Hunting Jianghu

Congratulations on being released. With a little thought, I wish you can ascend to godhood as soon as possible!

How to say it? I think the first chapter is not the right beginning. You can directly enter the plot of Wang Lie, and then intersperse stories about his life. Secret book, jade pendant... This routine is really..., And there are some typos... After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The plot is quite smooth, but the turning point and environmental description are a little abrupt. The details are okay, but did Wang Hu jump from the bed in the first chapter? Shouldn't it be on the bed? In my humble opinion, don't blame me if you don't like it.

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Book lovers who are in a book shortage are welcome to collect it first and then read it. Although there is only one update every day, there will definitely be no interruption, don't worry!

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After reading the first chapter, you chase and kill. This kind of opening is so cliche. I was so addicted to it. You might as well start it plainly. The author should not think that beating beans at the beginning will attract people to read. You think that you will not feel immersed in how you beat beans in the first few pictures, so the first few pictures at the beginning should be dull, so that we readers will be slowly drawn into it.

Reading this article has improved my knowledge, haha. The writing is very good, and the plot is also first-rate. It is not easy to write a new book, so I will collect and support it first. Jiangling Sanren came to visit with his humble work "Secret Techniques of Western Hunan to Break into the City". Cheer up and wish the festival a great success.

This little bun, okay, the little leopard is from the same system as the little gray in Zhu Xian. He looks very familiar.

Thank you for the recommendation!