Swallowing Immortals

How should I put it, after reading Chapter 101, I felt like a child playing house.

Because I am also a flamboyant author, in order not to cause unnecessary misunderstandings, I would like to first state that the following opinions are only from the perspective of a reader. The writing style of First Sensory is no problem, even more delicate than the writing style of many online articles. The beginning of the story is quite satisfactory, with all the contradictions and suspense. He comes from a poor life and occasionally finds a rare treasure. He comes from a small place and has a son of a rich man who cannot deal with the protagonist. This setting is correct, but it can only be described as satisfactory. Then the problem arises. The following plot is like an assembly line production. He and the rich man's son enter the down-and-out sect. The old enemy and the old enemy's backer begin to humiliate the protagonist, and then the protagonist borrows the golden finger of the exotic treasure to upgrade and return. Then passers-by were shocked and became a genius, then his cultivation stagnated again, and then his genius fell and was ridiculed by passers-by. The plot is expected, and the characters of all the characters, including the protagonist, feel stereotyped, without portraying a person with a vivid personality. In fact, if you start to write the master to death, or because the protagonist is humiliated by the rich man's son, the master dies in anger, allowing the protagonist to grow up. He has the golden finger of the mask that can be teleported, and he can go it alone. A sect that is in decline, and its disciples are unwilling to make progress all day long. The inner sect bullies the outer sect, and the stronger ones bully the weaker ones. Such a sect deserves to be defeated and exterminated! Readers are probably tired of seeing this kind of background routine. I say this not to say that this book is not good, but I personally think it may not be popular. In fact, writing is something that all authors can understand. We all talk about it from head to toe, but actually writing it is difficult. Xianxia is originally a slow-burning type. If it's just a hobby, you might as well change your mentality. Don't care about data or comments. Simply tell the story you want to tell, and you may gain unexpected rewards!

Xiaoqianqian's writing is great👍👍

I didn't expect this mask to have such a function. It feels like a license to enter the temple. Maybe there are formations, teleportation formations or something engraved on it. And Yu Chuan's identity is also very unusual. Now I'll wait for the author to reveal it slowly.

Well, the writing is very good, the pictures are full of sense, and the plot is smooth. Come on

The writing is very touching, I will keep it and read it slowly.

The writing is very good, good luck to the author!

The beginning is good, everything else is there, and the mask is quite novel. Come on!

I still feel the same as always, just come on and stop being a eunuch 😂

I originally planned to read it carefully today and then write a book review, but the plan couldn't keep up with the change. I'll write it after I read it carefully. Today I just want to say that I have probably read all the books written by the author, but I haven't finished them. Of course, he hasn't finished writing them either. What attracts me to every book is the description of the scenery at the beginning. What can I say, it looks very picturesque. Since I haven't read it much, I won't comment on it. I just hope it can continue. The author is very serious in writing books. I discovered this yesterday, but I still don't want to be a eunuch 😁

Chapter 16 Regarding talent and elixirs, Yu Chuan's introspection is very comprehensive. Um, this is another account of mine. I still type in spaces as usual...

What a sin... I just finished reading the comic book Transformation of the Dragon and now I see such a loving chapter. Ahem. Well, we get along well.

The author's writing style remains the same and has not improved.

I have a premonition that the Qianqiu Sect is now weak. Yu Chuan has obtained the "permit" of the inner temple and can ignore all kinds of restrictions. It also has the function of invisibility (Yu Chuan walks out of the palace door, will it not exceed the scope of the mask, or can he be invisible anywhere as long as he wears the mask)? Although when Yu Chuan entered the palace, the mask did not go in with him, but it should have something to do with the mask recognizing its owner. Everything in that palace, I tentatively think that Yu Chuan became the owner of the master card there. The sect leader took the secondary card. Judging from the above, Yu Chuan might lead the sect to the peak of life.

