting.

I don't know how many years have passed since I started chasing Internet articles. With the passage of time and some other reasons, I am now becoming more and more picky about Internet articles. Originally, the level of online writers varied greatly, and it was really difficult to find someone who really wrote well and had attractive content. Until I found this book... To be honest, I have mixed feelings now. What first attracted me was the two keywords "wilderness" and "live broadcast". Secondly, "transformation" and the possible existence of "lily" are also half elements, but they are not important. I feel like there aren't that many novels in this category, so it caught my attention. The title of this book told me what this book is about, and the introduction also introduced the main plot of the novel in more detail. After reading the first dozen chapters, they all met my expectations for the content of this novel. Although the content of some professional knowledge is not accurate, it is understandable that people are not omniscient and omnipotent, so I turned a blind eye and passed by... Until I saw the chapter about the island ruins... To be honest, the author complained several times in the book that the results were not very good. I don't know the specific data very well, but from reading books and writing for so many years, I can guess that one possibility is that the author himself "sought death." After you write the title and introduction of your novel, you will have a positioning of the readers for which the book is intended. Readers are attracted by your title and introduction, start reading your first few chapters to see if it matches your title and introduction, and then see if it suits their taste. After reading a few or a dozen chapters, readers will decide whether they want to follow it. This was not a problem at first... But when the plot advanced to the island ruins, the emergence of the "mysterious organization" instantly added another almost completely irrelevant main line to the plot. This "organization" even appeared hundreds of chapters later. However, what is related to this "organization", and even faces "assassinations" and various tit-for-tat confrontations with the "organization" killers, are not mentioned in the title, introduction or first few chapters of the novel. Readers found that the direction of the novel was different from what they expected. Some people quit because of this, some people are still waiting and watching, hoping that it is just a small episode, some people say it doesn't matter, and some people are interested in it. This kind of behavior will almost eliminate the first and second types of readers... The title and introduction attract people because of factors such as "wilderness", "live broadcast", "heroine", "transformation" and the possible existence of "lily" (the number of hundreds of transformations is greater than the number of transformations and marriages). Readers have different preferences. Based on the title and introduction, you select a group of people from the general audience to become your readers (it is almost impossible to write a book that is suitable for almost all readers. It is normal for some people to like it and others to hate it). However, in some parts of the book, you occasionally mentioned some content related to politics. Politics involves stance, which will naturally make some people unable to agree. More importantly, this content has nothing to do with your main line, so you have screened out some readers. Similar is the story of the chicken-eating live broadcast behind the island. Of course this is a relatively small number. But when you let the "organization" appear, or even the "Valkyrie module" that appeared later, several other tags are added to the book in an instant, reminding readers of the existence of another story line (still at the main line level). This makes those readers who are looking forward to your follow-up "Wild Live" plot instantly feel that your main plot is about to change direction. So when writing this part of the plot, you have already screened out another part of the audience. And to a large extent... So this kind of behavior is undoubtedly constantly narrowing the scope of readers. If it is mentioned in the title, introduction and first few chapters, then it will only reflect how much the collection will increase. But if you suddenly add such a "surprise" in subsequent content, it will reflect how many collections you will lose. So when you do this, hopefully you already have this awareness. I can no longer figure out the routines of online writing. Even in the very long Conan series, although most of the content is various cases unrelated to the main plot, you are reminded of the existence of the "Black Organization" at the very beginning of the story. The subsequent main plot also revolves around the "dark organization". There is no sudden super god unfolding at all, nor is there any more mysterious force that suddenly pops up. This is the feeling I wrote down when I read more than five hundred chapters, but the book has already reached more than a thousand chapters, and I know it is already very late. I'm in a bit of pain right now and don't know if I should continue reading. The book itself is pretty well written, but the sudden unfolding of it left me a little overwhelmed. To describe it, it was probably when Jia Long was preparing to eat some kind of "food" to satisfy his hunger and replenish his energy in the wilderness, an unexpected taste suddenly hit him... After all, not everyone can accept the sudden new setting... Jia Long has been telling himself that he should never forget his original intention. Is the author also saying to himself that he should not forget his original intention? P. S. I don't understand it right now. Many authors say that they write novels just to satisfy themselves and just want to write the stories they want to express. However, looking back, I started to complain that there were few readers and no one read it... I really don't know what to say.

Holy Mother. If someone kills you, don't kill them. Don't talk about kindness. After so much experience, who is still a new kid?

In order to be the starting point for Kefei downloading (yes, I am a reader of pirated articles, I have changed my ways), I didn't even change my name and I hurriedly came to increase my presence 😂

Happy New Year, I will always support you, Ke Fei Da Da

I originally wanted to watch the pirated version, so I wanted to support it by downloading Qidian. I don't know how long I can last. Within my capabilities, I will support genuine products. Wonderfully written.

