My Pure White Ship Girl

I am really enlightened now, so please give me some time to revise it, please? I will become a story master in the future. Please, please give me a little time.

First there is the ship girl and then there is the sky, and the deep sea is still in front of the ship girl; the ship c is the first to write, and the first division of the dimension is shown; it is inhumane to fight for positions, and you gain the right to be in anger; the governor Ou Huang controls ten thousand houses, and the admiral trains the ship to break the sky; the guard The pursuit of stars is out of reach, when will the graduation event be over? Sheng Jianfei has experienced hundreds of hardships, and the Kaohsiung hell is broken in dreams; the military police team cuts off dung, and the ring of true love has unlimited money; there are many blue bits next door, and there are more than 3,000 colleagues!

[Writer's Edition] Winter is coming, I will start writing from now on, and I won't stop until the end of time. I will not play games, go abroad, or slack off. I will not indulge in fun or pursue beauty. I will hang from the beam and stab my buttocks, and I will live and die here. I am a statue in the library and a ghost in the study room. I am the alarm clock that wakes up at dawn, the desk lamp that shines at midnight, the eyes that watch over books, and the soul that pursues knowledge. I devote my life and hope to writing, day and night, until I become a god.

There are many books with worse grades than yours, and you can add more than a dozen favorites every day. I have updated more than 60,000 words to only have 7 favorites, and the recommendation votes are all my own. I continue to write, but there is no guarantee of updates_(:з∠)_. So, please stick to it. You are pioneering now and have no reputation, so there are few people. Once you stick to it and become famous, everything will be much easier. And some novels written worse than yours can achieve good results. Why don't you give yourself more time and confidence? At least I'm very satisfied with your description of the ship girl's appearance and character setting. I don't think there's anything wrong with setting Ying Rui up to be a yandere, and that's what yandere should be like. If he can't accept it, just let him make a point and leave, and don't worry about it so much. It's best to present to readers what you most want to write. Don't deny your book just because of what some people say. It's normal for people to disagree.

Alas, when I saw this, I knew why I kept thinking about my grades. Let me talk about the previous one. I have already revealed that I am a ship girl, but there are still people who dare to tease a ship girl? ? The reason why the person was injured was because he kept harassing the ship girl. It was both sides' fault, right? Why is it all the ship girl's fault? Is Team Pie only responsible for catching the admiral? And Lexington is a place where you can obviously say that you have an admiral and identify yourself as a ship girl. This is a bit of a stretch at the end. Lexington's character emmmmm, I personally feel bad. Maybe it's a preconceived feeling. Lexington doesn't like to play tricks like this. Everything can be done easily. When you are tired, uncomfortable, or have something in your heart, she can make it better. She is a combination of mother and lover. She is never afraid of any challenges because she believes that the admiral will always have herself in his heart. This is the perfect secretary ship and a perfect wife. Alas, after reading the review, it turned out to be tj. But just write it down and send it out. I haven't seen a place to charge for it, which feels a bit pity.

The author doesn't know how to do activities 🤭

It's over, GG, give up on tj

It's over. This book is out of date. It's GG.

The book is quite good, but it skips too many chapters and seems incoherent. If it's not coherent, I don't want to read it.

Don't be salty. Keep writing.

Alas, Liangliang... I hope the author can continue writing. . . It has been kept on the bookshelf without being replaced.

Although I knew that I would be disappointed,,,, under the circumstances of subscribing, the author not only did not give up, but also learned the knowledge of writing. Although I am tempted now, I have no regrets about subscribing.

Dear author, please don't give up.

? ? ? What about the promised refill tomorrow?

Dear author, please don't give up.

The beginning is really like looking for a lost ship girl

This book is a bit cold, I was quite optimistic about it

I still have it on my bookshelf. If the author resumes updating one day, I will still support this book.

But to be honest, the author is really sorry for the reader who ranks first on the fan list. One thousand yuan in exchange for a tj

Okay, here's a cool song for everyone…Big Brother, Big Brother! ! Where's the boss! ! Please write down the lyrics and thank you!

There is only one ticket, the author is so miserable, hold it high

The score is much higher than mine... Well, of course I have no business at all╮(╯_╰)╭

I'll wipe it. Where's my comment? The author explains

It's like looking for a lost ship girl. Well, how can I put it? I feel that the reunion at the beginning is not as appealing as the small house written by Lava. Lava is really professional in persuading him to go back to the pit.

Why is it that the more I watch, the more I feel like I'm looking for XXX? ? 😳

After reading for so long, I finally thought it would be better to give some suggestions. Some people support that you should not care about other people's opinions, and you will get results if you persist more. I don't completely agree with this view, because unless you have your own outline, the more you write, the more you write. As a fully subscribed person, I held back my emotions and read it, and found that your biggest shortcomings are that you have no main quests, unclear power system, etc. Kanniang, you only focused on the appearance, character, and background description, but as the main body, you did it hastily. This will make people confused, and it will make people irritable after reading too much, which will lead to poor grades. You can check for yourself whether there are any problems with the causes and consequences of your work, whether the timeline is coherent, whether the little stories interspersed with humor are not enough, whether the mastermind behind the scenes has exposed any flaws, and whether the ultimate villain has been clearly explained. These can all reflect that your book will become a masterpiece. I also wish the author to improve his level to a higher level and write a book that will impress people 👍👍👍👍

Great book! It is a divine book that has run through China for about 5,000 years and covered millions of miles of China. It has shocked the past and the present, and is unprecedented. It reveals true feelings, is beautiful and delicate, has fragrant orchid fragrance, and has benefits all over the sky, making people salivate! It really should be: The country is about to perish, and the land is full of warships. Only the admiral can rejuvenate the country and bring peace to the country (there is something funny here)

I need a kiss from the author to get better

Chapter 13, when looking for Xianghe in Tiandu City, he was pulled by the ear by an old woman. After Fubuki made a joke to reveal his identity, there was only one line: "After informing Xianghe's address, he drove them away." Then the protagonist decided to go to Tianqi City. The reason why he went to Tianqi City. There is no explanation. In order for readers to better understand the plot advancement, you can directly write in the description "I informed Xianghe that he is no longer in Tiandu City and has gone to work in Tianqi City, etc.". The subsequent plot of preparing to go to Tianqi City seems natural and unobtrusive.

Please read it carefully and taste it before making complaints. The quality of the article is very high. It is difficult for the author to write. There are few chapters now. Don't draw conclusions prematurely. Those who make comments and make comments will do so at their own risk (funny)