Daojun Reborn in Marvel

I don't want to say too much, but I feel that the protagonist is the kind of person who has the ability and strength, but also allows his opponents to dance in front of him. Isn't it true that there are not many opponents in the world? He jumps around like SHIELD and wants to join. I am also drunk. To be honest, there is no one Dao Lord who would allow a barbarian organization that is not as powerful as himself to still exist well after offending him. There are many other places that I won't go into. There are many poisonous points and I have been persuaded to leave 😓

In modern society, there are both magic and iron fists. It would be great to grab a few. Is this to show the heroism of the protagonist?

I think when reading, you can say something unreasonable when you see it, but don't curse when you get angry! At most, just criticize the person who is not good at writing. Don't attack him personally. If you really can't do it, you can report it. Sometimes everyone will criticize you, but swearing is still too much.

After reading the reviews from book friends for two days, let me clarify. This book does not abuse the owner, and the system is just excessive. So, book friends, please don't pay too much attention to the system and talents! I will also take your suggestions seriously and make changes. I ask for your tolerance and guidance for new writers! I would like to thank you all for your collection and viewing!

After seeing the latest chapter, I would like to share my opinion briefly. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. 1. As a Dao Lord, the protagonist is seriously injured, but until now, in addition to forcing the evil god out of the system at the beginning, showing the confidence and domineering of a Dao Lord, it is eye-catching. Apart from this, the following text does not reflect the pattern that Daojun should have. 2. The author writes that Daojun is seriously injured, so there must be a process of recovery of strength. The author is now writing about the protagonist gaining energy by hunting extraordinary creatures to gain points. Although it can suppress the protagonist's strength and it is not easy to break the story, the shortcomings are also obvious. There is only one way to recover the strength, and the readers will find it very frustrating. A Taoist king is worried about this and that. Even if it is a seriously injured Dao Lord, he should be expected to despise the opponent from the overall situation and value the enemy strategically. What's more, when the author wrote, he said that this was a Dao Lord who was mainly responsible for killing. However, the author's current writing style has not yet shown the personality of a Dao Lord. I hope it will be better. 3. Regarding the golden finger issue, I personally think that the protagonist's golden finger should be Taojun. But the author also made a system. This is equivalent to the bright and dark lines in a composition, but the two golden fingers on the bright side will cause readers in the novel to feel conflicted. However, the author writes that the system is slightly conducive to the protagonist's future development. In this case, he hopes that the author will not write the system too one-sided. He hopes that Dao Lord will be the main one and the system will be supplemented, and he will write it slowly. 4. I hope the author will get better and better. If you have any questions, we will discuss and study together.

Begin to persuade them to retreat. It was ambiguous from the beginning that there would be no heroine. Could the author be more careful? (I didn't watch it later, so I don't know if they were together or not.)

It's so messed up that it's better to write down part of Daojun's memory, where he looks like an accomplished immortal in Taoism.

I just watched it, I skipped it, the first part was not good, but after chapter 50 it was really exciting. To be honest, it was really fun to watch so many superheroes killed. I saw a lot of comments saying that the protagonist killing Weiman was too poisonous. What's so poisonous about it? On the contrary, what I hate the most is watching people who have traveled through time and knelt down to lick plot characters, either to be brothers or to kneel and lick them. It's really disgusting to watch. The protagonist is Daojun who is seriously injured and travels back in time. Not to mention the protagonists of the original plot. Even if the entire galaxy is ants in the eyes of the protagonist, and a group of bugs are jumping up and down in front of his eyes, the only thing you have to do is to trample him to death! ! I didn't see any poisonous points. I enjoyed watching it. I hope the author will work harder.

This book is the only one I've seen that doesn't kneel down and lick the Yankees, but also kills the Women's Federation and the Dog Shield. I like it.

This person shouldn't be called Daojun, but might as well be called Immortal Cultivator. I feel that his character is completely inconsistent with his rank, just like licking a dog.

Pull it down. I originally thought it was like starting from scratch, but the details are in place. How can I say the rest? The script is too serious and unreal. I feel haha. The most successful novel depends on the author's sense of substitution. The author always regards himself as a god, and the protagonist is a chess piece. The result is that you write it very well, but we read it very awkwardly.

This book feels more and more confusing as you read further, especially the character of the protagonist. He is sometimes a villain, sometimes a righteous man, sometimes decisive and decisive, sometimes helpful, kind and just. 🤫And most of the time he does things without considering the consequences, which makes him feel mentally ill.

I like protagonists who kill decisively, preferably a few superheroes, such as Captain and Scarlet Witch.

One like and one comment. I flicked his cock fifty times with a slingshot.

There isn't even a female protagonist. Could it be a gay story? After all, what if a so-called woman still appears, no matter how beautiful, how suitable, and still pursues her, but in the end she just ignores him and still pushes her? You can't live without women, and you still frame it to say the reasons for the exercises, the reasons for the level of life, and the reasons for foreign girls. It's so disgusting! Is it really hypocritical of him to say one shot? I'll go, buddy, are you really smart about this? ...

It's so addictive that I wanted to stomp on it when I read it for the first time. In the early stage, it was good, but after dozens of chapters, the air was blown away every second 😅. I could barely read it, but when I went back to China, I just shot all the heads of my uncle's family, and it didn't matter 🤫. There is only one key left and you still say it's a good kill. This kind of logic is hard to understand even if you don't understand it 😤

It's better to write about an ordinary person who gets the inheritance of Daojun. He doesn't look like a Daojun at all, and the host is like a little loser.

It's quite fun to look at, and it's also fun to kill! However, without Iron Man and the Avengers, the Marvel novels are still the Marvel that Marvel fans love to read! No matter what I write later, it will be meaningless!

The introduction says there is no female protagonist. I don't feel it. God, because he is a woman, he has to care about her feelings. And Huai Xu... If there is no heroine, would this character be purely ambiguous? Does it make sense…

I didn't want to watch it until halfway through. The protagonist's start was actually not a big problem. Is the boss reborn? However, this Dao Lord was later given the title of Shangqing Golden Palace Wanwan... I don't know if the author just slapped his head and arranged a title that looked awesome. You used to be decisive in killing and you could still be regarded as a very murderous Immortal King and Immortal Emperor. This title makes me feel very uncomfortable. Shangqing Jinque gives me the feeling that the Shangqing Zhenjing Yuchen Dao Lord Lingbao Tianzun lives in Jinque Tian. Add it to it and it is totally nondescript. The author wanted to write about a Taoist, but it turned out to be a murderer.

I like the protagonist's outlook and behavior, but the author still needs to work on his writing skills!

Author, you said you would not torture the Lord, but he was brutally tortured at the beginning. You said it was extremely ambiguous at the beginning without a female protagonist.

Is this called no heroine? ? ? A female character appears in five chapters?

Novels written in 18 years are not bad when placed among the latest novels and completed novels written in 2020.

Using other people's worldview, can you have a little respect?

I have a blade, let me know when you want to cut 😆😆😆

Recently all the posts have been deleted 😅 Occupy a floor It was a bit toxic in the early stage, but it worked beautifully later! It's not like it was written by one person

The contract for "Portals Are Everywhere" has been mailed. It will be signed tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. You will get the investment achievements of the new book soon.

Long Aotian's novel is too boring, destroying the world and defeating Thanos

Damn it, it sucks? Damn, I won't support you next time.