We, Sichuan, must not be robbed by Qitian Sect. Qianqiu's sect master is much more bossy than Qitian's gang of big guys. He is interesting to look at. Um, old man... And they have already become disciples. Those old men are very thick-skinned and too arrogant. But it is also understandable, after all, people feel from the bottom of their hearts that Qianqiu may not have enough resources to support Yu Chuan. Now there is a plot to grab the cake, and the cake has a positive impact. It strengthens the power of Du State, and is also a threat to other countries... Well, thinking about it. Based on the salary, Qitian is probably a good place for Yu Chuan, but the resources may not be that much if they are shared equally with other geniuses, and you can get the best in Qianqiu. The most I can think of is this reason for rejection. If there are no other reasons, I will just wait for tomorrow's update.

I have always felt that your writing style is very good, and the words between the lines always remind people of the past. I like your description of the environment the most. Xianxia should indeed have the flavor of a fairy!

Compared with the previous ones, the tone of the beginning is very gentle. After all, it is a mortal stream, and the previous ones were all noble people entering the human world. First of all, it is difficult to grasp everyone's sense of substitution, and they have already determined the identity of the protagonist. What awaits Ying Chen and the others seems to be revenge. But for the current Yu Chuan, this is a mystery, and the sense of expectation is enough. Also because Yu Chuan is not a native of the country, the Master's advice to "find his parents" and the Master's good health allow Yu Chuan to practice with confidence, and the previous plots of "testing medicine" and "counterattack" give people the greatest feeling of being real and perfect. I'm just a little bit puzzled by the setting of the Confucius Private School as a closed disciple. I always think that the master corresponds to the student. By the way, the most important thing is the writing style. When I read Ying Chen before, I felt that every word and every sentence was specially written, because if you look closely, you will find that in almost all the small and long chapters, there are almost no repetitions of relatively key words. It feels like every sentence is carefully selected. I always felt that the description of the eyes last time seemed to have a high exposure rate. If the previous one was very gorgeous, then the current one is relatively simple, but the description of the relationships between the background characters is also more complete. Anyway, I can't do this. In addition, I have long been curious about that Heiba. He is so eloquent, unlike people from the village, and what he brings out are all good things. That boy's grandfather also spent a lot of money.

Putting Yu Hongfei's "divine assist" and apprenticeship together was so refreshing, and at the same time, the two forces represented by both sides were also mentioned, thanks to Feng Yu's inner barrage. Speaking of which, it would be better to just knock Yu Hongfei down the waterfall. It would be better to describe it as a drowned rat. By the way, one of Yu Hongfei's lines in it can be changed. The original sentence is this: "In less than ten breaths, I condensed three spiritual rivers and was promoted to the first level of Baichuan... This is impossible... I don't believe it!" Anyway, he must not believe it in his heart, so let's talk about the speculation that he doesn't believe, such as slandering that Yu Chuan must have stolen forbidden arts and forbidden medicines, or something that suddenly improved his realm, or he had hidden his strength before. The master is very calm, maybe he is the kind of person who protects the calf calmly.

Move forward and don't care too much about what others think!

Happy today, happy new year too

Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

I get people paying attention every day, but most of the time it's too late, so I don't comment. Come on, Qianlou! ! !

Emm... Is the ridicule of the male protagonist by passers-by going too far? Even if the hero's cultivation speed slows down, he still can't compete with passers-by.

I like Xiao Tiedan very much, she is like my sister, silly, sincere and sensible. However, I don't even have such a young and cute sister...

The part about senior sister is to force senior sister to leave, I understand, but this direct prank... Just watch.

Just watch 0.0 Quietly, it's about to cool down again

Exist? Why is my wife on the cover?

Hello welles, I saw that you said that you have collected this book. Unfortunately, your book review was swallowed by the system. I did not delete it. Recently, the system has swallowed various book reviews, 😅😅😅

Both fellows from Tongling, and also the author of Fight on the Street, come on, classical immortals are not easy to mess with.

I just found out that Qianlou has published a new book. I will collect it decisively and support it with small rewards. Qianlou's writing is still so good. I wish the new book a big hit, keep up the good work!