It's not really a guess! It's equivalent to a supplement or something like that, supplementing its settings. OK, here we go! --------------Separation line--------------------- The system should come from the future, through a limited time machine (it can only be used once, this machine cannot be built again, and what is transmitted is not the future (past), but the parallel world of the future (past)). Both the system and the time machine were built by one person. Because the system has a flaw - it can only transform popularity to maintain power and strengthen the host. So that person gave up on the system, but because the system happened to be able to pass through the time machine. So that person wanted to do an interesting experiment, set up an automatic evolution for the system, and put the system into the past. So at a certain point in the past, countless world lines evolved from the arrival of the system. And this book happens to be one of the world lines, and he just happened to meet a host similar to Sheduo. This is how the story begins. ------------Divider line------------- If you don't like it, don't comment Thank you for the like! Give me the essence

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Haven't finished writing this book😥?

I have an idea. Since the ecological environment of this world is better than reality, will there be some ancient or mutated creatures? For example, giant snakes that are tens of meters tall, prehistoric giant crocodiles, giant spiders, etc. If there is, Jia Mei will encounter it during her later exploration and rely on her superb grounding tactics to deal with it. Then the live broadcast was seen by a Japanese game producer, who inspired him to design the "Monster Hunter" game and asked Jia Long to be the spokesperson 😁

Ke Fei, there will be a thousand chapters tomorrow. Do you want to post an update? If you post an update, I will reward you with 10,000 coins 😁

The number was finally found! What's the fan base of Cry Chi Chi?

I don't know why, when I saw Jia Long, I jumped into the scene and looked at Jia Ling, and then the figure of Jia Ling appeared in my mind unconsciously! Tsk, tsk, tsk, it's so annoying! Even more eye-catching than Balala the Little Demon Fairy!

I used to think that Internet literature is so violent nowadays and there are very few so-called Holy Mothers. But after reading this book, I really couldn't stand many parts. People are trying to kill you over and over again, but you still don't want to do it. Live broadcasting all kinds of chases by killers, missiles and so on. Damn it, you can't stand it, right? In the end, I couldn't do it. I killed tigers and other things so smoothly. It's not that I didn't have a violent temper. I have been surviving in the wilderness for so long. I don't believe you are still a virgin. It's so unreasonable. Also, it's even more funny to gain followers through live broadcast. In reality, let alone guns, you really have a fight with a tiger or something. If you can't reach 500,000 fans in three days through live broadcast, it's impossible, right? There was a mercenary on Douyin before. Let's see if he will gain followers quickly. Can't stand it.

This book is too poisonous. When you meet a killer in Shennongjia, you are about to be killed. Are you still thinking about killing the killer? I'm a Buddha. I really don't want to kill, so I just keep eating wild vegetables? I am a Buddha, what a holy mother, disgusting!

This book is indeed a bit poisonous, mainly because of the constant moaning after a man changes to a woman, and also because of the added words. The author should have been careful, but it is indeed poisonous. In terms of body, you can at least increase the weight of the protagonist.

This book offends Our Lady of St. Lucia. I will withdraw it first. It is extremely poisonous.

The protagonist is too holy. This is a world where the weak eat the strong. If you don't fight this, you don't kill it. If you kill an animal, you still have to say sorry. Then you still eat meat and go to the wilderness. You might as well rename it the Vegetarian Wilderness.

What makes me particularly uncomfortable is the description of women, which is too poisonous. I'm embarrassed as a woman. Do you know how embarrassed I am when I see those moaning and moaning?

I really don't want to say anything. Is it interesting for the protagonist to be such a virgin? Don't kill this one or fight that one. I've reached chapter 700, which is considered to be the middle and late stages. I was bullied throughout the whole process and was timid in doing things. You obviously have a certain ability, but you still act like a coward. Isn't it uncomfortable for you to write about the often hypocritical mental activities? It's rare that after two chapters, he turned around and turned into a weak chicken. The gold medal hunter boasted that he was going to the sky and the earth. He said that he could expose some abilities, but he turned around and started to be timid again. Using the system to do things that abuse the owner. Hehe! Although it is a niche subject, can you write it in a more atmospheric way? Keep repeating the overturning, just say it. He kept talking. You said it's okay to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. The question is inappropriate now, why don't you get together and expose things to have a good time. Otherwise, just torture him until the end! I almost lost the confidence to pursue it.

The biggest flaw and poisonous point of this novel is the transformation itself. The author is obviously not good at character creation, nor is he good at controlling the character's mentality, but he insists on playing a transformation story with the most complex changes in the character's personality and mentality, and the result is that when shaping these, he will only deliberately rely on the two-dimensional cute lolita. The two-dimensional cute lolita is still female in nature, but only looks cute, and the masculine personality will form a contrasting cuteness. But your protagonist has a macho heart and a super-loli body, and the author, you can also make him more cute. How disgusting is this? This is really like watching a transvestite. Have you seen any male-to-female transformation story that succeeded by being cute and seductive? There is not even one. This is completely a character set, or a rigid setting that is self-contradictory. This kind of gameplay is doomed to be bloody at the beginning. I feel sorry for the author who has been so persistent and wrote more than 5 million words, but when you get in the car and drive in the wrong lane, you can't reach your destination no matter how hard you try.

