The Primordial Beginning

There are thousands of roads, the first one is updated. The update is not standardized, and the readers are in tears.

Can the author straighten it out? I read it on my mobile phone. First of all, I praise the author for updating more every day. This spirit is very commendable. I give you a big thumbs up! But I couldn't stand it anymore. I found that the author may have written too fast, and there were many contradictions in many places. Even the protagonist Qin Haoxuan had contradictory behaviors in many places before and after. It made people see that he had a somewhat split personality? The author of Gaolou Mansion has created many extremely superior conditions for him, including top-notch techniques that are even better than purple disciples, hundreds of times, thousands of times, or even tens of thousands of times, cultivation techniques, conditions for cultivation, opportunities for cultivation, etc. But the protagonist behaves like a scumbag. Of course, he was injured and slowed down, but everyone will have setbacks on the way to becoming an immortal. He has such good conditions that even a pig can go up there. Doesn't he mean he is worse than a pig? We are usually at work, and we are more or less subject to some constraints and difficulties. We turn on our mobile phones and read online articles to calm down and adjust our mood. Is it possible that we have to be tortured along with the protagonist? If the protagonist does not perform well, of course he should be belittled. This is a normal phenomenon. If other people know that the protagonist has such good conditions for cultivating immortality and is still like this, they will definitely be scolded. I think cultivating immortals should be compared with others. In all aspects, others are in poor condition, but their progress in cultivating immortals is faster than others. In addition, he encounters some good opportunities to cultivate immortals, allowing him to move forward quickly and become a weak species, overpowering gray species and even purple species, leaving a group of people and a group of strong people stunned! Another thing about unity is that it is not unprincipled. But in many aspects, the author feels a bit forced and forced to make do. In some places, the protagonist cannot be like that, self-deprecating and self-suppressing. The author updates more every day, which makes people feel happy to read. However, many of the author's plots make people feel a little frustrated and unhappy, and they are a bit bullish in some places. Many of the protagonist's opponents are arrogant. Of course, in the end, they will definitely be defeated by the protagonist, but after a long period of suppression and unsmoothness, even if the protagonist can win in the end, will it be convincing? There are many places in the front where the author makes transitions rather bluntly. In the end, the protagonist got a lot of opportunities to cultivate immortality, skills, etc., But the author didn't explain it clearly. Maybe there were too many updates and he forgot about it. I hope the author can clarify that the conditions for cultivating immortality do not necessarily have to be good, but the opportunity to cultivate immortality is indispensable. It is okay for the protagonist to have poorer conditions than others in all aspects, and it is okay to start worse than others, but the protagonist can step by step suppress the opponent and suppress the superior ones, and always be in front of the opponent, even a little bit (there are many setbacks, and the plot unfolds), but it will leave you behind. . . It's inconvenient to type on a mobile phone, so there are many mistakes, so I apologize.

I would like to give the author some suggestions. First, the people in it, especially the men, have basically zero IQ and EQ. Second, the brotherhood the author wants to express is too deliberate and fake. The third one is the most intolerable. Can you stop using seven words for the title all the time? It doesn't rhyme, it doesn't sound good, it's awkward, it's just put together for the sake of being put together.

The reviews for this book are not very good, but the recent book shortage can't help it. I have read four chapters, and there are quite a few poisonous points. I came to the comment section and found that I had to pay five yuan before I could speak. Haha😤

This is my first reward of 5,000 points to the author of Qidian. Thank you for your hard work and the writing is pretty good! Really enjoy watching it! I hope the author can update one every day and live up to the love of his followers!

Someone once said that Master Bai Jin's books are all about resting on his laurels, without any new ideas or skills. I am very sorry and indignant about this. How could anyone say that? Just like the author's book Taichu, it is very novel, and the old life is reorganized. On the basis of cuckoldry, a clone cuckold is added, which really breaks the boundaries of traditional cuckoldry. This is the charm of Platinum Master. Although this book is more old-fashioned, the cloned green male protagonist is really novel. I especially like this novel plot. I give the author 100 words of love. I love you ❤️❤️

When I saw Chapter 700 or 800, it was just a few people and that area. . They were moving around like a bunch of primary school students quarreling every day. .

This book is becoming less and less immersive. The supporting characters have negative IQs. Some characters' inner thoughts are fine once or twice, but they have to be repeated a dozen times, especially the character Murong Chao.

I can get my money back, but it's not easy for the author to make money. Why don't you write it with some snacks? You're not editing it. You're just making it up.

Thoughts after reading Personally, I think that the author has fully demonstrated his ability to portray the selfish side of human nature in this book. It is true that the contradictions in a book are an essential part of the story, but the author seems to be only good at using selfish betrayal as the contradiction during the creation of the book, which makes it easy to feel tired when reading. For example, when the ancient religion was about to participate in an auction, the author simply did not write about the battles caused by the auction, and instead wrote about the conflict with the betrayers. When I was reading, I stopped and took a rest for a night before I was interested in continuing to read. I hope the author can expand the method of establishing contradictions to avoid repetition of the same type and make people lose the excitement of the unknown.