A Journey of Planar Invasion

After watching it, I just feel like a loser. I have someone I love deeply but I still think about another woman. I am dishonest in farming. I was almost beaten to death but I later forgave him. Haha, I don't know what to think. It felt good at the beginning. It's the type I like to watch. The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist's ability to humiliate is not bad. Why not be obscene and develop, don't waste it!! Can't you study hard if you are being plotted by others? It's acceptable to be a little more suppressed in the past, but it's just too suppressed and you keep suppressing it. . . . So I still thought I wouldn't talk about it until I finished reading it. After reading it, it's still the same. . So byeﾉBye~ Also, this is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you! 🙂

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I don't understand the gap between the power of technology and martial arts. I can't see it after watching the fight. It's boring. There's also the gap in martial arts levels. It's not clear. It's fake. You'd better write about the politics of the Three Kingdoms or something like that.

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After reading it, I found that the plot is good, but the writing always feels clumsy, which is a bit awkward. Furthermore, the protagonist is in a passive state from the beginning of the article, and the subsequent interactions with several people are in a suppressed state. Even though the author stated that the protagonist is a hero who knows current affairs, but after entering the online novel, I found that there was no excitement, and gradually felt that it was boring, so I gave up.

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It can be said that the protagonist learned a lesson from the beginning, and he also learned a lesson when he was beaten by the rabbit. The protagonist and the princess fought with those two people and were repelled. They should also know that the weak are a drag. After inviting those two people, the protagonist should wait in the back. The god level is already at the bottom. If you continue to join in, you will be stupid and the plot is too stiff. It looks so awkward.

I want to complain about it. There are so many god-level and demigod-level people fighting. The protagonist wants to die by relying on them. An ordinary person can do this! I don't understand! At this point the book is dead.