Doesn't the author know that what most readers of Qidian dislike the most is the Virgin? A killer comes to kill you, but he can't kill him even though he has a chance to kill him. What kind of magical operation is this? There are so many dramas inside, and the protagonist is like a slave of the system. No matter how unwell he is, he is forced to do the task, and he keeps threatening the protagonist with unknown viruses.

It doesn't matter to the Virgin Mary, but people want to kill you and you don't want to kill others. It makes you really upset.

This book is really addictive. Every time I get up, I scream. Every time I drive, I feel really embarrassed. Every time I get up, I feel confused. The first part is fine, but I really can't stand it for two to three hundred chapters. It became popular out of nowhere. There were no rumors or rhythm, so it became popular out of nowhere. The description of it becoming popular is also embarrassing. I want to be cute when I roll over my car, I want to be beautiful when I get up, I want to be a saint when I fight, I was obviously a man in my previous life, and it's really disgusting to write about White Rabbit every time, I know that my body is not good, but I don't add any strength, I know that I can't use boxing in the desert, but I still buy it. The hunter competition forcibly subdued me. After I became famous, someone secretly filmed me and let me go after saying I was given a rocket. My younger brother asked for help and slapped me in the face to show off, etc. The deception is too obvious. In times of crisis, you are always described as a woman. When everything is fine, you say you are a big boss. You still know that you were a man before. Recently, I have been reading light novels to relieve my boredom. I read two to three hundred chapters in the middle of the night and I really couldn't stand it. Everyone has different tastes. Anyway, I don't like reading. I came here to write and vent. I feel much better.

Tsk, I'm not in the mood to start Chapter 380 I don't understand what's going on, I can only say that the author made the mysterious person too strong at the beginning I was obsessed with reading Master De at Station B two days ago, and found this book Gan, a top predator who crushed the protagonist at the beginning like a mouse was actually defeated in a night battle Tsk, it seems that the protagonist hasn't had a night battle yet! Just like the human-machine emperor who killed the opponent's C position in the team battle for the first time in a match, the most important thing is that the opponent's C position is the master (as we all know, there are no team battles in human-machine games compared to night battles) Ha, do you know what the ancestors said? Only by knowing oneself and the other can one be victorious in every battle. They fought once and the author made the protagonist know the opponent very well. Did the mysterious man's days of observation be used to put the protagonist's brain in Deluxe? The mysterious man was written so perfectly in the early stage, but he didn't have his own style in combat. . . Does this (Deng Chaoyu in The Mermaid) cum in more than one second? Where's the trap? The person who caught the other party while the protagonist was sleeping didn't set a trap near the camp? You know it's night! The protagonist discovers understanding during the day, but can he still discover it at night? Also, hunters have never had any pride or self-confidence. Some are only cautious. After observing for so many days, they don't know that the protagonist's dodge ability is high? He also ran to melee for the first time. When he fought with the protagonist for the first time, the protagonist's IQ was zero and the mysterious man was 300. When dealing with Li and the others, the trap and teasing were combined, and the IQ was over 300. When dealing with the protagonist at night, the protagonist's and the mysterious man's IQ suddenly changed. It is indeed the most terrifying aura of online novels. When meeting the protagonist, he threw away the caution of the hunter and didn't even have a back-up plan. You know? In my prediction, if this mysterious man is so powerful in the early stage, he will definitely beat the protagonist in what he is good at. Then he will explain things to the protagonist, and then talk about the protagonist's talents, and then explain to the protagonist in more detail the real mystery of level hunters and the ulterior things in the world. Although the protagonist failed, he successfully realized that although he is a gold medal hunter, he is different from those level hunters. This is a very common plot, but it will not make people disgusted! After all, the mysterious man was written to be so strong from the beginning, and the protagonist had to accept his failure, but it felt so easy to defeat the mysterious man... Hmm... I was thinking... What was the point of that foreigner telling the protagonist about level hunters? I am no longer in the mood to watch the rest. Although an injured hunter can continue to survive in the jungle, he is definitely unable to defend but cannot attack. He continues to fight against the protagonist in an injured state. It can only be said that no one would do this The so-called top hunters or the top special forces in the world are at this level... Well... My grandpa is better than them with a hoe.

What does the protagonist of this book say? His character is very strange. To put it simply, he has great compassion but no small kindness, and this great compassion is very hypocritical. Let me give you an analogy. He would go to rescue a village when it might be in danger, but the reason why the enemy discovered the location of that village was because he was live broadcasting inside, and he also knew that if he did so, others would discover the location of himself and the village. He also used lies to deceive the people in the village, saying that he was not live broadcasting, but making some official records. Anyway, they are a disgusting group!

The character of this protagonist is really disgusting. I heard in the audio book that when a man with red eyes wanted to cooperate with him, he accidentally killed him. Then in this situation, he already knew that he was wrong, but he didn't think that he was wrong. It feels like I was wrong, but I don't admit it. What the hell are you, author? How could you write such a disgusting guy? He is actually the protagonist. Damn, do you think such a guy can be liked?

I hope some people will look at when this book was written when they comment. It's a bit funny. Some of the comments were like this at your time, but they weren't like this when I was studying it.