Devour the World, Evolve

In order to celebrate not burning into SB, I will reward you with one

Let's talk about your feelings about this book~ 1. From the current point of view, although every book has a halo, the pig's feet will be beaten to death halfway through the book, and the whole book will be finished. But at present, I still feel that the aura of pig's feet is too strong, a bit like the style of the old days when pig's feet were all over the world, but now readers are more interested in them, and fewer and fewer people like this style. So I still think it needs to be weakened. The X virus is already very buggy, and I even got eyeballs in the novice village in the early stage. 2. The fight between pig's feet was not thrilling enough, and it was too pretentious (such as the auction). 3. The over-connection of the plot is unnatural, from the auction to the exam to going home. Although there is a connection between the explanations, it feels like the several plots are forced together. 4. I have always been confused about Tianqi's recruitment. So many people come to this small town just to get a quota to participate in the trial? There are so many more people working here than there are people to recruit? The elimination rate of trials is not taken into account. These are some of my simple feelings. I hope it helps. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better!

This idea is good. According to the general routine, after encountering the beads, you should enter a fantasy world, go through some hardships and tests, and gain some abilities, such as enhanced mental strength or some new skills. However, it seems that the author's routine does not seem to be the same at the moment, haha~ I am a little hopeful! However, this kind of chapter should not be too long. If you play the dungeon for too long, you will easily forget the main mission 😁

The broadcast WX number is: qidianguangbo The Chinese pinyin of Qidian Broadcasting. If you like this book, you can add a broadcast, reader group, etc. I won't do it for now. The main thing is to code the words first. The best thing is to write well.

You can comment in the book review section. The book review section is gathering dust. Doesn't your conscience hurt? I have experience in irrigating and can also add semen. This is a dream life

Is there my trumpet number here?

It's a bit watery. The combination of this virus and cultivation is completely unsatisfactory. The writing of cultivation is too boring, making the virus seem useless.

I really want to give every author a golden finger for writing novels! (#`㉨´)Convex

I still feel that my ability to control multiple lines needs to be improved. Although I can't tell what's wrong with the scene transition, it still feels a bit unnatural. In addition, although a good master like Cui Jin has been explained before, the relationship between him and me is a bit fake~ I have only met him a few times in total? Will the relationship between the two be like this? I'm not saying it can't be done, I just feel like it was written to write about Choi Jin. Another point is the ability of viruses to copy items. If copying more advanced items, would it be more reasonable to require raw materials and then have the ability to transform the raw materials? After all, depending on the energy of the spirit stone alone, the energy required is a bit too much from the mass-energy formula, right? Also, as a student, the teacher teaches so seriously, shouldn't I also learn some real skills instead of just relying on golden fingers?

That love-forgetting water must be useless, right? Only for making templates~~