Online Games: Apocalyptic Battle Royale

As the title says, the subject matter of the novel is very interesting, but the author's writing skills are obviously not good enough. The dialogue between two people is okay. When there are more people, the dialogue becomes chaotic, and you don't know who said the words at all. And there are too many typos, or too many wrong sentences and unclear sentences, especially Chapters 4 and 5, which are very messy, just like the beginning of the novel. It's really hard to watch. It seems that the author is a newcomer, so the requirements should not be too high, but in fact some requirements are still very low. Be careful when writing, and check again after writing. It is inevitable that there will be typos and sentences, but if there are too many, it will be very influential and make people upset. It is easy for readers to have no idea of ​​​​reading, and the abandonment rate will be greatly increased. The author had better change it, and do it quickly, otherwise the readers lost during this period will not come back for a long time.

Name: Qingxin Age: old monster Origin: The original reborn person who escaped from the Lord God Occupation: Swordsman The so-called three views explanation First: The heroine is a person who only wants to win the destination under the master god. She has experienced too many things. For her, those things have nothing to do with her. Why do you meddle in so much? Even if the heroine is the only one in the world, she will be able to survive and not become a madman because she is used to it. Second: The heroine's character itself has an abnormal outlook on life. Her teammates Gu Yihang, Li Huan and Li Xun are just used as numbers. [Of course, I will become a real teammate in the future. As for why we talk about Jiajia and Anan, it's because Anan is the heroine's previous life, and Jiajia is her former best friend. However, it does not mean complete belief, only a little kindness. Third: Han Xue helped the heroine. The heroine clearly knew that something was wrong, but instead of telling her, she accepted Han Xue's help hypocritically. Please note one thing. Han Xue has a prophet profession, and it was explained at the beginning that she wants to become an alliance with the heroine. However, for the heroine, Han Xue stepped forward to get benefits from her. Although he has made an alliance in advance, since the other party has helped him, it is appropriate to help him as well. For example, in ten years I will become the richest man, and a man with the ability of prophecy finds me and wants to be my good friend. But I know that I will become the richest man. I understand that you want to get benefits from me by approaching me. Will I treat it with peace of mind? This is simply impossible. Fourth: I think the most important point is that when the end of the world comes, people's personalities will change. Everyone has only one life, who will willingly give his life to die. Of course, this means that most, but a few people are willing to sacrifice their lives just to save the people they believe in.

Very interesting, keep it up, bookmark it, and recommend it! 🤝

I have always supported you, keep writing, your writing skills have improved a lot!

Let me go, is this the Tianyu game script?

Calm down, don't be anxious, it makes me confused.

Just watched it, not sure if it looks good or not

In fact, I really like the setting of the story, but when I read it, it felt a bit confusing. The heroine felt that there was something wrong with this and that, but the author didn't explain it. .

What the hell, the front doesn't match the back!

The author has a glassy heart and refuses to scold the author after reading the ending. Hey guys, see you in the next book.

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Not bad, but I finished reading it in one day! This is a time to read novels instead!

Oh my god, how did the author choose the names of so many celebrities?

Isn't that Chen Nan the male protagonist?

It's a female channel. . . I thought it was from a male channel. . .

Chen Nan, your wife is about to be abducted.

🤫I'll update if you don't catch a cold. The pace is too fast.

3*3*8*0*7*3*6*6*5*1

The heroine is sick. That Gu is not the only one who knows that something is wrong with her. Why not kill him? He is not an irreplaceable person.

Don't delete the video, I repeat it again, please don't delete the book review!

It's a pity that the male protagonist left first.

The author has a problem, that is, after writing each chapter, he will take a quick look at it to see if there are any typos, and then update it directly. However, after the update, there will still be typos. So, make a post here. After each chapter is updated, I will take the time to revise the report again.