Seek Longevity

By the way, if you start to argue after reading the first few chapters, I will delete it directly. I don't make money by writing articles. Thank you.

Oh, there is no male protagonist. I will collect it decisively. . .

Has the new article been released on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month? I only saw this one in the collection. I have basically never read the main article about Buddhists and nuns. Expect. . (•̀⌄•́)

Some books, if you keep them, they will disappear...

Chapter 29: A foundation-building monk wanted to kill the heroine, but he was saved by someone. The man wanted to kill the foundation-building monk. The heroine interceded for him, saying that he did it unintentionally and was raising a tiger for trouble. Holy Mother, the heroine is too disgusting. I abandoned the article.

After reading the previous chapters, it seems that the past is no longer the past, and the present is no longer the present. Nondescript and awkward.

The writing is good, but the title sounds like a romance novel

Is it over? I read the completed book above, but when I read the title of the last chapter, I felt it was unfinished and I didn't want to jump into the trap.

Two years! Renew! Renew! Renew!

I feel that the writing is too literary, and many things are passed without being explained clearly.

I just read it and I just want to say that the author, your writing is so awesome.

After reading a few chapters, the author's literary talent is good, but the fairy tales and martial arts articles are still easy to understand, concise and lively, which makes reading more pleasurable. There should not be too much psychological description. It is better if the fighting scenes are exciting and make people feel immersed in the scene. The plot does not drag on! ! I wish there were more fighting scenes, since this is a fairy tale after all! Here are some suggestions. I hope the author will write better and better, and I will continue to support him! 🙏🙏🙏❤️

I watched a few and I don't really like the heroine.

It's a bit awkward to read, with classical Chinese and vernacular mixed in.

It feels like a good article. When I first read this extensive introduction, I thought it was about a male protagonist, haha

The writing style is elegant and delicate, but some of the turns are too abrupt. Maybe it could be written slowly.

I saw some readers leaving comments on the chapter, but I didn't reply because I didn't pay attention at first, so I'll tell you a little bit here. First of all, thank you readers for their support and opinions. I have also clearly seen my shortcomings. It is my first time to write an article. I don't ask for perfection. I just hope that it can be completed and live up to the readers who have been reading. If I open a second book next, I am fully prepared for the first one, and I hope readers will like it. Thank you all!

Apart from me, everyone else has only voted for 3 months 😅

In fact, I shouldn't say this, but I still can't help but want to say that all the words and sentences in this book are original and have no source. I will mark them if they are quoted from other books, so I really feel sorry if I can't understand them. Also, this book is my first, and I wrote it as a hobby. I never thought about making any money, so I'm happy if you like it, and I won't force it on those who don't like it. Well, okay, finally I wish you all a Happy New Year!

The writing is very good and very few people read it. The title of the novel is not attractive, and it might be better to change the name. I feel like it would be better to remove the word "Mou Yi" and just call it "Eternal Life"

As for the plot, many readers may not understand it. It may be because one story jumps to another before it is finished. First of all, the article on cultivating immortals is a long story, so I try to lay down the foreshadowing in the early stage, and jump to different copies. The continuation and revelation of the story are like reincarnation, slowly revealed, so there are many places that many readers may not understand. I can only say sorry. When the mortals finish the book, all the cause and effect issues will be clear! ! 😊😊😊